♥♥♥Trinity Critiques: A Tribute to the Trinity♥♥♥
Chapter 2
Trinity #2 and Other Issues
Sora: After a nice, relaxing rest, we are back in action! Hello people and welcome back to…
Goofy: TRINITY
Donald: CRITIQUES
Sora: A Tribute to the Trinity
Sora: Yes, so now Donald, Goofy, and I move on to Trinity #2! We actually made it!
Donald: That’s right! So expect more action packed trinity talk!
Goofy: Uh, aren’t we using –action- a little too much?
Sora: -looks back- We are?
Goofy: Well, maybe not.
Donald: Anyway, so let’s get this commentary into action!
Goofy: Donald?
Donald: Arrrg, ACTION ACTION ACTION action…
Sora: -wide eyes- Okay, while Goofy calms Donald down, I’ll answer the reviewers’ questions. Yep, that’s right! 2 people reviewed our story! Right on the 1st chapter! Isn’t that great?
Goofy: Sora, you’re getting a little too happy.
Sora: Goofy, who’s the boss here?
Goofy: Uh, whoever is paying the rent?
Sora: And who is?
Goofy: …You?…
Sora: Yes. Thank you. Now let’s reply to the reviewers!
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♥♥♥(Reviewers’ Corner)♥♥♥
Sora: I love new sections. So first, -Arcana-X- will put in the response to the reviewer’s review. After she’s done, us 3 will say whatever we want to say. Gotta love Freedom of Speech, right?
Allstargamer- Yes. When I got the idea, I was like OMG how did I make this? Then I gradually began to like the idea and stuck with it. Thank you for enjoying it!
Haku- So very, very true…Thank you for reading!
Sora: That’s all?
-Arcana-X- Yes. Why? Do you want to say something?
Sora: As of a matter of fact I do!
-Arcana-X- You just did.
Sora- But…these are our fans!
-Arcana-X- You need more than that to earn people’s trust. Now begin the session!
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♥♥♥Trinity #2♥♥♥
Color: Blue
Location: Near the World Exit Door in Traverse Town, 2nd Trinity activated
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Sora: Okay, here’s a little message on the time the trinity is activated. (looks up)
Donald: Yeah, for example, the trinity we are talking about now, it doesn’t have to be the 2nd trinity activated.
Goofy: It’s just the general idea when we say that order.
Sora: Just something to keep in mind so you don’t get confused. So, let’s critique this one.
Goofy: HYUCK! I thought this trinity was pretty good. We got many items-
Sora: And loads of munny!!! -GLIMMER- OMG, Leon just gave us a measly 100 munny in the beginning. We can’t buy anything, not even 1 potion!
Goofy: Sora, it’s the thought that counts! Besides, you earned some hi-potions from Kairi and Aerith gave you one.
Sora: Yeah, I guess…hey, wait! How do you know Kairi gave me some potions? Even I didn’t know they were hi-potions! I never told you guys!
Goofy: -shifty eyes- Um, Jiminy wrote it.
Sora: WHAT! OMG what else did he write in his secret journal? –Runs away to find Jiminy Cricket-
Donald- WAK!! We’re friends right! We should NEVER EVER keep secrets away from each other! Is anyone listening to me!?!
Goofy: SORA! IT WASN”T SECRET!!!
Donald: -jumps up- OKAY, now I have control of the table! Yes, Traverse Town’s a monopoly.
Goofy: -SIGH- There he goes again…
Donald: Well, it was! It was the only place to buy the new weapons, replenish stuff, you know? In Kingdom Hearts 2 at least we saw moogle shops and there were more places to buy and synthesize. But in Kingdom Hearts 1, nooo! The moogles just couldn’t think of the idea to put holograms of themselves and we had to cross from Hollow Bastion to the Synthesis Factory and wow did you see that man who we saw at the 3rd district’s door as well? He was sooo confusing. Anyway, WAK!!! What happened to you!
At this moment, Sora sits back in his chair, with a black eye.
Sora: Any points?
Goofy: Nope. Donald’s rampaging time came a minute ago.
Donald: O _ O I ask again, what happened to you?
Sora: Trinity Trouble –irony-. Well, I see you have made one single point, made by me.
Goofy: Donald said that Traverse Town is a Monopoly.
Sora: The game or vocabulary term?
Donald: That was just a diversion! WAK!!
Goofy: Well how about it’s easy to find? You just walk up to the World Exit door and DING! You’ve just found a trinity!
Sora: That’s good! How about there’s no heartless around it?
Donald: YEAH! IT’S SO ANNOYING TO FIGHT THE HEARTLESS AND THEN ACTIVATE THE TRINITY!!! For instance, remember that postcard on the balcony in the 3rd district?
Sora: I totally agree with Donald. For example, in Deep Jungle, there’s that blue trinity on that ledge near where Jane and Terk were hiding. There was A TON of heartless in that area. A TON. And Donald, this is a TRINITY forum. Not a postcard forum. You can make one if you like too.
Donald: Sure I would if you let me…
Goofy: WELL, it was good it was in the 1st District. There were lots of chances to get Power Shards, do you know?
Sora: Maybe? There were?
Goofy: You didn’t pick them up, did you.
Donald: One point for me!!! –points his wings at him-
Sora: Actually, that trinity kind of gave me a sad feeling.
Donald: How?
Sora: Well, we were like the best place in the universe for the first time. Well, maybe not in the universe, maybe the whole…
Goofy: Kingdom Hearts Universe?
