shana...SHANA...SHANA!...ok V2

[Neku99]

V2

cnc

 

[Unabomber]

Re: shana...SHANA...SHANA!

too bright overall.

too sharp in some areas.

oh and she has no mouth.

 

[KB]

Re: shana...SHANA...SHANA!

Magenta/green/YELLOW. EYESORE.

 

[Unabomber]

Re: shana...SHANA...SHANA!

Magenta/green/YELLOW. EYESORE.

my main problem with the colors is the yellow.

 

[Charlie]

Re: shana...SHANA...SHANA!

I'm trying to figure out a way to phrase this delicately.
But the tag's as ugly as all hell.

The colors don't have any chemistry, the stock you chose doesn't have a strong quality to it, and your effects are tangled to the point where everything's knocked off balance.

When you play with colors, think of elements.
Dark blue - navy blue - cyan - baby blue ; water
Brown - Maroon - Crimson - Red- Bright Red - Orange - Yellow ; fire, etc

don't jump all over the color wheel like that, baby cakes.
also, when choosing the picture to use in your tag, make sure it doesn't look choppy.


take away some of the effects, as well.

 

[Neku99]

Re: shana...SHANA...SHANA!

too bright overall.

too sharp in some areas.

oh and she has no mouth.

Magenta/green/YELLOW. EYESORE.

my main problem with the colors is the yellow.

ermm :/ yeah I need to fix that then

I'm trying to figure out a way to phrase this delicately.
But the tag's as ugly as all hell.

The colors don't have any chemistry, the stock you chose doesn't have a strong quality to it, and your effects are tangled to the point where everything's knocked off balance.

When you play with colors, think of elements.
Dark blue - navy blue - cyan - baby blue ; water
Brown - Maroon - Crimson - Red- Bright Red - Orange - Yellow ; fire, etc

don't jump all over the color wheel like that, baby cakes.
also, when choosing the picture to use in your tag, make sure it doesn't look choppy.


take away some of the effects, as well.

hmmm ok I'll work on version two that way I guess ._.

EDIT:

OK V2 is in the first post

 

[Charlie]

Good.
Now THAT is fucking sick, baby.

 

[Neku99]

lol thanks

 

[Charlie]

What effects are yours besides the lights?

 

[Neku99]

uhm what? I don't seem to know what 'effects' yer talking about. Are they like the soft light, gradients, C4ds or something?

sorry :/ not so much in the vocab yet

 

[Charlie]

Can you link me to the picture you used for her? I just want to see something really fast.

 

[Neku99]

The Stock? ermm ok

Link

 

[Unabomber]

much much better.

 

[Siren]

Crop it, maybe add a bit more black?

 

[Unabomber]

Crop it, maybe add a bit more black?

i'd crop a little bit of the bottom. maybe burn the side edges a tad for more depth.

 

[RoXS]

The colors look like hot diarrhea >.>
The effects are adequate, but the colors and the sharpness just pretty much mess everything else up.