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Hey everybody 
decided to try to make my first own fanfic, so thought I would make a Naruto fanfic since most fanfic are about KH. Also this is suppose to be a bit funny haven't entirely worked it all out yet, but I'm working on each chapter at a time. This is a time before Sasuke leaves and there all together still as a team 7. Lots of characters will be in here from the series. So here goes
Chapter 1
Naruto
(What a boring day, no missions to do) thought Naruto as he was walking around Konoha a.k.a the leaf village. Having been wandering around he spotted Sakura looking busy like she was headed somewhere.
"HEY Sakura!!" yelled Naruto. Sakura jump startle by Naruto, a hand over her chest breathing a little hard while saying "Naruto you baka you scared me".
"Sorry" said Naruto looking at the pink hair that Sakura had, secretly wondering if she dyes it or if she was really born with that color.
"Say Sakura I was wondering if your hair is really-" went Naruto without thinking as Sakura started to fume knowing what he was about to ask. "NARUTO!!!" yelled Sakura punching him in the face sending him flying.
Landing Naruto couldn't help but curse at himself for actually saying it out loud making Sakura mad first thing in the morning.
"s-Sakura you didn't have to hit me so hard all I was askin was-" went Naruto realizing he was about to say it again only to feel tension in the air Sakura turning around to look at him eyes blazing as he had sat up rubbing his head.
"S-Sorry Sakura, please don't hit me again" said Naruto standing now as Sakura looked at him. "Good" said Sakura as she calmed down facing away arms folded.
"So... Sakura what are you doing on your day off?" ask Naruto. As if it was something he said Sakura laughed nervously as she said "Oh... nothing just got something like a mission to do, so I better hurry can't be late".
Naruto having not totally paid attention heard the word (mission?) was about to ask what mission but she was gone. "What's up with Sakura today... she's acting really weird" said Naruto as he stood there alone again like he was when he was wandering around earlier.
"Hey Naruto" said Shikamaru having seen Sakura throw a punch at him sending him flying a few minutes ago but kept away until Sakura was done being her scary self.
Looking over he saw Shikamaru followed by Choji who was munching on chips like always.
"Choji, Shikamaru what are you guys doing here?" ask Naruto. Both looked at each other then said "Nothing just wander around, might see what everyone else is doing... I see Sakura sent you flying this time Naruto... so what did you do this time?".
Naruto feeling his cheek from where Sakura punch him laugh awkwardly, feeling a bead of sweat drop thinking (I was lucky Sakura held back or I wouldn't be standing here) while answering "Oh nothing".
"Munch" went Choji as if Naruto was a potato chip about to eat him, sending shivers through Naruto. "C'mon Naruto you know were not going to buy it, what did you do to Sakura?" said Shikamaru curiously.
"Alright, all I was asking was something about her hair" said Naruto. "That can't be it" said Shikamaru. "Yeah it was" said Naruto.
"No way can that be it ...munch.. you have to have done something to make her mad there are three things to make Sakura scary" said Choji finishing his bag of chips.
Shikamaru and Naruto surprised to hear Choji say this made them both wonder what could he possibly know that could make Sakura that scary when she's really mad.
"one you did something embarrassing to her, two you said something horrible about Sasuke, or three you said something to her like she's crabby" said Choji picking the third one.
"Say Choji ...how do you know all of this?" ask Shikamaru as Choji started to laugh. Naruto wondering what could be so funny wanted to know too. "Tell us!" said Naruto.
"Haven't you watched Naruto do all three of those things? It's so funny just to watch him do one of them and watch Sakura get mad sending him flying" said Choji.
Shikamaru nodded then said "I should have known that was the obvious answer, sigh Naruto how can you be so clueless to not know you do those three things".
But Naruto stood there shocked at Choji yelling "HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT? AREN'T I ALWAYS NICE TO SAKURA?". "Yeah but Naruto think about it, don't you remember that time you had that one mission Protect the Waterfall Village?" said Choji.
"What about it?" ask Naruto. "You step in dog.. you know what in front of everyone on your mission, Sakura was ranting all night over it to Ino" said Shikamaru. "Okay but what about that other time?" ask Choji.
"Oh yeah the one where you said something to Sakura about her choice in guys" answer Shikamaru.
Naruto having heard enough as Choji started to mention another time with Sakura that Naruto yelled "ALRIGHT ENOUGH! I know Sakura get's mad at me for things like that but can you please just stop now?".
Choji and Shikamaru burst out laughing "No this is too much fun, to bad we don't have a video of it" they both said. Mysteriously a tv with a tape appear began playing every moment Naruto did something to make her mad.
"WHERE DID THIS TV COME FROM!!" yelled Naruto smashing it to pieces with rasengan. Both Shikamaru and Choji were cracking up finding it funny.
"I"m leaving, I want to know what Sakura mission is" said Naruto fuming began to walk away. "W-Wait! bah ha ha Naruto what do you mean mission?" said Shikamaru.
"Sakura said she was on a mission" answer Naruto not bothering to turn around to look at them. "Strange there's no missions today, go see Ino maybe she knows" said Choji.
Naruto glared at them then left to go find Ino.
