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I wrote some things for some stuff.

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The cornflower men
they all line up in rows of 16
to take swigs of musty, ringing dusk
scarlet droplets staining fine-stitched suit
pinned bluebell bachelor's button

They're only boys, yet
they speak in precious foreign tongues
bring me trinkets
rolls of silk or
diamond slippers for my mud-caked feet

Coins pulled from places I didn't know I have
inside me boiling darkness
screaming kettle tea yawning early morning
scrape his tie 'n make the coffee

Kiss my fingers in the bedroom
and with your silver surgical scalpels
cut up my virgin ego bleeding out my future
you call it pus and drain it in your tin buckets
leave it to dry and make soft clay
in slowly singing sunward skies

crawl out the grave, tear off the roots reaching into your skin
shallow and smells of dirt
push and knead
push and knead
push and pull and knead and push and
now my child 'walk' and so you do
but we're orphans, hand in hand, two for price of one package deal
Gemini walkin'

'She's a southern belle,' they say, 'or was
Ghosts of debutante cryin' wolf'
The swanky blackbird ladies in water dress
Flower prints, white hems, broad brimmed hats,
lavender perfume pressed in double dabs to breasts and
other suspicious places

they remind you of summer
black dead and buried
when tale was all the rage
putting rose-red candles in your beard to keep the night out
just like Joanna taught us on the vinyl records
burning methane lights in tangles of ebony wire
so far so gone, was a housewife bud had those
old bones removed filled in with brackish cement to keep me sturdy

here, may I lose my life long lost refound
that I may have felt the crags of Appalachia put me out
that I may become a silent werewolf
spit-fire coarse-hair leave behind my
pie-crusts, silverware kitchens, bluebell whiskey bottles
flows like tumbling rivers
sloughing off west and
taking on water.
 

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Dug up this old thread so I didn't have to make a new one.

Here's a poem - criticism is very much welcome.

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"beekeeper."

wax-coated stillness of the room
the air tastes like dark honey

and I feel like maybe
I am an insect crawling

black-eyed, silver-winged
making music for the forties and

humming in the walls
sipping nectar

hexagon honeycomb, instead
or maybe not.
 

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Both poems are very lovely. The description is very well written. :]
 

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mother of vinegar.

at the top of the mixture:

reaching up and inside me
a thousand groping hands
the color of rotting apples, brown and brimming
(like my feet mud-caked
twist upwards ecstatic agony barbed wire bound)
salt-licked lips, pomegranate painted
planting violation kisses, caustic PDA
running tongues of pink thin flesh

I am unfamiliar with this one
this reflection of bleached skeleton bones
telling me to "eat something / be someone."

another spoonful:

no need to worry
all secrets will rise to the top
in time
 

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Yet another beautifully written poem. Keep up the good work!
 

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Thanks for the feedback so far, guys. Here's a more recent poem. I didn't bother staggering it for some reason ... eh.

daguerrotype.

windowpane nightmares cast
shadows that dance across my pallor
salivating things in the blackness
black hats, throw backs
gorging on
mouthfuls of green-pink entrails
wiping smears of my skeleton from chapped lips
thinking I wouldn't ever
notice because I'm
too busy, much
too busy with
all the things that i
fill my head with.

I remember
your silhouettes against the floorboards
the hungry whispers coming from behind your door
sodium yellow light leaking
into my brain
opening me up like a cadaver
Y-shaped incisions exposing the raw-fleshed child
inside me
inside of everyone

we are captured in silver-stained moments that
cut me cold
but leave room for hope to congeal
 

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I really love this one. The theme choice is very interesting.
 

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Thank you all so much for the words of praise. They keep me going. :D

Here's something I wrote a little while ago. It's pretty indulgent. Criticism is always welcome.


a hunter's task.

after you hide me
in the walls
keep my heart in a jar

in the basement

so that it may
continue to beat

for you
and only you

gathered dust
shaking from the grime-glass
each shuddering breath a

love echo for
a blade and a hunter
 

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Hello again. It's been a while. Here's new stuff.

dead gods

walking quietly, alone, from room to room,
I am a ghost and a bird, alighting on one golden bow
and then nothing at all.
I am a wanderer– though it has been written
that I will pause for the sound of strings in hallways
and for a moment my spectral chest may smolder,
my eyes may darken, searchlights flickering back to life,
and like a moth to flame I will gravitate to your warmth.

though it has been written– I was a sacrifice,
that I was golden before you cast your shadow on my
clarity and led me to Deaths bedroom.
I was your sacrifice, yes, and you,
you were the blade kissing its steel profanities
into the temple of my chest.
and by the time the coins were all back in the pot of my mouth,
the silk bolts of my spine realigned,
I was an idol destroyed, molten gold boiling from revered calf
to a white thing in the earth.

and in the dust of my cult, her fingers will write how fragile
we are without hearts and bones,
how we are not but lights and memory
and a ghost walking barefoot in the walls,
pressing one ear to the pipes to listen
for the roar of my God,
for the string-birds choiring my name and
your footfalls heralding the return of my flesh,
the song of my arrival
when the swell of my back is the rising of the sun.
 

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moar recent poetry

bottles

you have one thousand bottles in your stomach
you have one thousand tongues
and the only thing I can think of is baptism when I'm watching you
flounder like a pneumonic drowning on
dry land
you say 'I don't want to give you pain'
well I can take one thousand cigarettes to one inch of my flesh
and keep on kicking
like a seizing buck on its side
thrashing for my life
you won't see my black eyes
filling up with ice water
 
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