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Been working on a story for a couple of hours a week over a few months. Its still pretty much in its basic form (ideas and storyline). In fact the main Character hasn't even got a name yet its that far behind (for now hes just MC). Im hoping to get it worked, sorted and done out properly over the summer. This preview is of an encounter between the main character and one of the main villian's best men. The main villian does have a name though (Moltick) so thats a start. Without further delay here comes the starting part of the preview....
MC ran out onto the roof and saw the giant airship of the logo in the sky. The logo which was his only lead to the one responsible for the death of his parents. He was seeing red just looking at the airships flag with the logo on it. The logo was of the head and neck area of a human head. The human head was white on a black background. The problem with this human head though other than the sinister eyes made by the simple movement of its eyebrows the human had was that it had a horn just above each eyebrow showing that the human was really some form of demon. The sight of it made MC's blood move in his body like it wanted to burst out and cover it out of his sight.
"Hey! The intruder made it up here!" a voice shouted.
MC broke his sight away from the flag that made him want to kill and saw that 3 modern armoured soldiers were staring at him. Behind them was a very large satillite dish which would explain why this old radio station was the last to go. The soldiers wore silver suits of armour except the armour seemed flexible and not thick metal like the soldiers MC last saw usually being used. The modern armour was catching on within the military it seemed. The helmets were now flexible metal too and were silver as always with some form of goggles with red lenses on them. This made the guards look a little more strange. The helmet was seperate from the rest of the suit though which was something that MC considered foolish. He noticed though that the logo that he despised so much was actually on the right arm as a form of emblem or something.
Grabbing his radio the left soldier mumbled something and got some form of response. With that he told his comrades and they drew their swords. MC knew that that airship was his only lead and if he didn't grab onto one of those large chains that were attached to this roof he would never catch up with his parents killer anytime soon. These men had to go.
The middle soldier ran up to MC with his blade above his head. MC didn't feel like playing around with these nobodies and so he pulled his scythe from his backstrap. He swung its blade to clash with the 1st soldiers vertical attack. The other two were closing in on him so he needed to find a way to dispose of him quickly. MC jumped back and spun his blade around in an attempt to catch the soldier in a weakpoint at his neck. The soldier just ducked under it and shoulder charged MC to the ground. MC rolled to his feet in time to see the other two soldiers at arms length about to swing their blades onto where he was crouched.
MC ran out onto the roof and saw the giant airship of the logo in the sky. The logo which was his only lead to the one responsible for the death of his parents. He was seeing red just looking at the airships flag with the logo on it. The logo was of the head and neck area of a human head. The human head was white on a black background. The problem with this human head though other than the sinister eyes made by the simple movement of its eyebrows the human had was that it had a horn just above each eyebrow showing that the human was really some form of demon. The sight of it made MC's blood move in his body like it wanted to burst out and cover it out of his sight.
"Hey! The intruder made it up here!" a voice shouted.
MC broke his sight away from the flag that made him want to kill and saw that 3 modern armoured soldiers were staring at him. Behind them was a very large satillite dish which would explain why this old radio station was the last to go. The soldiers wore silver suits of armour except the armour seemed flexible and not thick metal like the soldiers MC last saw usually being used. The modern armour was catching on within the military it seemed. The helmets were now flexible metal too and were silver as always with some form of goggles with red lenses on them. This made the guards look a little more strange. The helmet was seperate from the rest of the suit though which was something that MC considered foolish. He noticed though that the logo that he despised so much was actually on the right arm as a form of emblem or something.
Grabbing his radio the left soldier mumbled something and got some form of response. With that he told his comrades and they drew their swords. MC knew that that airship was his only lead and if he didn't grab onto one of those large chains that were attached to this roof he would never catch up with his parents killer anytime soon. These men had to go.
The middle soldier ran up to MC with his blade above his head. MC didn't feel like playing around with these nobodies and so he pulled his scythe from his backstrap. He swung its blade to clash with the 1st soldiers vertical attack. The other two were closing in on him so he needed to find a way to dispose of him quickly. MC jumped back and spun his blade around in an attempt to catch the soldier in a weakpoint at his neck. The soldier just ducked under it and shoulder charged MC to the ground. MC rolled to his feet in time to see the other two soldiers at arms length about to swing their blades onto where he was crouched.
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