End
So guys what do you think of this Naruto fanfic? Good? Bad? Well I'll have a new chapter posted soon. So hope you enjoy this chapter.
decided to try to make my first own fanfic, so thought I would make a Naruto fanfic since most fanfic are about KH. Also this is suppose to be a bit funny haven't entirely worked it all out yet, but I'm working on each chapter at a time. This is a time before Sasuke leaves and there all together still as a team 7. Lots of characters will be in here from the series. So here goes Chapter 1
Naruto
(What a boring day, no missions to do) thought Naruto as he was walking around Konoha a.k.a the leaf village. Having been wandering around he spotted Sakura looking busy like she was headed somewhere.
"HEY Sakura!!" yelled Naruto. Sakura jump startle by Naruto, a hand over her chest breathing a little hard while saying "Naruto you baka you scared me".
"Sorry" said Naruto looking at the pink hair that Sakura had, secretly wondering if she dyes it or if she was really born with that color.
"Say Sakura I was wondering if your hair is really-" went Naruto without thinking as Sakura started to fume knowing what he was about to ask. "NARUTO!!!" yelled Sakura punching him in the face sending him flying.
Landing Naruto couldn't help but curse at himself for actually saying it out loud making Sakura mad first thing in the morning.
"s-Sakura you didn't have to hit me so hard all I was askin was-" went Naruto realizing he was about to say it again only to feel tension in the air Sakura turning around to look at him eyes blazing as he had sat up rubbing his head.
"S-Sorry Sakura, please don't hit me again" said Naruto standing now as Sakura looked at him. "Good" said Sakura as she calmed down facing away arms folded.
"So... Sakura what are you doing on your day off?" ask Naruto. As if it was something he said Sakura laughed nervously as she said "Oh... nothing just got something like a mission to do, so I better hurry can't be late".
Naruto having not totally paid attention heard the word (mission?) was about to ask what mission but she was gone. "What's up with Sakura today... she's acting really weird" said Naruto as he stood there alone again like he was when he was wandering around earlier.
"Hey Naruto" said Shikamaru having seen Sakura throw a punch at him sending him flying a few minutes ago but kept away until Sakura was done being her scary self.
Looking over he saw Shikamaru followed by Choji who was munching on chips like always.
"Choji, Shikamaru what are you guys doing here?" ask Naruto. Both looked at each other then said "Nothing just wander around, might see what everyone else is doing... I see Sakura sent you flying this time Naruto... so what did you do this time?".
Naruto feeling his cheek from where Sakura punch him laugh awkwardly, feeling a bead of sweat drop thinking (I was lucky Sakura held back or I wouldn't be standing here) while answering "Oh nothing".
"Munch" went Choji as if Naruto was a potato chip about to eat him, sending shivers through Naruto. "C'mon Naruto you know were not going to buy it, what did you do to Sakura?" said Shikamaru curiously.
"Alright, all I was asking was something about her hair" said Naruto. "That can't be it" said Shikamaru. "Yeah it was" said Naruto.
"No way can that be it ...munch.. you have to have done something to make her mad there are three things to make Sakura scary" said Choji finishing his bag of chips.
Shikamaru and Naruto surprised to hear Choji say this made them both wonder what could he possibly know that could make Sakura that scary when she's really mad.
"one you did something embarrassing to her, two you said something horrible about Sasuke, or three you said something to her like she's crabby" said Choji picking the third one.
"Say Choji ...how do you know all of this?" ask Shikamaru as Choji started to laugh. Naruto wondering what could be so funny wanted to know too. "Tell us!" said Naruto.
"Haven't you watched Naruto do all three of those things? It's so funny just to watch him do one of them and watch Sakura get mad sending him flying" said Choji.
Shikamaru nodded then said "I should have known that was the obvious answer, sigh Naruto how can you be so clueless to not know you do those three things".
But Naruto stood there shocked at Choji yelling "HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT? AREN'T I ALWAYS NICE TO SAKURA?". "Yeah but Naruto think about it, don't you remember that time you had that one mission Protect the Waterfall Village?" said Choji.
"What about it?" ask Naruto. "You step in dog.. you know what in front of everyone on your mission, Sakura was ranting all night over it to Ino" said Shikamaru. "Okay but what about that other time?" ask Choji.
"Oh yeah the one where you said something to Sakura about her choice in guys" answer Shikamaru.
Naruto having heard enough as Choji started to mention another time with Sakura that Naruto yelled "ALRIGHT ENOUGH! I know Sakura get's mad at me for things like that but can you please just stop now?".
Choji and Shikamaru burst out laughing "No this is too much fun, to bad we don't have a video of it" they both said. Mysteriously a tv with a tape appear began playing every moment Naruto did something to make her mad.
"WHERE DID THIS TV COME FROM!!" yelled Naruto smashing it to pieces with rasengan. Both Shikamaru and Choji were cracking up finding it funny.
"I"m leaving, I want to know what Sakura mission is" said Naruto fuming began to walk away. "W-Wait! bah ha ha Naruto what do you mean mission?" said Shikamaru.
"Sakura said she was on a mission" answer Naruto not bothering to turn around to look at them. "Strange there's no missions today, go see Ino maybe she knows" said Choji.
Naruto glared at them then left to go find Ino.
End
So guys what do you think of this Naruto fanfic? Good? Bad? Well I'll have a new chapter posted soon. So hope you enjoy this chapter.
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