Sora: Yeah. Too bad Traverse Town is gone in KH2. I still miss it now. It felt like that when we activated the trinity. It was like an omen of leaving. Do you think it’s still in the End of the World?
Donald: So there’s a bad point there. (doesn’t care at all)
Goofy: Um, well it was near where we first met, right?
Donald: YEAH! Where I taught Sora fire and you taught him Dodge Roll!
Sora: Well, technically, it wasn’t there, but I’ll take it. Especially since Dodge Roll is like the most useful ability ever!
Donald: HEY! How about Fire?
Sora: That too –ponders-. Magic is the most greatest milestone in a life. –Reassuring himself-
Donald: -shakes his head- That’s all you can think of?
Goofy: Even the grammer’s wrong.
Donald: OH YEAH! WHY DIDN’T I THINK OF IT?
Sora: What?
Donald: Trinities are like flowers. Not have all the petals and it’s not that beautiful!
Sora: Have you joined the Poetry Club, because that was really good!
Goofy: Uh, wasn’t it a metaphor?
Silence
Sora: Goofy, I had enough with your smart aleck comments. Any more and you’re off.
Goofy: But…
Sora: NO
Goofy: But…
Sora: NO
Goofy: But…
Sora: NO
Goofy: But…
Sora: NO
Goofy: But…
Sora: NO
Goofy: But…
Sora: NO
Goofy: But…
Sora: NO
Out of Breath Goofy: Okay.
Sora: NO…what?
Goofy: I’ll stop.
Sora: -laughing- Goofy, that was a joke, pal!
Donald: See? Without 3 of us, the trinity wouldn’t have worked!
Goofy: Yeah. If Ariel, Tarzan, Peter Pan, or Beast was there, it wouldn’t work.
Sora: So, it was a trinity that can be activated without switching party members?
Donald: Yeah. But, what I meant was that we all should be there. Shouldn’t that be for all trinities?
Sora: Hmm, you’re getting on to something.
10 min. later…
Sora: AH HA! A Palindrome! Whoops. AH HA! Let’s make a list of stuff that can go onto all the trinities!!!
Donald: WOW, Sora. Look who’s smart. –very sarcastic-
Goofy, Yeah, I’ll get another piece of paper. –goes to get a paper-
Sora: Okay, while Goofy’s out, Donald, can you get a salty-sweet ice cream bar?
Donald: Sure…-goes to Uncle Scrooge’s Ice Cream Refrigerator around the corner-
Sora: Now, a little peace and quiet. Let’s score this trinity.
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♥♥♥Scoring♥♥♥
Sora: We’re back again!
So now you know the drill. Let’s do it!
Good- Loads of munny and potions
(Sora)
- Easy to find
(Goofy)
- No Heartless around
(Sora and Goofy)
-One that can be activated without any switching of party members
(Donald)
Bad- Near the place where we leave Traverse Town/ Sad moment (Sora)
Score: 9.1/10.0
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Sora: The score’s pretty fair, right?
Goofy: HYUCK! Yep.
Donald: Why are our names there?
Well, I think I’ll start a little…competition between you guys.
Sora: Hi, -Arcana-X-! But why all of a sudden?
You really need some motivation here! Only 1 BAD point? Though I do support the idea of an All Trinity list…
Goofy: Donald lost his bad criminal mind.
Donald: HEY!! You’re the one who made Sora repeat himself a gazillion times!
Sora: So, it seems I’m winning…
Donald: Oh no you don’t! Next chapter I’ll get the most points!
Sora: It’s on! Wait, what’s the prize?
Um, a picture of…trinities?
Sora and Donald are unavailable now.
Goofy: Well, I guess I have to say the goodbye now! Good night all!
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♥♥♥(Author’s Corner)♥♥♥
Wooo! Second chapter is up already!
Seriously, I’ll have a little competition between the trio. The stats will be listed at the bottom as well as an All Trinity Are Affected List at the end.
By the way, Sora annoys me to no end.
-Arcana-X-
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♥♥♥Score Board♥♥♥
Today
Sora: 2
Donald:1
Goofy:2
Overall
Sora: 4
Donald: 3
Goofy: 3
In Lead: Sora!!! He wins a free drawing of….trinities?!
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What Sora and Donald Were Doing When Goofy Said Goodbye…
Sora: I will win!
Donald: Yeah right! I’ll win!
Sora: Are you sure? Who’s in the lead?
Donald: That’s because you’re human!
Sora:…What?…
Donald: Gotcha.
Sora: Grrrrrrr….I’ll get that picture!
Actually Sora did…
Donald: -looks up- WHAT!!!!!!!!!!
Sora: -does the victory dance stolen from Leon/Cloud-
Yeah, he did. He gets a picture of trinities since he is the winner of the day.
Donald: It’s not overall?
Well, these are small prizes. At the end, I’ll give the biggest, greatest trinity prize.
Donald: I will win!! Ha HA!
Sora: NO…I will!!!!
They’re at it again…If you don’t know, Goofy said the goodbye.
Sora: wh…what…WHAT! I’m supposed to say it –cries infinitely-
Donald: I WIN!!!
Sora: No.. that’s future tense. It is I WILL WIN!
Seriously, I will misuse my author privileges to make Goofy the winner if you both DON’T STOP!
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Donald: I’ll WIN!
Sora: I’ll WIN
Well, that’s what happened. We’ll keep the black eye a secret!
Sora: But that t-
Gee Sora, you’ll just give the answer away? Shameful…
Sora: OK! Thanks people for reading up to here! Added to this its 9 complete pages! And I sooo don’t annoy you.
Do too.
Sora: DO NOT!
