Naminé's story(working title+has nothing to do with kh)
Okay. This story is about the characters that I'm constantly drawing in my sketchbook. I wanted to do this story since I basicly started 8th grade (Which was about a year ago....<<'). Now...Naminé was originally made for a story of my friends. It's very confusing...but after Naminé I just started drawing my own characters and my friend kinda abandoned her story << She never really wrote a story so it's only in her head. Meh...If she gets to it, she gets to it..I'm only gonna type it for her because she can't type...but that's a different story from mine.
Yes I stole the name from KH (I'M A BAD PERSON!! >.<) I like the name okay? It's too late to change it now anyway after the years worth of pictures of her with the name on it and some of them in ink so...yeah..... But the character looks nothing like Naminé from KH so don't even bother emailing me about it....if you want to know what she looks like though....ask me I guess...too lazy to get out the character designs... so...here it goes. I'm going to start with the intro. If people don't like it, I'm going to stop, if they do, I'll continue... And keep in mind that my chapters are unbelievably short << So sorry....ANYWAY!! Here is the story. Please comment. << I just want to know how bad it is.
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Intro
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Naminé sat down on her rock by the fire to feed it wood to keep it alive. She was on her own now. Queen Saudra, the Queen who ruled the village of Marilica. Saudra was hated throughout the village. Everybody hates her, even some of her guards. Saudra wanted to rule all of Promathica, the Elven world. Maybe even the other lands, too. Nobody really knows her plans. Many people have lost a large amount of things to the evil known as the Queen. Money, valuables, pets, homes, friends, and family. She wont stop.
Naminé was one of the many people who lost loved ones to Saudra. Her home and her family. The only one left of her family is her hawk, Tsubasa, who she named after her lost brother. Her brother, Tsubasa, was taken away to an "orphanage". At least, that's wat the letter Naminé and her father recieved. She was only seven years old when this happened. Tsubasa was six when she last saw him. Two years before her brother was taken away, her mother died from a sickness that was going all over Marilica. Naminé cried hard that night. She was only five years old.
After her brother was taken away, she found a hawk near the pond by her house. It was young and it had a broken wing. Naminé tried to use her healing spells but being at a very young age, they barely did anything at all but ruffle a few feathers. So she healed the hawk the old fashioned way. She mended up the wing with bandages which were just a peice ripped off from her cloak. She nurtured the hawk back to health. After the wing fully healed a couple weeks later, Naminé and Tsubasa bonded so well, the hawk refused to fly away.
But when she was ten, her father witnessed a beating of a villager in the market because the villager couldn't afford the food. Nobody really could. Saudra makes the prices of food so high that people have to work all day, and all night, just to afford a loaf of bread for their family.
Naminé's father was furious. He did a speech to tell everybody that Saudra needs to be stopped. Everybody agreed but nobody wanted to help. They feared what would happen to their lives and their loved ones. They were too afraid to fight.
Naminé's father was killed at a public execution the very next day. To make it worse, Naminé was forced to watch this at the front. But as she was forced to watch this nightmare of an event, she noticed a boy that looked to be her age run out of the castle in a cloak.
Okay. This story is about the characters that I'm constantly drawing in my sketchbook. I wanted to do this story since I basicly started 8th grade (Which was about a year ago....<<'). Now...Naminé was originally made for a story of my friends. It's very confusing...but after Naminé I just started drawing my own characters and my friend kinda abandoned her story << She never really wrote a story so it's only in her head. Meh...If she gets to it, she gets to it..I'm only gonna type it for her because she can't type...but that's a different story from mine.
Yes I stole the name from KH (I'M A BAD PERSON!! >.<) I like the name okay? It's too late to change it now anyway after the years worth of pictures of her with the name on it and some of them in ink so...yeah..... But the character looks nothing like Naminé from KH so don't even bother emailing me about it....if you want to know what she looks like though....ask me I guess...too lazy to get out the character designs... so...here it goes. I'm going to start with the intro. If people don't like it, I'm going to stop, if they do, I'll continue... And keep in mind that my chapters are unbelievably short << So sorry....ANYWAY!! Here is the story. Please comment. << I just want to know how bad it is.
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Intro
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Naminé sat down on her rock by the fire to feed it wood to keep it alive. She was on her own now. Queen Saudra, the Queen who ruled the village of Marilica. Saudra was hated throughout the village. Everybody hates her, even some of her guards. Saudra wanted to rule all of Promathica, the Elven world. Maybe even the other lands, too. Nobody really knows her plans. Many people have lost a large amount of things to the evil known as the Queen. Money, valuables, pets, homes, friends, and family. She wont stop.
Naminé was one of the many people who lost loved ones to Saudra. Her home and her family. The only one left of her family is her hawk, Tsubasa, who she named after her lost brother. Her brother, Tsubasa, was taken away to an "orphanage". At least, that's wat the letter Naminé and her father recieved. She was only seven years old when this happened. Tsubasa was six when she last saw him. Two years before her brother was taken away, her mother died from a sickness that was going all over Marilica. Naminé cried hard that night. She was only five years old.
After her brother was taken away, she found a hawk near the pond by her house. It was young and it had a broken wing. Naminé tried to use her healing spells but being at a very young age, they barely did anything at all but ruffle a few feathers. So she healed the hawk the old fashioned way. She mended up the wing with bandages which were just a peice ripped off from her cloak. She nurtured the hawk back to health. After the wing fully healed a couple weeks later, Naminé and Tsubasa bonded so well, the hawk refused to fly away.
But when she was ten, her father witnessed a beating of a villager in the market because the villager couldn't afford the food. Nobody really could. Saudra makes the prices of food so high that people have to work all day, and all night, just to afford a loaf of bread for their family.
Naminé's father was furious. He did a speech to tell everybody that Saudra needs to be stopped. Everybody agreed but nobody wanted to help. They feared what would happen to their lives and their loved ones. They were too afraid to fight.
Naminé's father was killed at a public execution the very next day. To make it worse, Naminé was forced to watch this at the front. But as she was forced to watch this nightmare of an event, she noticed a boy that looked to be her age run out of the castle in a cloak.
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