♫Rhyme Book♪

[Dark Prince]

NEW!! Freestlye

(i kinda wasn't all there but pasting it straight no edits)

I spit reckless methods injected deathly infectious
I'm restless don't stop cause I'm relentless

Off the radio cause those waves can't carry my weight
Fans still follow my page and twitter my safe

Walk in the shoes of this lyricist appearing confused but more curious
Music seems blue, sometimes even inferior to the point that your furious

This calamity made with pure vanity, where's the humanity
Sanity at risk when I plan to do more then just stammering

You easy to beat like fighting no arm and leg amputee
Smack you with maybelline and light you with kerosene

 

[Dark Prince]

how sick is sick

I'm a lit fuse, write with a pistol hyped on some Krystle
Can't be trifled while I'm holding rifles that life you
I'm the type that runs red lights, that will clip you
My life full of issues but not the type that you'd ridicule
but when I write its like a knife, right through ya tissue
The story starts here so listen close to this spectacular picture

Pick up where I left it I'm daring you
So sick I eat blue waffles for breakfast, and sip Theraflu

Strangle your cock like a bo constrictor
Drink the IV lines of coma victims like its my soul elixir

 

[Dark Prince]

school of the hard knocks at your door

I smash on these kids avidly, tear off domes with savagery
Elevate gradually, engulf you in this masterpiece
Spit savagely, swing quick chip teeth like a cavity!
These visuals stuck and unsheathed like a gallery

Ready to learn some shit like academies
Open these books and lets review whats in passage 3

listen, I bust skulls so casually
Misbehave in my presence, will cause tolls on casualties
Put you in agony, that's the goal of my faculty
Full blown brutality a bomb of reality
No mater nationality treat them unilaterally
No more straws the next victim, gonna need hospitality

This is how we fix these abnormalities
All like a boot camp but much more elaborately
Put together to show formality
Second day you join the catastrophe

any questions class!?





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[Dark Prince]

♫lesson 2♪

Time to flex my sovereignty to these wannabe prodigies
These atrocities honestly never faced such a monstrosity
I speak audibly and modestly demolish these mockeries
My quality alone stomping these anomalies properly

No apologies when I consciously stone them constantly
Through in that sodomy see, still I have time for comedy
When I own them like monopoly, confidence is prominent
Stomping these somber men hulk like Samson and king like Solomon

 

[number01]

like was I see excellent thread, even though you killed my rap battle i'll give you 5stars lol

 

[Dark Prince]

♫Lesson 3♪

You about to witness how a general flips scripts
Theses sadistic linguistics, "piss-sick"
I Insist that these misfit b*tch pricks
Are no match or conflict for these, quick clips!

It's the sickness I'm equipped with, call me ballistic
I shine, and an instance opposition's minimalistic
Into ur visual it sticks to your mental brick
To break individuals to show, I'm Individualistic

I ain't narcissistic, I've been quite specific
I use rhythmic's to fight for my rights existence
To show I'm sadistic an viciously dripped with
Acidic finesse to flex, my lyrics-fitness

 

[Chuman]

Shit, shit shit shit shit, hot, hot, hot, hot, hot, you're on fire! Five star thread.

 

[Dark Prince]

♫Survival of the Fittest♪

Higher then a Byron and influential how I inspire wiser men
Non stop firing, to the fullest pulling triggers in this lions den
Flames I spit getting hotter, so where are all the fireman
Must be busy cause I'm made of music beating you with my violin

Beyond this horizon of skin I'm a colossal Leviathan
I'm inhuman I'm what Jesus apostles confided in
I'm sick of you, and this world that I am dieing in
Time to eat the younger ones until a riot begins

 

[Dark Prince]

♫Witness♪

Watch the light dim from my eyes
In these moments of death I've eyed
Weak in the knees pleading to breath
Blood on the floor soaks in my jeans
As the body I own is losing focus from me
How clearer could the picture be opening
I'm questioned till the details are broken
I now know nothing of this female you've spoken
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[Dark Prince]

Average emcees collapse, cant stand to me
My raps more damaging, bring July 4th horror
Push death scripts forward, salt in his wounds in this corridor
Any warrior about to have a meeting with the coroner
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[Dark Prince]

