Recent content by cloudwolf124

This is something i cam up with it was supposed to KH fanfic hence the title but i figured it would be better a a random short story so i let you read this and critiscim is appreciated thank you The tiredness of a long day at school and strong feelings of desperation as the...

This is actually something i wrote in one of classes about this girl i met in my lunch period but i am afriad to tell her how i feel please enjoy I am hurting in inside everytime i see her face I want to tell her how i feel but the words wont come I wish I could show But what would she say...

My arms restrained by all of the chains My body constricted My movement restricted This feeling of pain of false redemption The darkness forever The light a treasure The chains are weakening i feel my arms pull free Darkness disappearing Light coming back An eternity in prison a life...

He makes an excellent point

This was so cool cant wait for the rest.

Marluxia- 45-48 ansem- 40

Okay this is a different version of a short story i did for English class last year i am running off alot of what i remember so here its is. Critiquing is appreciated. I watched as the dark storm clouds loomed over the valley. The village seemed to welcome the darkness that was so close to...

this seems pretty good hope theres more

this person seems to be the only person who makes any real sense

i never read a story like this before nice perspective i like it

Poor Goofy i cant believe hes gone and nice story is there more

Awesome i like it. You are a most excellent writer

This story is good...Whens the next chapter going to be posted?

Re: The Warriors of Twilight: The Haunted Mansion PT 4! spooky and suspenseful......i like it

Re: The Warriors of Twilight: The Haunted Mansion PT 2! Really good cant wait for the rest