Okay.....I haven't wrote fanfics like for 2yrs(on another site)but now I'm back & this will be my FIRST fanfic on this forum...so take it easy. If it sux,I'll stop, but if u ppl like,I'll continue. This has NOTHING to deal with KH & ALL characters belong to me so NO COPYING....this is based on a manga I made recently but I'm writing it in fanfic form so enjoy.....^_^
Chapter 1 ~
I didn't realize where I was before.....until I saw nothing but the night sky & darkness surrounding my side of town in New York. I had a rush of emotion run through me as I stood on top of a building...& below me were people,who were cloded in crowds,whispering secrets here & there.... & of course...my brother. Looking down at him,I thought of him as a fool,smiling at me with that I'm-the-cool-guy look. Moron,standing there like an idiot! Who does he think HE is?! There's a black-out in the city & he just stands there....doing nothing.But suddenly,there was an explosion down below & the city people were terrified.
"What the hell"Tai looks back.
Out of the corner of my eye,I see a dark figure approaching my brother, it has no shadow....no light in it.
"I knew this would had happen...caught you off guard,huh Tai?'
"Who the hell,....how do you know my name?!"
"I know......your Sister....."
And he vanishes....out of thin air just like that,to be only standing behind me, with his long cloak, whipping in the wind.He continues with his sentence...
"Right.....Kitsune?"
"Don't you dare use that name....only my friends are aloud to,you're NOT my friend..."Gosh,I can feel him getting closer to me,I can almost feel his breath...while he twirls around the ribbon on my neck.
"But I thought we WERE friends Kitsune, heh. That's such a cute name"
"I said don't call me that...leave me alone...." He unties my ribbon,which swirls around his finger in place & he whispers "oh....I will. Very soon.."
And that was it....before I knew it I was flying in thin air,my feet floating off the ground,a rush of wind tangling through my hair.....trying to catch my breath...but nothing helped....nothing CAN help....not when...
...your falling off from a building.
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THUD!
.....silence. That's all I heard until....."BZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzz".......I found my self laying on the floor...Uh.....It's 5 o' clock already?I turn off my buzzing alarm clock...
Don't tell me....that was.....a DREAM again.....
~
Usually,these dreams aren't very new to me.....I have them all the time, but the one last night, was something....ODD. As I was walking to school, I noticed my friend, KiKi...waving at me across the street...she goes up to me. I've never realized before....but Kiki is very cute....in a friendly way. I always thougth she was way prettier than me, with her long straight high-light blonde her,her perfect blue eyes,white skin.....I even have to say her fashion sense goes way beyond mines...which mine is kind of dark & gloomy. She's always perky in the morning.
"Hiya Kitsune!"
"Hey..." I can hear her high-heels clicking along the rough concrete. She checks me out...giving me a,I-don't-know-what-to-say look.
"Uh...your wearing that outfit again...TODAY?"
Huh....what's wrong with it?" This is a first that she ever had to say something about my outfits.....I mean,this is the way I dressed...mostly a Roxy T-shirt,a black sweater,black leather boots, a plaid pink skirt.Damn,I'm sure I'm color coordinated?
"Weeelll...u wore that oufit LAST Friday & today's Monday & so like, that's like wearing an outfit 2 times in ONE week cuz everyone remembers that you wore that FRIDAY...& you know....." Man, she sure knows how to talk.....she can carry a conversation for hours on the phone...God,I'm glad I'm not her parents. But finally I butted in....
"Doesn't really matter what I wear to school anymore, we're geting school uniforms sooner or later.....actually,were getting them Wednesday!"
"Ewwww! I so protest those ucky yucky uniforms"
Sometimes she makes me laugh.
~
I enter my first period...which as soon as I enter & sit down, an obnoxious pest distracts me...it's Shinji. Am I the only one that's not perky in the damn morning?! Gosh. Shinji is actually my friend of course. I just call him a pest because he bothers me alot.....but he's a nice guy. He just stands there, smiling ear to ear. "Hey there Toki!" He does this weird wave at me.....Creep,get away "Uh...hi Shinji" I look down. He's not ugly or anything,it's just....
"So how was your weekend hon?"
"It was-it was okay...I guess" Stop it
The thing is, that,Shinji.....liked me MORE than a FRIEND. He confessed to me one day.....I mean,girls like him of course...as a GUY-FRIEND....but I was the one & only GIRL who brought him down. I only think of him nothing more ...nothing more than B/F's.For some reason he checks me out...looking up & down. I notice his light brown hair is longer than usual...I mean his bangs & his eyes changes color too...from Green to Blue. He's wearing baggy jeans & a polo shirt....ugh. "Hey.....didn't you wear that outfit already....ewwww! Is it even clean?!"Kiki is trying to keep from laughing behind his back.....
You can go to hell I smirk
Class is already starting & everyone from their groupies go back to their seat."CLASS HAS ALREADY STARTED!!!!!NOW SIT DOWN!!!!TOKI,SHINJI,KIKI!!!SIT DOWN OR DETENTION!!!!" Man, our History teacher is strict. She gives me a headache everyday....but then, outta the corner of my eye.....a figure appears.....
