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Swift

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Mine isn't the excellent awesome among the artists here. But I would like some advice on advancing my skills.

A basic Sora Tag.

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King Sora X

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Shit, for your first tag, this is quite good. Although the flow seems a little off on the left, maybe some smudging might add some more depth to it, but your off to a great start, keep it up.^__^
 

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Wow... so pretty..

Along with what KSX pointed out, I also think that the words look a bit messy on the edges. Mabey a tinsy bit of fading. Otherwise, its very good.
 
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Charlie

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Feels a lot better without the text.
The font for it could be switched to something not as thick, then the border around it doesn't fit with the feeling of the rest of the tag. The sparkles on top of his head are a bit distracting.

Then that faint text behind him could be switched to a more grayish/pinkish color, so its not as distinctive.
Then as for smudging with this piece, I don't encourage it.

It's got a sweet feeling to it.
Keep it up.
 

Vayne Mechanics

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stock placement is horrid
text is like what
ew border
LIGHT SOURCES EVERYWHERE
 

Swift

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stock placement is horrid
text is like what
ew border
LIGHT SOURCES EVERYWHERE

What is stock placement?

Yea i got the text all wrong..

How do I have all the layers under 1 light source?
 

Dark Master

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You have too many light sources when there should only be one, maybe two

The stock should be resized and placed somewhere else

border looks bad

keep it up
 
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Charlie

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Placement of stock

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Placement of the picture that you decide to use.

It dictates the symmetry, flow, and sometimes the focal of the rest of the tag.
 

Lancelot

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Out of curiousity, what program are you using?

And I would say this tag is better than the last. The text could be smudged in/blurred on the edges, because it's sticking out from the tag too much. The light source seems ok, although I think maybe trying to have the stock fully over it, or at least more than it is now could work, due to the fact it is a rather big source. Otherwise, pretty good there
 
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