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The Truth of The Keyblade War
Chapter 1: An importan Lesson.

Note: this Fanfic is in Master Eraqus' point of view.


I walked into the Temple were I always train and meet with Master Xine[z-nay] my keyblade master, when I arived to the cross-off were the diffrent cooridoors intersect I went to the right hallway and through the door with the insignia of Master Xine's Keyblade the room was filled with an aray of collors even though most of it came from the light of the sun shining through the stain glass window. I looked around the room and Saw him siting in his chair with a smile on his face and so I slowly started to aproch him but he signaled for me to stop about 85% of the way there. "Do you know why we have the ability to have hope Eraqus?" asked Master Xine "No I'm afraid I don't Master Xine." I replied dissapointed that I didn't know the anser to his question. "Well don't be ashamed of yourself I didn't know that anser either when my master asked me, but would you like to know the anser Eraqus?" asked Master Xine in a voice that could cheer-up anyone. I wanted to say no that I wanted to find out myself but down inside I was aching to know the anser. "The anser is because we have a great amount of both darkness and light inside of us as do all things living or non-living but that light gives us hope through the darkness inside of us even though we may not know it, usualy we realize this in a diffrent form such as motavation like a dream but dreams are usualy surfaced to our hearts by a memory a very strong one at that even if we can't remember that memory it lies deep down inside us, the same thing happens with a promise and we may not realize it either but that promise is as real as can be and fufilled in our hearts. for instance I promise you that even when I die I'll be in your heart Eraqus." said Master Xine. I thought about it in my mind for a moment but before I could say any thing the town Elder George livingston came in and wispered something to Master Xine. "You are dismised for a day or so until I come back from the meeting of masters I must attend in a world named Keyblade Sanctuary and yes it is quite a journey from there to this world as you know." said Master Xine as he walked me out of the temple. As I walked home I couldn't stop thinking about the lesson that Master Xine Taught me and I knew that it would be the most important of all.
 

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I like it. Though, it would be nice if you spaced your writing in to paragraph form instead of it being one jumbled mass of words.
 

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Chapter 2: Taking flight

Weeks went by before I finaly was told that Master Xine was back and after hearing that I thought I might have filled up with too much energy and exitment causing me to die. I ran through the town and to the temple to only be stoped by the town Elder. "I know why your're here but Xine is at the cliffs." stated the Elder. I ran out of control to the cliffs. When I got there I stood next to Master Xine and looked out to the world's atmasphere but I could not find what was causing him to stare off into space it wasn't the calm ocean swaiding about do to the pleasant and gentle breeze until i looked at the sunset the view it's self was completely mesmorizing. "At the meeting I found out that they are having a tornament of talent in the Keyblade Sanctuary and I think you and I should atend the tornament." said Master Xine. "Well you can but I can't I don't have amor or a keyblade ship." I said in disapointment. "Well I was going to teach you how to summon your Keyblade ship and amor anyways but now just makes it more faster." said Mastor Xine with enthusiasticnes. It took about three hours to get through with the lesson and now I knew how to summon gateways to space,my Keyblade ship, and my amor. My amor was summonable by punching the bottun on my left shoulder pad that conected to a glove format around my hand. We then took off into space and it was amazing and the external look of the Keyblade Sanctuary was spectctular. When we landed into the world it's self was beautiful in every aspect way and form with the lush medows and beautiful mountains and lakes. When we made it into town we were escorted to the Coleseum were we were seated down and told that the coleseum rules would be anounced soon.
 
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Chapter 3: The Coleseum of the worlds


I was watching the clock waiting for the rules to be anounced until finaly the anouncer steped onto the anouncing platform as lights of colors such as orange,green,blue, and vilot. "Welcome to the World's Coleseum, the first tornament should be composed of only aprentences the rules are:
  1. The battles will be held in diffrent worlds
  2. be warned we see everything you do
  3. when the battle is finished your transmiters will send you to the next fight and rest points
  4. To give up push the transmiter
Now all the combatanets will be in teams of two and the last 3 surviving teams will be seperated into 6 one man teams. Team 1 will be made of Land of Departure's Master Xine's Eraqus and Traverse Town's Master Aros[arow-s]'s Xeanort now please come up to the platform." said the anouncer. I started to walk up but at the same time I was both Exited and Nervous.
 

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Wow this is really good man! I like this its cool, can you please give a description of his outfit and keyblade, or is it the same as the one in bbs?
 
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