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warboyX

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SORRY I'VE BEEN GONE SO LONG!!!

I WENT ON HOLIDAY!!(lunar new year)
its big here

Oh no! is my "Without The Heartless" sig thing old? OUTDATED?!
Must get a new one!! I'll take the retro technology one.

GREAT CHAPTER!!

i miss pirate!!!
make them find a baby parrot and make pirate the 2nd!!

or not.

Well. Bye!
Keep up the awesome work gabe!!
 
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KingGabriel_VXI

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Fullmetal blader said:
I gots me a kewl, official, badge, banner thing! More yay!
=) *noogies*

You guys, my free trial for Microsoft Word expired. Waaaaaaaa so you might see alot more mistakes in my writing but since I have to read it over carefully now, I wont be making mistakes like inserting the wrong characters name...I do that alot.

And to any of my other hidden fans, could ya go ahead and post. >.< I dont like not knowing about my fans. I need to gloat! And you guys need rep. =P

Sora: How do you know that guy?
Manager: Ancient history.
Sora: Tell me about it! He couldn’t even carry a bag of ice!
Manager: He was my ex. I don’t go for the big buff guys.
Sora: I bet you regret that!
Sora flexes his muscles.
Manager: chuckles) You’re cute, but the veins scare me.
Sora: Ohhh…
Sora pulls the manager up a chair and sits on the counter. She has a seat.
Sora: So, what happened?
Manager: Well we had a great relationship. We were together for 20 years.
Sora; Wow did you get divorced?
Manager: He never asked me to marry him. He just left one day after he broke up with me. We were planning to just be friends but he disappeared. I had been waiting all this time for him to come back and apologize.
Sora: Then why'd you kick him out?
Manager: Because he made my customers leave. I’m always hard on him.
Sora: Do you still love him?
Manager: …
Sora: I know it’s not my business. But I was just asking.
Manager: When you make up your mind that you’re never gonna love again, it’s hard to get over someone.
Sora: You want him back?
Manager: Yes.
Sora: Oh...What do we do now?
Manager: So, you’re married?
Sora: Yes, happily married.
Manager: Do you have any kids, Sora?
Sora: Nope, just your dog.
Manager: I’m glad you’re taking care of him. How long have you been married?
Sora: About 4 years.
Manager: That’s nice.
Sora: Yup…She's so sexy.
Manager: Hmm?
Sora: Huh?
The manager closes her eyes and instantly falls asleep.
Sora: sighs) (walks over to the window and looks out)
Tidus runs by and-
Sora: What the?! (steps outside) Tidus?
Tidus: Hah?! HEYYY! (goes up to him) What are you doing in there?
Sora: I work here. What are you doing running around?
Tidus: Oh! (gives him a sheet of paper) Here.
Sora: What is these?
Tidus: These is an invitation to my wedding, boy.
Sora: Cool.
Tidus: I know! Here.
Tidus gives him another one.
Tidus: It’s for Kairi.
He hands him another.
Tidus: Invite a friend.
Sora: Can I bring my dog?
Tidus: You have a dog?! Cool! Just put him one of those rope thingies for dogs.
Sora: It’s called a leash.
Tidus: Right. (runs off)
Sora: He’s such a weird little man.
Sora watches Tidus run off and then looks around the store for a leash to buy.
Selphie is running up and down the hotel halls-
Selphie: knocks on door)
Selphie hears screaming then a loud thump on the door.
Selphie: Hello? Is this a bad time? (puts eat to door) Myra?!
Myra: opens door) Sorry about that!
Akira: rubs forehead) (sniffles)
Myra: What’s up?
Selphie: gives her some papers)
Myra: What’s this-
Akira: I wanna read it! (jumps up and down)
Myra gives the papers to Akira and-
Akira: "COME TO MY WEDDING OR ELSE!!! Held at Olympus Coliseum. Tuesday, the 4th of June. 2pm to 6 pm. Free food, invite a friend." I wanna invite Rin!!!!
Akira runs off to read the paper to Rin but-
THUMP!
Akira: cries) MOMMY!!!!!!!!!
Selphie: Does she always do that?
Myra: I’ve got to go. Thanks for the invite. We will be there-
Selphie: Okay-
Akira: MOMMAE!!!
Myra: I’M COMING!!! (closes door) JESUS CHRIST!
Myra walks off to the back, scratching her head.
Selphie: skips off)
3 2 1-
Kairi: EEEEEEEEEH-
Selphie: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!!!!
Kairi: You’re getting married-
Selphie: I’m getting married!
Ringo: AROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! (howls)
Selphie: gives Kairi papers) Here, one for you and Sora. And invite the dog too! I can’t wait!
Kairi: Me neither!
Ringo puts his paws upon Selphie’s legs.
Selphie: pets him) Hey doggie!
Ringo: pants) (runs back to Kairi)
Selphie: Bye puppy. (skips off)
Kairi: picks Ringo up and swings him around) Weeeeeeeee!
3 2 1-
Tyra: Drop it Wakka!
Wakka: YOU drop-a it!
Tyra: You’re the one who won’t shut the hell up about it!
Wakka: You wont-a believe-a me!
Tyra: I believe you! I just want you to SHUT UP!!!
Wakka: Fine! (goes in bedroom and slams door)
Tyra curses to herself and pushes the dresser in front of the door to lock Wakka in the bathroom.
Tyra: CAN I GET TWO MINUTES OF PEACE SO I CAN GO MASTURBATE OR SOMETHING WITHOUT THIS F**KING HAWAIIN JOCK ON MY CASE ALL DAY?!
Selphie: knocks on door) Tyra?
Tyra: opens door) What the hell do you- Hi Selphie.
Selphie: …Um, here.
Selphie hands her all the rest of the papers.
Selphie: Bye! (runs off down the hall)
Tyra: looks at papers)... (closes door) Hey Wakka!
Wakka: WHAT?! (opens door)
Wakka easily pushes the dresser out of the way.
Tyra: Damn it…
Wakka: Are you-a trying to-a lock me in the bathroom?!
Tyra: No, Selphie’s inviting us to her wedding.
Wakka: Whatever.
Tyra walks around imitating him. She looks under the couch.
Tyra: "Whatever." Help me find Caesar!
Wakka: Why-a can’t-a you ever keep up with-a him?
Tyra: What?! You’re his daddy! You’re supposed to be spending quality time with him!
Wakka: Quality time-a my ***. (goes back in bathroom)
Tyra: How about you try wiping your *** with quality time? It’s better than nothing.
Tyra looks in the cabinets.
Tyra: CAESAR!!!

