I was hoping someone would tell me some way I could improve....but uh...ok. And If you didn't read all of Chapter 2, dont get mad at me if this doesn't make much sense....dont worry though. This chapter may be shorter this time.
Chapter 3: //:Welcome To The Underground://
All I could see was darkness, and I heard nothing. No shapes, nor figures, simply a black emptiness that had engulfed my very being. But my ability to think about these things confirmed that I was not in the real world. I was disconnected from everything....this dark emptiness was my self-conscious. I was not meant to stay here.....I had to return to reality. But this emptiness....it was peaceful. It seemed that the longer I stayed within this place beyond what is real, the harder it was to tear away from it. I felt no pain, physical or emotional, a simply soothing feeling. I began to wonder....was this the afterlife? It didn't feel like hell.....and there was no way this was heaven....so I must be somewhere inbetween.....No...I don't want to leave yet....Not yet. This peacefulness and nothingness.....I don't belong here....I strained every fiber in my being, trying to force myself awake. Wake up.....Wake up.....Wake up.....
.......Its not my time to die.......
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