Fanfiction ► Give me a name for this poem i made

[SoRa^]

I stand here...all alone
in the rain...
just waiting for the pain
to fall on me...
i couldnt see
the sun shining
through the clouds...
here it comes
one, just one mistake
and its all gone...
my life, my destiny, gone.

and give me feedback

sorry i haven't been active for a while lol (forgot that i joined again )... but im back now

 

[onewingedangel14]

Painful nothingness, I not very good at this, lol

 

[GuardianOfHearts]

Very nice.

Bittersweet anticipation.

 

[Krazy]

*One mistake

*Gone

*Loneliness(sp?)

btw, nice poem!!! reminds me of Riku.....

 

[jenova-absolute]

I think ur very good...unfortunetly,im not very
good on naming...ill try to make one up,though.

 

[SoRa^]

thnx

thnx for the nice feedback going to wait some more but y'all made good names

 

[saved_by_kairi568]

How about, "The Emptiness Inside"?

 

[Tre'Coolfreak13]

Hmm...How about...Lost hopes and destiny in the rain? Long title...Or...Dieing in the rain?

 

[Birimioo]

I got one if its not too late how bout "final destination"

 

[jenova-absolute]

''Destiny Obstruction''?Yeh.yeah....i knou it sucks,but
its just a suggestion.