NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Its over! Good ending though. I have a question that has to do with the first Riku and Mai. Did Riku sleep with Raven because i didnt get if he did or didnt.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Its over! Good ending though. I have a question that has to do with the first Riku and Mai. Did Riku sleep with Raven because i didnt get if he did or didnt.
I was afraid that was going to be your answer. That kinda makes me upset. Dnt tell me that was his first?Yeah, he did. If you recall, Riku was naked when he woke and Raven described that the "moment" the shared was beautiful, on top of that she was wearing one of his shirts.
I was afraid that was going to be your answer. That kinda makes me upset. Dnt tell me that was his first?
Can give me like a link to chpater when it happned because i cnt find itHis first? You mean his first time going all the way? IDK, honestly never really thought about that as his first or second or anything, I just threw it in the story for drama. It worked perfectly with giving Mai doubt that Riku woud love her and stuff later. Y'know? Like that chrismas or whatever when they were at the lake, Mai learned that Riku had sex with Raven and she felt down about it. For me even if that was Riku's first time it worked perfectly adding a small tension between the two. -^^- I'm a nut, I know.
Can give me like a link to chpater when it happned because i cnt find it
Aw, that was such a great ending!!!! I am really going to miss this story; every part of it was so great. I really liked the whole thing with the birth, especially when Mai broke Riku's hand; that made me laugh. I also liked how Ninja killed Dawn; that evil bastard deserved to die a horrible death. I also liked the small conversation between Axel and Saix; I just love seeing those two as friends. My favorite part of all, though, was the epilogue. I especially liked the family battle and Riku making fun of Benjie's feelings for Doki and Raven's daughter, Crystal; that was just funny. Anyway, great job on the story, and, if you write any more stories, I will definitely read them.
Thank you !Here you go, chapter sixteen, you're gonna have to scroll down to get to it. http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/115864-riku-mai-3.html
Thank you !
Thank you, I do have other fanfic and don't know if I should pat them herethe chaptes are long. I have a story where Riku is forced into a club, that is more alngthe lines of action voilence and comedy with some romance, people loved it on Fanfiction.net but I don't want to torture people here with long chapters but if you insist TR I will post it -^^-
Awww....this is a great story and I wished it wouldn't end.....but Zipporahss,
*stands up and claps*
The best fan fic I have ever read. Thank you.
awesome fanfic! the ending was great, and kinda hilarious. Mai and Benji battling over the remote, hahaha! oh and sorry, I read through the whole fanfic without posting. :lol: