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My mom reccomended this book to me, because I needed a memoir to read for my honors english class. I honestly tore through it in about three days. It was such a good book and it was so inspiring to me. Jeannette Walls (the author) tells the story of familys life as a basically homeless one.
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Once again Texy I am loving this story mucho.
I like this sentence: Annette shot me a look as if to say, "I'm going to murder you and your kids.".
And this one: The stars twinkled brightly and the moon glowed with gaudy ambition.
Can't wait for more!!! ♥
i like it!! a few suggestions though; cut out some of the dialaouge and replace them with maybe some more descriptions, they add some kick to any story! but overall a great job!
p.s. i want to know what Annette needs help with =P
oh Texy I really wish I could have been there for you then. But remember Im here for you whenever you need me ♥
anways that is a beautiful story. i loved it the language and the details were amazing! beautiful dear just beautiful♥
ok so a little story i was doing for my english class, inspired by a Sufjan Stevens song. comments and criticism is most welcome, athough we all know flaming is a no-no. (>.<) so have fun lovelies!♥
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I counted the snowflakes as they...
I know that advice from random people around the world isn't exactly the best to take but, please, don't kill yourself. As Venom said take up hobbies. And i implore you to take up writing. What you wrote even with it's dark undertones and overall distaste for life was...beautiful. Not just...