Fanfiction ► The Forgotten Warrior

[Nelo Angelo]

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[Lectori Salutem]

Yay! Chapter!
It's very good!!!

 

[Nelo Angelo]

really? its not the best. but i couldnt think. still got the writers block and other stuff on my mind. Ill put action in the next chap.

 

[Haku]

Another great new edition Nelo.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

thanks. i tried to add some stuff in it cz i had this chapter done for a while now but i couldnt think. ill put a lot more in the next.

 

[RikuDestiny]

wow, u really get into it ^^ nice chapter i like it ^^

 

[Ban Mido]

Lookin good Nelo! Keep it up!

 

[Nelo Angelo]

thanks guys. the next ones gna be good. i gt sm great ideas and im brainstormin em.

 

[Dant?s de Divinity]

Not as cool as the other ones but still a good read. Thumbs up dude.
bowchickawowwow

 

[Nelo Angelo]

preciate the honesty man. thanks.

 

[Dant?s de Divinity]

Sure thing dude.
bowchickawowwow

 

[Nojerom]

eyeboggling action.... holy crap i think i'll go join your fanclub now.... lol dude Nelo your fic freaking rocks hard. it's so good....

 

[Lectori Salutem]

Don't be too suprised when I say your chapter is good. Afterall, if there would be only fighting scenes in a story, it would get very boring.
The training part was very nice, and gives nice possebilities for even better fights in future chapters!
And you gave the bad guy another side, which is also very good for the story!

 

[Nelo Angelo]

thank you LS. your comments mean a lot. my long time reader of this fic.
ye i gave him another side, the answers will all fold out. i dont have whats going to happen next planned at all. it all just comes as i go along. hehe, maybe not the best method right.
almost done with the next chap. hope it impresses.

 

[Ultima Star]

Man..I've missed a lot oh my God I'm so sorry nii-sama D= well y0know it's cool dontcha? at least you upload..look at me DX

 

[Nelo Angelo]

ye you have missed a lot. but as long as you catch up its cool.
gonna have the next chap up soon so get readin.
ye how is your one coming along?

 

[Ultima Star]

I've already caught up :mellow:
Hehe I'll be waiting for the next chap >P
..mine? well ...eh...I have chap 11 ready now..the only thing left to do is..stop being a lazy bum and typed it >P

 

[Nelo Angelo]

hehe..cool cool.
ill be watin to see that.

 

[Ultima Star]

*nod* yeah cool *nod* and *nod* XD
Hehe kay nii-sama hope ya like it when I post it then *nod*

 

[Nelo Angelo]

hehe no problem kar. *nod*
you do that a lot.