Cigarette Box Laced With Nitroglicerine

[Bliip]

V.1

V.2

Could i get a little cnc? not sure about this one

 

[Amphetamine]

The colored version is better than the black and white, and the little clipping mask of her lips should probably go.

 

[KB]

Minus border, minus lips clipping mask, cut text, PLUS sharpen. Voila.

 

[Bliip]

thanks to both

but c'mon ppl, 60some odd views and 2 comments?

 

[Salty the Hero]

Shit happens a lot.

Take out the text, clipping and border, add some contrast, give it a somewhat strong lightsource around. Maybe add some minor smudging too.

 

[Bliip]

V3, a bit better?

 

[Salty the Hero]

Waaay too oversharpened .

 

[Bliip]

ugh, i give up w/ this one.

new thread up...