You people wont stop whing you whiny whiny whiners!...so I've decided to throw ya a bone!...a small bone indeed....but a bone nontheless...MAJOR ANNOUNCEMENT TIME: I have decided to stall for time by...err....I mean... give you all....a preview of upcoming chapters! W00T!!!
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Its raining in the middle of a forest clearing and a silver haired boy is lying facedown in the mud. He rolls over but his hair is still obscuring his face. He gets up slowly but his hair has fallen over, obscuring his eyes. The scene abruptly switches to that same boy walking out into the middle of what looks like an old ruined courtyard. A girl is sitting on a throne on the other side of the courtyard holding a huge scythe similar to Marluxias...but its black, and much bigger. The boy stops and the scene abruptly flickers back to the clearing. The boy is now kneeling next to a small pond and it seems to have stopped raining. A teardrop fall onto the surface of the pond, rippling the tranquil surface. It switches back to the courtyard and the boy walks right into the center of it. He pulls out a pair of daggers and twirls them on his fingers. The scene switches back to the boy in the forest again and we get to see the reflection in the pond.(with all the scene switching...just think "Deep Dive") It's Reizo....but with SILVER hair? (
) The scene goes back to the courtyard again and Rewrite starts playing. (hehe) Reizo's cape blows in the wind and the shot switches to a close-up side view of the girls face. She has blue hair...and a fang coming out of the left side of her mouth...odd....She suddenly grins a fanged grin and gets up, revealing two large bat wings. Reizo and her suddenly rush at each other and Reizo is suddenly holding a large blue sword (its not really a sword...just look at the picture of Reizo. you can see it in the picture. it looks like its made out of pure ice.) They swing their weapons and end in a clash. (thats what my friends and I call it....I forget what the actual term is...y'all know what I mean....when the weapons...are held together...and....yknow....wow I suck at descriptions XD) The girls mouth is curved upwards in an evil smile. Reizo's is the opposite, with emotionless eyes. He breaks off the clash and swings sideways at her head. She blocks with the wooden part of her scythe and swings sideways at him. He flips backward and skids a few feet on his knees before pulling himself forward, jumping up, flipping once, and slamming downwards with the huge sword. She holds her scythe horizontally to block with the wooden part again. Reizo's teeth are gritted in anger...and probably strain... while the girl is STILL grinning, apparently enjoying this...and her hair is blown back suddenly, revealing her identity...Serene! Their faces are two inches away and suddenly the shot zooms out and points straight up, revealing Seth's face laughing evilly in the sky. (symbolism)
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yes it sucks I know...but...I'm still working on the other chapter and I dont want you all to forget my story T_T
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Its raining in the middle of a forest clearing and a silver haired boy is lying facedown in the mud. He rolls over but his hair is still obscuring his face. He gets up slowly but his hair has fallen over, obscuring his eyes. The scene abruptly switches to that same boy walking out into the middle of what looks like an old ruined courtyard. A girl is sitting on a throne on the other side of the courtyard holding a huge scythe similar to Marluxias...but its black, and much bigger. The boy stops and the scene abruptly flickers back to the clearing. The boy is now kneeling next to a small pond and it seems to have stopped raining. A teardrop fall onto the surface of the pond, rippling the tranquil surface. It switches back to the courtyard and the boy walks right into the center of it. He pulls out a pair of daggers and twirls them on his fingers. The scene switches back to the boy in the forest again and we get to see the reflection in the pond.(with all the scene switching...just think "Deep Dive") It's Reizo....but with SILVER hair? (
) The scene goes back to the courtyard again and Rewrite starts playing. (hehe) Reizo's cape blows in the wind and the shot switches to a close-up side view of the girls face. She has blue hair...and a fang coming out of the left side of her mouth...odd....She suddenly grins a fanged grin and gets up, revealing two large bat wings. Reizo and her suddenly rush at each other and Reizo is suddenly holding a large blue sword (its not really a sword...just look at the picture of Reizo. you can see it in the picture. it looks like its made out of pure ice.) They swing their weapons and end in a clash. (thats what my friends and I call it....I forget what the actual term is...y'all know what I mean....when the weapons...are held together...and....yknow....wow I suck at descriptions XD) The girls mouth is curved upwards in an evil smile. Reizo's is the opposite, with emotionless eyes. He breaks off the clash and swings sideways at her head. She blocks with the wooden part of her scythe and swings sideways at him. He flips backward and skids a few feet on his knees before pulling himself forward, jumping up, flipping once, and slamming downwards with the huge sword. She holds her scythe horizontally to block with the wooden part again. Reizo's teeth are gritted in anger...and probably strain... while the girl is STILL grinning, apparently enjoying this...and her hair is blown back suddenly, revealing her identity...Serene! Their faces are two inches away and suddenly the shot zooms out and points straight up, revealing Seth's face laughing evilly in the sky. (symbolism)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
yes it sucks I know...but...I'm still working on the other chapter and I dont want you all to forget my story T_T
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