♫My 16 Bars♪

Bow to the feet kid, you full of defeat in ya thesis
I’m pulling the beast from the sheaths and cultivating
Your sheep while you eat this, bullets heat seeking
Watch my bars break, now I got two you get beat with

Slaughter your fleet in a brief glimpse of my godly mystique
Oddly you think you could size my beliefs up with how commoners think
I’ve preached more Psalms then bombs Sodom could bring
An Impeached more doms then Ali’s arm could swing

I’m a ruthless commander, peruse missions that only the gruesome could handle
I’m glued to this mantle, a phantom of fame you couldn’t dismantle
My heart a guillotine, and whoever close get chopped to smithereens
What mother could adopt this Philistine, couldn’t cop or mock my similes

My notion corrosive, flows soak in a vat so potent you feel it's explosive
Below this, n$gg$z deep throat this, motives ferocious when I focus
Reload the significance, magnificent grows while plots thickening
Hip-hop is missing me, DDT to drop any enemy sent to me

This insolence dealt with, and belt this infant to help kids
Realize Dark Prince methods will melt him
Infections how he felt it, spread the word till it sells hits
He unnerved when the belt wisp, welts is what he dealt with

I’ll smash him to cope with madness I float with
You could imagine why I’d trash on the hopeless
While I shatter this broke kid that couldn’t fathom emotions
My collateral notion makes him cry till my paddle is broke-in(broken)

With my speech there ain’t no replicates
It’s heat with these messages, you’ll eat what my breath will spit
Rest get feast on like remnants, most get leveled in
So touch me, you’ll get severed hands, there’s no one I ain’t better then

My breath is hatred, I’ve left you naked with your flesh abrasive
I’ll flip it native, I’m triple sages with a wicked name that lifts you vacant
Zero tolerance policy for ignorance, thrash on the trash you call the innocent
My presence an incense, properly pummel these mockeries to stomp in sense

 

[Dark Prince]

Bump for feedback por favor.

 

[Annoyance]

Have you tried leaving a request in the critique group?

 

[Izayoi]

I'm from the critic committee and it is late at night and I didn't feel like giving a completely in-depth analysis like I usually do, but I felt like reading through this. I realized that to really get this you have to recite, so I did, and I heard some really cool things. I just wanted to point out the pros and cons I found reading this aloud. Didn't touch on the metaphors that much if you don't mind, but if you really want that I could always put this on a longer waiting list of stuff I'm reviewing.

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Bow to the feet kid, you full of defeat in ya thesis
I’m pulling the beast from the sheaths and cultivating
Your sheep while you eat this, bullets heat seeking
Watch my bars break, now I got two you get beat with

Every time I say "cultivating" I expect the "t" or "v" sound to get brought up again, but it doesn't. I would swap that out for something else. It doesn't flow very well with it stuck in there.

Slaughter your fleet in a brief glimpse of my godly mystique
Oddly you think you could size my beliefs up with how commoners sink
I’ve preached more Psalms then bombs Sodom could bring
An Impeached more doms then Ali’s arm could swing

I think that, since this is just writing, you're allowed to write "think" and "And" instead of what you put down. The way it's pronounced should be for the speaker to decide or infer given the context and way the text works.

The last two lines work very well, though.

I’m a ruthless commander, peruse missions that only the gruesome could handle
I’m glued to this mantle, a phantom of fame you couldn’t dismantle
My heart a guillotine, and whoever close get chopped to smithereens
What mother could adopt this Philistine, couldn’t cop or mock my similes

This just sounds really cool ok. gj.

My notion corrosive, flows soak in a vat so potent you feel its explosive
Below this, doodilyz deep throat this, motives ferocious when I focus
Reload the significance, magnificent grows while plots thickening
Hip-hop is missing me, DDT to drop any enemy sent to me

Again, if this is meant to be the "lyrics" or whatever, you should put down the proper grammar. So, "it's" and such should be put down correctly. Unless of course this is really supposed to be poetry in which case I would give it more leeway. I also have no idea what "doodilyz" is but I managed to pronounce it so I won't nitpick much there. I feel like "thickening" sounds a little off but it isn't the worst.

