Mario or Tsutarja

[destiny seeker]

Hey so I can't decide which to enter for SotW. I'm really not sure. Any thoughts

 

[Oberon]

I think both are lacking on the same fundamental level: there's not a whole lot of focus and composition. If I had to keep it short, I'd say use the first. It appears far more interesting than the second. A general tip I'd have for you is to work on your focus/stock placement. The second one is pretty ok in terms of that stock placement, but the first is put all the way into the right side. If you're going by the ROT(rule of thirds), use the center of the stock as your rule, not the edge of it. Just a tip. Goodluck with SOTW.

 

[destiny seeker]

Hmm...... I think I get what you mean.
Still I can never get it right can I. I need help.

Also I did some editing and I can't seemed to save the background clear.