It is the person, who threw me off the building.....in my dream.
OCC: Well,that's about all. It kinda hard to tranfer a manga into a fanfic. I had to add so much. I don't think it came out very good....T_T
Review pleez:
Chapter 1 ~
I didn't realize where I was before.....until I saw nothing but the night sky & darkness surrounding my side of town in New York. I had a rush of emotion run through me as I stood on top of a building...& below me were people,who were cloded in crowds,whispering secrets here & there.... & of course...my brother. Looking down at him,I thought of him as a fool,smiling at me with that I'm-the-cool-guy look. Moron,standing there like an idiot! Who does he think HE is?! There's a black-out in the city & he just stands there....doing nothing.But suddenly,there was an explosion down below & the city people were terrified.
"What the hell"Tai looks back.
Out of the corner of my eye,I see a dark figure approaching my brother, it has no shadow....no light in it.
"I knew this would had happen...caught you off guard,huh Tai?'
"Who the hell,....how do you know my name?!"
"I know......your Sister....."
And he vanishes....out of thin air just like that,to be only standing behind me, with his long cloak, whipping in the wind.He continues with his sentence...
"Right.....Kitsune?"
"Don't you dare use that name....only my friends are aloud to,you're NOT my friend..."Gosh,I can feel him getting closer to me,I can almost feel his breath...while he twirls around the ribbon on my neck.
"But I thought we WERE friends Kitsune, heh. That's such a cute name"
"I said don't call me that...leave me alone...." He unties my ribbon,which swirls around his finger in place & he whispers "oh....I will. Very soon.."
And that was it....before I knew it I was flying in thin air,my feet floating off the ground,a rush of wind tangling through my hair.....trying to catch my breath...but nothing helped....nothing CAN help....not when...
...your falling off from a building.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
THUD!
.....silence. That's all I heard until....."BZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzz".......I found my self laying on the floor...Uh.....It's 5 o' clock already?I turn off my buzzing alarm clock...
Don't tell me....that was.....a DREAM again.....
~
Usually,these dreams aren't very new to me.....I have them all the time, but the one last night, was something....ODD. As I was walking to school, I noticed my friend, KiKi...waving at me across the street...she goes up to me. I've never realized before....but Kiki is very cute....in a friendly way. I always thougth she was way prettier than me, with her long straight high-light blonde her,her perfect blue eyes,white skin.....I even have to say her fashion sense goes way beyond mines...which mine is kind of dark & gloomy. She's always perky in the morning.
"Hiya Kitsune!"
"Hey..." I can hear her high-heels clicking along the rough concrete. She checks me out...giving me a,I-don't-know-what-to-say look.
"Uh...your wearing that outfit again...TODAY?"
Huh....what's wrong with it?" This is a first that she ever had to say something about my outfits.....I mean,this is the way I dressed...mostly a Roxy T-shirt,a black sweater,black leather boots, a plaid pink skirt.Damn,I'm sure I'm color coordinated?
"Weeelll...u wore that oufit LAST Friday & today's Monday & so like, that's like wearing an outfit 2 times in ONE week cuz everyone remembers that you wore that FRIDAY...& you know....." Man, she sure knows how to talk.....she can carry a conversation for hours on the phone...God,I'm glad I'm not her parents. But finally I butted in....
"Doesn't really matter what I wear to school anymore, we're geting school uniforms sooner or later.....actually,were getting them Wednesday!"
"Ewwww! I so protest those ucky yucky uniforms"
Sometimes she makes me laugh.
~
I enter my first period...which as soon as I enter & sit down, an obnoxious pest distracts me...it's Shinji. Am I the only one that's not perky in the damn morning?! Gosh. Shinji is actually my friend of course. I just call him a pest because he bothers me alot.....but he's a nice guy. He just stands there, smiling ear to ear. "Hey there Toki!" He does this weird wave at me.....Creep,get away "Uh...hi Shinji" I look down. He's not ugly or anything,it's just....
"So how was your weekend hon?"
"It was-it was okay...I guess" Stop it
The thing is, that,Shinji.....liked me MORE than a FRIEND. He confessed to me one day.....I mean,girls like him of course...as a GUY-FRIEND....but I was the one & only GIRL who brought him down. I only think of him nothing more ...nothing more than B/F's.For some reason he checks me out...looking up & down. I notice his light brown hair is longer than usual...I mean his bangs & his eyes changes color too...from Green to Blue. He's wearing baggy jeans & a polo shirt....ugh. "Hey.....didn't you wear that outfit already....ewwww! Is it even clean?!"Kiki is trying to keep from laughing behind his back.....
You can go to hell I smirk
Class is already starting & everyone from their groupies go back to their seat."CLASS HAS ALREADY STARTED!!!!!NOW SIT DOWN!!!!TOKI,SHINJI,KIKI!!!SIT DOWN OR DETENTION!!!!" Man, our History teacher is strict. She gives me a headache everyday....but then, outta the corner of my eye.....a figure appears.....
It is the person, who threw me off the building.....in my dream.
OCC: Well,that's about all. It kinda hard to tranfer a manga into a fanfic. I had to add so much. I don't think it came out very good....T_T
Review pleez:
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