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    Fanfiction ► Artificial Flavoring - Needs lots of work D: So help me

    Uh, do I care? There's no other forum for writing soooo where am I supposed to post it? Yeah, people do it all the time. FYI That didn't help me.
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    Fanfiction ► Artificial Flavoring - Needs lots of work D: So help me

    I need crit and I need it to be good. Don't give me that "Nng, it's good but it sucks" BS. Just tell me what is good about it, what strikes you, what you loathe to the point of wanting to commit suicide. Do you like a line but think it needs less? More? Do you hate the whole poem because of...
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    Fanfiction ► Bittersweet Symphony

    Interesting. I like the writing style and the breaks in the diary entry. It could flow a little more smoothly, though. Other than that, good work.
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    Fanfiction ► Happily Ever After

    P-p-p-p-p-p-please Re-puh-lie I absolutely adore feedback <333333 ((My heart vibrates for it))
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    Fanfiction ► Loch

    Sparkalicious! That was awesome And you're always telling me your writing is crap LIES Keep up the good work babeh <3
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    Fanfiction ► Stolen Heart

    Wow, I really like it. It's an interesting idea, and I love how you made Sora into kind of a psuedo-villain, but you made it justified. Keep up the good work and post the next part soon please <3
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    Fanfiction ► Happily Ever After

    Thankies That's, like, the best complaint ever x3 But I do agree, I need to start making my oneshots just a bit longer
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    Fanfiction ► Happily Ever After

    I would love some feedback ::hinthint:: You know, FEEDBACK But thank you to Haku and Angelsinflight
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    Fanfiction ► Happily Ever After

    Title: Happily Ever After Disclaimer: I only own, like, a bag of animal crackers and a cool Resident Evil 4 poster Warning: Just a whole lot of suckiness Pairing: None He always thought--more like hoped--they would have Hearts some day. He wished for it, and believed in it, and breathed it; it...
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    Fanfiction ► Bittersweet Symphony

    Wewt! That was insanely good. I love your writing style and the vocabulary you used. Please continue, I'm eager to see what will happen, etc. <3
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    Fanfiction ► Darkness Surrounding

    Leave meh feedback? ;_; Pleease?
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    Fanfiction ► Darkness Surrounding

    Title: Darkness Surrounding Disclaimer: Dude, I really don't think a retard sitting on her laptop is going to own a popular video game. Warnings: Er..A psycho Riku and a whole lot of notmakingsense-ness Pairings: Noooone. Sometimes Sora could find him sitting in the pitch dark all alone. He...
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    Fanfiction ► Secret Heart

    xD Thank you, I'm happy I can make someone like a style outside of their usual reading material. But hey, I do write gore and I love blood, so if I write something I think you might like I'll send it to you, okay?
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