Ok this is my first fanfic so I will take constructive critiscism. Credit goes to Golden_x_Heart for inspiring me. Alright here it is!
-`~Chapter One The Dream~`-
A long time ago there was once a 14 year old boy named Brink who
lived on an island called Mystic Island. He had 2 friends, Sukki,
and Vexoraii. He was very happy on this Island of his, playing with
his friends, but he felt after a while that there was nothing to do
,no reason to be there, he felt none-existent in this universe that he
called home.
Brink walked across the seashores, looking at the horizon
overshadowing the beautiful, aqua, sea. He was thinking deeply about
things that had passed. When he had so much fun, playing games,
fighting with his dark brown wooden sword against his friends, and
many other things he had thought fun before. But all that seemed to
be nothing but memories. A dream of something that could never be
the same it was now. Nothing could fill the void. After a while he
got tired of walking circles over and over again, so he decided to
go to his treehouse. Inside the treehouse was 3 beds and a target
dummie. He laid on his bed, trying to remember how he actually had
fun doing those things that seemed so childish back then. His friend
Sukki came into the room. She had short, dark purple hair, that
matched her beautiful, aqua eyes. "What's wrong?", she asked."I feel
like there's something gone, something missing. I don't seem to find
anything he on this island that I haven't done before. Everything's
just the same thing, wake up get a coconut to eat, fight you guys in
practice etc. and my Mom and Dad haven't come back since I was 5.",
he said feeling very sad."It's ok, there's got to be something to do
around here. Cheer up. We'll do something different tomorrow. Trust
me. It'll all be ok." Sukki said, he pondered these words for a while
and there seemed to be a silence between them for quite a while when
suddenly Vexoraii came in, breaking the silence,"Ok guys it's getting
to where you can see the full moon tonight. Let's get to bed."Vexoraii
said not noticing they were in the middle of talking."Not just yet,
we're finding something to do tomorrow."she said. Brink pondered his
thoughts for a while, when he finally found something to do."I got
it! Let's go take a visit to the old, vacant volcano! It won't be
exploding for quite some while, so let's do it!"He said with great
excitement."Alright! But not tonight. We'll do it tomorrow!"Sukki
said, the boys nodded in agreement. They all went to bed, dreaming
wonderful dreams of tomorrow.
Brink, however, did not have something you would call a 'dream'. The
dream started with him climbing the volcano with his friends. When
they made it to the top he was so happy with himself, when suddenly
he fell in, the darkness started to get darker and darker until it
was pitch black, with nothing to see until he finally hit hardly.
Suddenly a huge figure of darkness came up and was about to squish
him, then he woke up.
"Hey, Brink, c'mon! Grab some breakfast and let's go!"Sukki said.
They all grabbed a coconut and started happily going up the
mountain when,"OH NO!!!!!"
To be continued.
-`~~`-
Tell me what you think.
I'll put up the next chapter once I get a post.
-`~Chapter One The Dream~`-
A long time ago there was once a 14 year old boy named Brink who
lived on an island called Mystic Island. He had 2 friends, Sukki,
and Vexoraii. He was very happy on this Island of his, playing with
his friends, but he felt after a while that there was nothing to do
,no reason to be there, he felt none-existent in this universe that he
called home.
Brink walked across the seashores, looking at the horizon
overshadowing the beautiful, aqua, sea. He was thinking deeply about
things that had passed. When he had so much fun, playing games,
fighting with his dark brown wooden sword against his friends, and
many other things he had thought fun before. But all that seemed to
be nothing but memories. A dream of something that could never be
the same it was now. Nothing could fill the void. After a while he
got tired of walking circles over and over again, so he decided to
go to his treehouse. Inside the treehouse was 3 beds and a target
dummie. He laid on his bed, trying to remember how he actually had
fun doing those things that seemed so childish back then. His friend
Sukki came into the room. She had short, dark purple hair, that
matched her beautiful, aqua eyes. "What's wrong?", she asked."I feel
like there's something gone, something missing. I don't seem to find
anything he on this island that I haven't done before. Everything's
just the same thing, wake up get a coconut to eat, fight you guys in
practice etc. and my Mom and Dad haven't come back since I was 5.",
he said feeling very sad."It's ok, there's got to be something to do
around here. Cheer up. We'll do something different tomorrow. Trust
me. It'll all be ok." Sukki said, he pondered these words for a while
and there seemed to be a silence between them for quite a while when
suddenly Vexoraii came in, breaking the silence,"Ok guys it's getting
to where you can see the full moon tonight. Let's get to bed."Vexoraii
said not noticing they were in the middle of talking."Not just yet,
we're finding something to do tomorrow."she said. Brink pondered his
thoughts for a while, when he finally found something to do."I got
it! Let's go take a visit to the old, vacant volcano! It won't be
exploding for quite some while, so let's do it!"He said with great
excitement."Alright! But not tonight. We'll do it tomorrow!"Sukki
said, the boys nodded in agreement. They all went to bed, dreaming
wonderful dreams of tomorrow.
Brink, however, did not have something you would call a 'dream'. The
dream started with him climbing the volcano with his friends. When
they made it to the top he was so happy with himself, when suddenly
he fell in, the darkness started to get darker and darker until it
was pitch black, with nothing to see until he finally hit hardly.
Suddenly a huge figure of darkness came up and was about to squish
him, then he woke up.
"Hey, Brink, c'mon! Grab some breakfast and let's go!"Sukki said.
They all grabbed a coconut and started happily going up the
mountain when,"OH NO!!!!!"
To be continued.
-`~~`-
Tell me what you think.
I'll put up the next chapter once I get a post.
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