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This is my first fanfic. Its a D.N.Angel fanfic that happens 20 years after the series ends. Please read and enjoy and coment! I would really apprieciate any advice you could offer me.
After hours of screaming, pain, and waiting, a baby started crying in the room behind where Daisuke was sitting. The doctor that had been with Riku came out of the door.
"Daisuke Niwa, your child is a boy. You may come in now." Daisuke followed him back into the room, where Riku was laying, the baby still crying.
"I can't believe it, i knew it was coming, but i had no idea it would feel like this to be a parent," Daisuke said, holding Riku's hand. "I'm sorry i couldn't be in here, it just made me sick."
"That's ok," Riku said, panting. "At least we are a real family now." She said, smiling. Then the room went quiet, something was wrong. The doctor came back to where they were with a very sad look on his face.
“I’m sorry Mr. and Mrs. Niwa, but your son has just lost his life.” the doctor said, walking towards the couple.
“What? How is that possible? We were sure it was healthy.” Daisuke and Riku had tears in their eyes.
“It had just started to sufficate before birth it seems, we are very sorry for the loss of your first child.” The doctor too, was about to cry.
“Oh no, I am NOT letting this happen to you, not after what I’ve put you through,” said a voice that only Daisuke could hear.
“Dark? Is that you? I thought you were sealed in that art…” Daisuke thought.
“Remember that promise that we made, always a part of each other? That’s what broke it. I’ll see you in a while Dad, but I might not remember much, this is the first time I’ve tried this.”
“Huh, Dad? What are you…” but before he could finish his thought, a purple light engulfed the entire room. When it was gone, the still body of the Niwas’ son started to move and cry out. Its red hair and brown eyes were replaced with a Dark Mousy’s trademark purple. Everyone was stunned for a moment, then Daisuke realized what had happened.
“Thank you Dark, this means the world to us, really,” Daisuke thought, almost crying again.
“Derek, after Dark, his DNA must still be with yours, it’s no surprise that he looks like him.” Riku didn’t know what had happened, but her eyes were filled with tears of joy, so Daisuke couldn’t bear to tell her.
“I guess he was just asleep, I’m glad he survived,” the doctor said, thoroughly confused.
The friend that Daisuke had had since he was 14, who had been sealed away inside the Black Wings several years before was back, and he was now his and Riku’s son.
Prologue
Birth
Birth
After hours of screaming, pain, and waiting, a baby started crying in the room behind where Daisuke was sitting. The doctor that had been with Riku came out of the door.
"Daisuke Niwa, your child is a boy. You may come in now." Daisuke followed him back into the room, where Riku was laying, the baby still crying.
"I can't believe it, i knew it was coming, but i had no idea it would feel like this to be a parent," Daisuke said, holding Riku's hand. "I'm sorry i couldn't be in here, it just made me sick."
"That's ok," Riku said, panting. "At least we are a real family now." She said, smiling. Then the room went quiet, something was wrong. The doctor came back to where they were with a very sad look on his face.
“I’m sorry Mr. and Mrs. Niwa, but your son has just lost his life.” the doctor said, walking towards the couple.
“What? How is that possible? We were sure it was healthy.” Daisuke and Riku had tears in their eyes.
“It had just started to sufficate before birth it seems, we are very sorry for the loss of your first child.” The doctor too, was about to cry.
“Oh no, I am NOT letting this happen to you, not after what I’ve put you through,” said a voice that only Daisuke could hear.
“Dark? Is that you? I thought you were sealed in that art…” Daisuke thought.
“Remember that promise that we made, always a part of each other? That’s what broke it. I’ll see you in a while Dad, but I might not remember much, this is the first time I’ve tried this.”
“Huh, Dad? What are you…” but before he could finish his thought, a purple light engulfed the entire room. When it was gone, the still body of the Niwas’ son started to move and cry out. Its red hair and brown eyes were replaced with a Dark Mousy’s trademark purple. Everyone was stunned for a moment, then Daisuke realized what had happened.
“Thank you Dark, this means the world to us, really,” Daisuke thought, almost crying again.
“Derek, after Dark, his DNA must still be with yours, it’s no surprise that he looks like him.” Riku didn’t know what had happened, but her eyes were filled with tears of joy, so Daisuke couldn’t bear to tell her.
“I guess he was just asleep, I’m glad he survived,” the doctor said, thoroughly confused.
The friend that Daisuke had had since he was 14, who had been sealed away inside the Black Wings several years before was back, and he was now his and Riku’s son.
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