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Re: The Organization's Beginning
Cool! I LOVE these kinds of Fanfics, you got yourself another fan X3
Can't wait for the next chap XD
Cool! I LOVE these kinds of Fanfics, you got yourself another fan X3
Can't wait for the next chap XD
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Your fanfic is awesome! When is the next chapter?
Your fanfic is awesome! When is the next chapter?
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But when is ASAP?????????
But when is ASAP?????????
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You were banned? That sucks.... that must have drove you nuts huh
Well i'm still here, i'll be looking forward for that chapter the second it's up XD
You were banned? That sucks.... that must have drove you nuts huh
Well i'm still here, i'll be looking forward for that chapter the second it's up XD
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I'm so sorry guys, I've neglected this fanfic too much. Tomorrow I promise I'll get the next chapter up. I've been sick lately, so i'll have time tomorrow to type it up too
~Taj/ER/SRR
I'm so sorry guys, I've neglected this fanfic too much. Tomorrow I promise I'll get the next chapter up. I've been sick lately, so i'll have time tomorrow to type it up too
~Taj/ER/SRR
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Right! Well, here it is, the one you'v all been waiting for! CHAPPTERRRRRRRRRRRRR 10!!!
Enjoy!!
Chapter 10: Feminine Touch
"Wouldn't you like to know?" said a cheeky voice.
"Yes I would, but you're not going to tell me, are you?"
"Not now Aeleus, not now"
"How do you...?"
"I'm too smart, hehe... Wait, can you hear that?"
"Yeah... Heartless?"
"Hmm..."
"What's up?" Aeleus said, puzzled by her stance.
"If it is them, we're going to need more help"
"What?"
"You can come out now!" she yelled to a close by building.
Another figure tentively walked out from behind the building. It stumbled a lot, and walked incredibly nervously.
"Don't worry, I'll look after you!" said the female.
"I know you will Larxene, but..." said the new, slightly high pitched voice.
"Larxene, ey?" said Aeleus, with a great smirk.
"Good work, Drippy..." said Larxene.
"Stop calling me that! It's annoying..."
"Well maybe you should stop blurting out my name!"
"Hah, I can see this is going nowhere fast" said Aeleus, laughing at the same time.
But just as he had finished speaking, another larger Heartless appeared on top of the skyscraper.
"What's that?" said Larxene, allowing her hood to fall back, revealing her soft face.
"AHHHH!!! Run, run away!!" screamed "Drippy".
"Drippy!! Oh fine then... Aeleus, do you know what that is?" she said, shifting around trying to get a better view of it.
"Uhh..."
Aeleus was too taken back by Larxene's features.
"Too busy looking at my beautiful face, huh?" said Larxene, giggling.
"Actually, yes... But, uhh..."
A look of surprise washed over her face. She also began to blush a little.
"Thankyou..." she said quietly.
"No problems" Aeleus said, scratching the back of his head.
"But anyway, getting back to the Heartless matter" he continued, "It's a Trickmaster" the look of surprise now on his face, as this new memory entered into his mind.
"Oh great, looks like Drippy would have been really good here... I mean, you can see the fire too, can't you? Ah well..."
"Well, we just have to do what we can now"
*
Back with the other four, trouble was being experienced by them.
"Why do they akways follow us?" said Ienzo, guarding himself against a Soldier.
"Argh, they just never give up!" said Dilan angrily.
"Wy don't you change again, Dilan?" said Even, as he fought of a Tornado Step.
"I don't think it works that way... Last time, something triggered inside me..."
"Oh yeah... We need Aeleus again" said a chuckling Even
"You changed?" questioned Braig.
"Yeah, long story"
"Oh, ok... AHHH!!"
One of the Soldier's had grabbed Braig's coat, and a Tornado Step came from behind, and hit his head, knocking him unconscience, yet again.
"Not again, he's always managing to get knocked out..." said Even, working his way over to Braig.
"Oh geez... You ok Dilan?" said Ienzo, as he defended himself against a Shadow.
"Yeah... Ienzo!"
A legion of Shadows had grabbed Ienzo aswell, and began trying to drag him under, into the Dark Realm. Dilan summoned one of his lances unintentionally, and striked two of the Shadows down.
"Hold on!" he yelled out, as he hit another Shadow.
But then another Tornado Step came along. It tripped Dilan over, an also tried to hit Ienzo, but missed miserably.
"Ouch... You still with us Dilan?" said Even, but he recieved no reply.
"Even! Help me!" yelled out Ienzo, struggling against the darkness.
Even spun around, only to find that he had already been fully dragged under.
"Ienzo! Not you too!! No..."