This insolence dealt with, and belt this infant to help kids
Realize Dark Prince methods will melt him
Infections how he felt it, spread the word till it sells hits
He unnerved when the belt wisp, welts is what he dealt with

Pretty okay with this one. The last line sounds cool.

I’ll smash him to cope with madness I float with
You could imagine why I’d trash on the hopeless
While I shatter this broke kid that couldn’t fathom emotions
My collateral notion makes him cry till my paddle is broke-in(broken)

You're making me wonder if this particular prose is meant to be read or spoken. Like, is this the "script" or the way it's supposed to sound? Personally, I would pronounce "broken" in the way you specified, and I think anyone who was reading it and got to that point would assume to say it that way as well. No need to be so paranoid.

With my speech there ain’t no replicates
It’s heat with these messages, so you’ll eat what my breath will spit
Rest get feast on like remnants, most get leveled in
So touch me, you’ll get severed hands, there’s no one I ain’t better then

*than

My breath is hatred, I’ve left you naked with your flesh abrasive
I’ll flip it native, I’m triple sages with a wicked name that lifts u vacant
Zero tolerance policy for ignorance, thrash on the trash you call the innocent
My presents an incense, properly pummel these mockeries to stomp in sense

uh *you
And I think you mean "presence's" not "presents"

I think it's kind of cheap to end this by rhyming "incense" to "in sense." You mashed some good words together earlier, like in the third line of this, for instance. In fact, since you're saying that you're gonna "stomp in sense" you would even put stress on the "in" making that phrase sound an uncomfortable amount like the single word "incense." Look into your wording there.

 

[Dark Prince]

Thanks a bunch. I had some of those things correct and when I reposed it this site decided to auto correct a few questionable words. I forget that the grammar is supposed to be manually changed. I have me saying this on my signature you should check it out it's not great but sounds cool I think.

 

[Dark Prince]

♫Eve of Demons♪

Till these demons legions weaken
I won't stop feasting on these heathens

I've been even leaving, preachers
questioning their belief in Jesus

Lost all reason, now the plot deepens
When the rot spreads in all regions

I've felt pain since the Eve of Eden
From my bleeding, body I've Unsheathed

Swords to survive without even breathing
Not even a prayer for my increasing weeping

A fleeting moment like a infant teething
Dammed to eternal grieving with full feeling

 

[Dark Prince]

♫Virus Fumed♪

Spitting fumes groomed with abuse
Bruise who I choose, refuse to be used

To death I'm immune, out of breath from my booze
Still I leave you perplex, vexed and abused

Words are a threat and directed at you
Burn this reject, as he connects with the noose

If left unchecked I'm perfecting this fruit
Rotten nectar set to infect all the troops

 

[Dark Prince]

♫Who is he?♪

Drop atomic force like a comet its astrological
Born demonic, I'm the source of sonic as I catapult
Sword of carnage, I'm more alarming then "impractical"
Dead to garbage in this world, it's all a catacomb
I Bleed of vandal, dismantle a mans clavicle
Break in his teeth till he breaths enamel like its casual
I'm an unmanageable cannibalistic intangible animal
Breaking mandibles on mechanical b*tch sticks, so satanical

 

[Dark Prince]

When I spit I'm at a lack for words, kick and scream for action verbs
Twist my tongue till the flow so smooth, I can spit it backwards

afterwards..
I wake up in the morning with a story to tell
Then I look in the mirror only to notice I fell

I was positioned in a way, poised to excel
Compelled to speak my mind, now feel fake as hell

Hate this feeling, overwhelmed need to break this shell
Time to reach inside myself until my might is felt

I tried to live my life in light, and it just blinded me
I readjusted to the dark now I see what I can be
When I succeed everything I've achieved is split
I'm deceived, others need a part of what I receive and sh*t

There's no rivalry just the nuisance's that admire me
I come up silently focused senses to apply defeat
Finally you get it, I can see your iris widening
I have now brought forth a whole new side of me
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[Just Dari]

Good, I was beginning to think you were gonna leave this book shut lol.