 

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Mwhahaha!First Post!Only 5 more days of being banned!If only Tyra knew!She would maybe like get a hammer, like a big one, and then get Wakka so then it would be like.Hammer+Wakka=Yay!I got nothing to say to describe how much i hate Wakka!<.<-->.>!Um..I know!-->
Watashi bouzunikukeryakesamadenikui Wakka!<--All my hatred of Wakka!
(puts eat to door)Myra!?
Do you mean ear?
 

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What was Ceaser doing?! I think i know. He must have found one of Tyra's *cough*toys*cough* XD. WOOOO Tidus and Selphie are getting Married. LMFAO You know he'll choke when he has to kiss her infront of everyone :D Great Chapter Gabe!
 

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HOW DID I NOT NOTICE A CHAPTER 20 MINS AFTER MY LAST POST?!

GABE! GABE! GABE!

I WANNA NOOGIE!

I'll go bully Ali--
I mean kingdomX(LOL)

Wakka... Freak...

mumbles).."Whatever" Mumbles more) flabbagaderbaddawakkashtoopidmogahikilojo.

Why is Caessar in a cabinet?
HE [gabe] DIDNT SAY HE WAS IN IT!! He said She was looking for him!
 

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Exactly, he wasnt in the cabinet, Tyra was screaming his name cause she still didnt see em. *noogies warboyx*

And yes, I meant ear...on the first day! *shakes head*

AND PEOPLES. I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED MORE MEMBERS FOR MYSPACE. PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE GOTTA HAVE EM GOTTA HAVE EM GOTTA HAVE EM! *cries* pwease....*cries* ...pwease......*cries*...pwease...
 

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oh no ceasers lost!!!!!!!!!

and tidus.........hes doomed :D



i love my without the heartless siggy!
 

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*shakes head disappointedly* Gabriel, Gabriel, Gabriel...Gabriel -_-
All this attention if getting to your freaking head. Why don't you let me make you a banner for your fan fic.CCHOPYOURHEADOFF. It'd have soooo many..erm..HAX I mean PICTURESOFSEVEREDHEADSANDSTUFFTHATWOULDMAKEYOUTHROWUP. Orr..ermm..*runs away* It'll be done in an hour! >_>

It won't be like these banners these nub people are making too! >_________________________________________>

Xemnas is on crack I swear
 
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ha had to go back to the thread i read to see whos sig i found it from turns out it was kingdom2917 im really liking this fanfic gabe i like how u make it suspensful ur doing a great job and ur 13? keep it up
 

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Goofy5555 said:
*shakes head disappointedly* Gabriel, Gabriel, Gabriel...Gabriel -_-
All this attention if getting to your freaking head. Why don't you let me make you a banner for your fan fic.CCHOPYOURHEADOFF. It'd have soooo many..erm..HAX I mean PICTURESOFSEVEREDHEADSANDSTUFFTHATWOULDMAKEYOUTHROWUP. Orr..ermm..*runs away* It'll be done in an hour! >_>

It won't be like these banners these nub people are making too! >_________________________________________>

Xemnas is on crack I swear

Be nice! FlyingTomato doesn't HAVE to make these. But she does cause she wants to support WTH. Now if wanting to help Gabe and his fic is being a "nub" then i must be on the top 3 nubs on the forums.
 

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Aww, I wasn't trying to be mean or anything ^_^. I probably can't even make a good enough banner in Photoshop. Sorry if I offended yew :X. *walks away in shame*
 

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Emilio. >.<
This aint teh old forumz son, no spammin. >.< I dont want any other banners, we can already only have two in the first place. Yours are nice but I'd rather use some I'd made. Thanks for your offer, but if you're not reading, o.o ..yeah. And no calling my fans n00bs.

Also, Sora is just trying to be nice to the old lady. You know old people like to talk. Its the only thing they can do without breaking something. Sora's a good young man. o_O And Yes Tyra will find Caesar, hiding is one of his qualities. He runs fast, he hides, hes sneaky, and that frowning and then smiling thing he does, if youve noticed, he does that alot. Annnnd, no info about teh wedding! HAHA.

http://www.myspace.com/teh_king pweoples! =D
 

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I don't go on MySpae a lot very busy. Nice new banners. And great chapter!! I must now use new banner in my sig * goes off somewhere*.
 
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