Out of curiousity, what program are you using?
And I would say this tag is better than the last. The text could be smudged in/blurred on the edges, because it's sticking out from the tag too much. The light source seems ok, although I think maybe trying to have the stock fully over it, or at least more than it is now could work, due to the fact it is a rather big source. Otherwise, pretty good there