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great chapter
Shoe phone..... I would have never thought of that. Can't wait for the next chapter!
coollllll!!!!!! more, more, more!!!
yay people like it
i cant think anything darn it!i hate writer's block
i like it good job.
keep trying dude, hey try kingdom hearts,a twisted life,it might give you an idea! 
I finally came up with a tiny something!YAY!
Ch.5 Sora Finally tells Kairi
Kairi is still in her hospital bed and Sora sitting in a chair next to it while the Selphie and Tidus look for the ring merchan and Riku fights his way out of a fan girl army.
Sora:Umm...Kairi can I tell you something?
Kairi:Sure you can tell me anything.
Sora: OK.Kairi I...
THWAP!a ceiling tile fell on Sora's head making a huge bump on his head.
Kairi: Oh my gosh!Are you alright Sora?
Sora rubs his head.
Sora:Yeah...I'm fine.Anyways Kairi I...
Nurse:Medicine time!
Nurse runs in and gives Kairi a cup of water and some aspirin.
Kairi:Just a second Sora.
Kairi takes her aspirin and swallows it with the water while Sora sits there hoping for no more interruptions.
Kairi: Ok go ahead Sora.
Sora:Kairi I...
Riku:HIDE ME!
Riku runs in looking like he ran through a bunch of pushes and hid in the dirt for a while.
Sora:NOT NOW!
Sora picks him up and throws him into a closet halfway down the hall from Kairi's room.
Kairi: Ok I don't think there will be anymore interruptions now Sora.
Sora:Kairi I...I love you.
Kairi stared at Sora for a bit and then kissed him on the lips and then pulled away.
Kairi:I love you too Sora.
They both blush and then Selphie and Tidus burst in when they were about to kiss again.
Both:WE FOUND HIM!
CLIFFHANGERS!I HOPE THIS WORKED GOOD!STUPID CAPS!
Ch.5 Sora Finally tells Kairi
Kairi is still in her hospital bed and Sora sitting in a chair next to it while the Selphie and Tidus look for the ring merchan and Riku fights his way out of a fan girl army.
Sora:Umm...Kairi can I tell you something?
Kairi:Sure you can tell me anything.
Sora: OK.Kairi I...
THWAP!a ceiling tile fell on Sora's head making a huge bump on his head.
Kairi: Oh my gosh!Are you alright Sora?
Sora rubs his head.
Sora:Yeah...I'm fine.Anyways Kairi I...
Nurse:Medicine time!
Nurse runs in and gives Kairi a cup of water and some aspirin.
Kairi:Just a second Sora.
Kairi takes her aspirin and swallows it with the water while Sora sits there hoping for no more interruptions.
Kairi: Ok go ahead Sora.
Sora:Kairi I...
Riku:HIDE ME!
Riku runs in looking like he ran through a bunch of pushes and hid in the dirt for a while.
Sora:NOT NOW!
Sora picks him up and throws him into a closet halfway down the hall from Kairi's room.
Kairi: Ok I don't think there will be anymore interruptions now Sora.
Sora:Kairi I...I love you.
Kairi stared at Sora for a bit and then kissed him on the lips and then pulled away.
Kairi:I love you too Sora.
They both blush and then Selphie and Tidus burst in when they were about to kiss again.
Both:WE FOUND HIM!
CLIFFHANGERS!I HOPE THIS WORKED GOOD!STUPID CAPS!
FINALLY U CAME UP WITH SOMETHING!and FINALLY SORA CONFESSED!and FINALLY RIKU ESCAPED! POST THE NEXT ONE SOON!
Isn't anyone else gonna comment?
oh yea,oh yea,you da best,you da best!!!!
yea great chapter keep it up no more wrighters block plz its bad for ur brain if u still have one
sora has finally lost his social dignity.....or was that riku.....hmmm............SPUTNICK!
....i dont remember you telling me you wrote a fanfic.... ; ;
i feel so rejected....nya.....me likey.....write more :3
i feel so rejected....nya.....me likey.....write more :3
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Yay I'm back but this is dead anyways and this might be my last chapter do to my short attention span.Sorry about not telling you about my fan fic.I didn't think it was that good at first.
Ch.6 Annoying Merchants(Part 2)
Selphie: Oh uh...were we interrupting something?
K and S: W-we weren't doing anything!
Tidus:Yeah sure come on we found the merchant!
Sora looks at Kairi worried about her and still slightly blushing.
Tidus: Come on Sora!
Kairi was blushing too and nodded letting Sora know she would be alright.
Sora: Ok lets go.
Selphie stayed behind and gave Kairi a thumbs up before running off with the other 2.
Meanwhile a nurse opens the door to a closet to find Riku unconcious.
Nurse: EEEEEEEK!ITS RIKU!HES MY PATIENT ALL MINE!
The nurse carries Riku off into a VIP patient room(kinda weird for a hospital to have that)
After finally gaining coniousness he realized he was tied to a chair by....
Riku: LITTLE PIXIES?!!?! WHATS WRONG WITH YOU ATNIHS?!
Atnihs:I'm the writer and I want to go out with a boom which means you are in trouble.MWAHAHAHAHAHAH!
In the flea market the merchant has been tackled down by Tidus,Sora,and Selphie.
MRM:AHHHHHHHHHHH!Don't kill me!
Selphie:How do we get mood ring out Kairi's eye?!
Furious Selphie was kicking the MRM in the manhood so hard that Sora and Tidus had to hold her back.
Selphie:LEMME AT HIM LEMME AT HIM!
The merchant was in so much pain they had to take him to the hospital anyways while everyone in the market stared at Selphie scared silly.
Thats all I got for now.
Ch.6 Annoying Merchants(Part 2)
Selphie: Oh uh...were we interrupting something?
K and S: W-we weren't doing anything!
Tidus:Yeah sure come on we found the merchant!
Sora looks at Kairi worried about her and still slightly blushing.
Tidus: Come on Sora!
Kairi was blushing too and nodded letting Sora know she would be alright.
Sora: Ok lets go.
Selphie stayed behind and gave Kairi a thumbs up before running off with the other 2.
Meanwhile a nurse opens the door to a closet to find Riku unconcious.
Nurse: EEEEEEEK!ITS RIKU!HES MY PATIENT ALL MINE!
The nurse carries Riku off into a VIP patient room(kinda weird for a hospital to have that)
After finally gaining coniousness he realized he was tied to a chair by....
Riku: LITTLE PIXIES?!!?! WHATS WRONG WITH YOU ATNIHS?!
Atnihs:I'm the writer and I want to go out with a boom which means you are in trouble.MWAHAHAHAHAHAH!
In the flea market the merchant has been tackled down by Tidus,Sora,and Selphie.
MRM:AHHHHHHHHHHH!Don't kill me!
Selphie:How do we get mood ring out Kairi's eye?!
Furious Selphie was kicking the MRM in the manhood so hard that Sora and Tidus had to hold her back.
Selphie:LEMME AT HIM LEMME AT HIM!
The merchant was in so much pain they had to take him to the hospital anyways while everyone in the market stared at Selphie scared silly.
Thats all I got for now.
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pixie dust!!!!!!!
they shall use pixie dust to make riku unconsious!!!
...i wanna be the nurse that found riku lol....
they shall use pixie dust to make riku unconsious!!!
...i wanna be the nurse that found riku lol....
Is it really good?
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