Me sketch book

[XIII Nobodies]

Well, I decided to start doing some drawing about a week ago or so. I've not done much yet, and most of what I have done is a little.... well, let's just say I'm ashamed to put it on the web for the world to see.

Anyway, this is actually the first piece I drew, and surprisingly enough the best one. I might submit more at a later date.

http://unfiltered-n.deviantart.com/art/Aqua-KH-BBS-146340698

Obviously I need to work on drawing faces.:embarassed:

 

[Omni_VII]

Hey, not bad. However, her eyes seem a little too far apart and her neck is too thick. That said, this is pretty good for your first piece.

 

[Reverie]

It's actually not bad. The only real critique I have for you is to make the neck a little thinner.

 

[Lancelot]

Not too bad at all. My only advice would be to make the neck thinner, and bring the head down a bit to suit (in the future of course), and probably make the shape of her head a bit closer together, because at the moment, it looks rather wide.

 

[Raiko]

Yes its a good start, but do what the others said, but i feel that the straps going across her chest needs to be more shaped, by shading in the right places to create an illusion of the bands sticking to her.

 

[XIII Nobodies]

Thanks for the critique, guys. I'll admit, I was a little worried about trying to do shading. Clothing, especially, has never really been my strong point when creating the illusion of folds and creases. I think maybe I'll try practicing a bit with still life and see where that takes me. I'll also practice up on faces and necks on the side. XD

 

[Lancelot]

As a base, it's completely fine though. You should only add shading when you're really confident. A good way to help is to sketch a very light line around where you can see the shading, then just fill it in, and smudge it, if you want to.

 

[Sora788]

I dont think its bad at all ^__^