Ok,this is my First Fan-Fic,I wrote it some time ago,but took a 4 month break from it,and i'm just now writing again,so,since most people here are so sickingly honest,I decided to put it here XD
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2840343/1/
Please leave a review on FF.net,and please be 100% honest,your true opinion,thats why I put it on here>.>,but please,no flaming,and if possible,I would like to know if there is anyway I can improve,that would be greatly aprecciated,also open to tips and suggestions!
Thanks for reading.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2840343/1/
Please leave a review on FF.net,and please be 100% honest,your true opinion,thats why I put it on here>.>,but please,no flaming,and if possible,I would like to know if there is anyway I can improve,that would be greatly aprecciated,also open to tips and suggestions!
Thanks for reading.