Even had never been angry, so we know it wasn't anger that triggered this change. It was his failure as a guardian that brought this on. The whole street suddenly became increasingly cold. A snowy breeze blew throughout the street too. The walls of the buildings around him began to freeze, and form icicles. He embraced the cold feeling, the same feeling running through his heart. The icicles began to make a path towards him, then, a group of larger icicels formed around him, just as the rocks had done for Aeleus. He cried out from this ice prison: "Ice! Embrace my cold heart!". And as with the others, it did. A pedestal formed infront of the ice prison, and slowly began to build up an oval shape. It was a shield. Even picked it up, then swung the bottom end into the ice. It completely shattered, pieces flew across the street, scattered all around. As they flew, the breeze re shaped them, into sharper shards, then changed direction, and headed for the groups of Heartless. "You've takem too much from us! Now, you wil pay!!!"
As Even yelled this out, icicles formed in the wake of him moving his had around. They shot through all the remaining Heartless. "Yeah, how do you like that? Haha!"
As the groups fell back into darkness, releasing the hearts again, Ienzo came back to the surface. "Ienzo! You ok?"
"Yeah... Hey, 'like the shield!"
He was still smiling, despite what he had just been through. "Oh, thanks. You sure -"
Even was cut off by the sound of something; something further away. "Even, go. You're the only one of us fit to fight" Dilan said from under his arm.
"What about Ie-"
"I'll be fine! Just go, and take care, ok?"
"Right then!"
And with that, he shot off towards the origin of the sound.
Right! Well, here it is, the one you'v all been waiting for! CHAPPTERRRRRRRRRRRRR 10!!!
Enjoy!!
Chapter 10: Feminine Touch
"Wouldn't you like to know?" said a cheeky voice.
"Yes I would, but you're not going to tell me, are you?"
"Not now Aeleus, not now"
"How do you...?"
"I'm too smart, hehe... Wait, can you hear that?"
"Yeah... Heartless?"
"Hmm..."
"What's up?" Aeleus said, puzzled by her stance.
"If it is them, we're going to need more help"
"What?"
"You can come out now!" she yelled to a close by building.
Another figure tentively walked out from behind the building. It stumbled a lot, and walked incredibly nervously.
"Don't worry, I'll look after you!" said the female.
"I know you will Larxene, but..." said the new, slightly high pitched voice.
"Larxene, ey?" said Aeleus, with a great smirk.
"Good work, Drippy..." said Larxene.
"Stop calling me that! It's annoying..."
"Well maybe you should stop blurting out my name!"
"Hah, I can see this is going nowhere fast" said Aeleus, laughing at the same time.
But just as he had finished speaking, another larger Heartless appeared on top of the skyscraper.
"What's that?" said Larxene, allowing her hood to fall back, revealing her soft face.
"AHHHH!!! Run, run away!!" screamed "Drippy".
"Drippy!! Oh fine then... Aeleus, do you know what that is?" she said, shifting around trying to get a better view of it.
"Uhh..."
Aeleus was too taken back by Larxene's features.
"Too busy looking at my beautiful face, huh?" said Larxene, giggling.
"Actually, yes... But, uhh..."
A look of surprise washed over her face. She also began to blush a little.
"Thankyou..." she said quietly.
"No problems" Aeleus said, scratching the back of his head.
"But anyway, getting back to the Heartless matter" he continued, "It's a Trickmaster" the look of surprise now on his face, as this new memory entered into his mind.
"Oh great, looks like Drippy would have been really good here... I mean, you can see the fire too, can't you? Ah well..."
"Well, we just have to do what we can now"
*
Back with the other four, trouble was being experienced by them.
"Why do they akways follow us?" said Ienzo, guarding himself against a Soldier.
"Argh, they just never give up!" said Dilan angrily.
"Wy don't you change again, Dilan?" said Even, as he fought of a Tornado Step.
"I don't think it works that way... Last time, something triggered inside me..."
"Oh yeah... We need Aeleus again" said a chuckling Even
"You changed?" questioned Braig.
"Yeah, long story"
"Oh, ok... AHHH!!"
One of the Soldier's had grabbed Braig's coat, and a Tornado Step came from behind, and hit his head, knocking him unconscience, yet again.
"Not again, he's always managing to get knocked out..." said Even, working his way over to Braig.
"Oh geez... You ok Dilan?" said Ienzo, as he defended himself against a Shadow.
"Yeah... Ienzo!"
A legion of Shadows had grabbed Ienzo aswell, and began trying to drag him under, into the Dark Realm. Dilan summoned one of his lances unintentionally, and striked two of the Shadows down.
"Hold on!" he yelled out, as he hit another Shadow.
But then another Tornado Step came along. It tripped Dilan over, an also tried to hit Ienzo, but missed miserably.
"Ouch... You still with us Dilan?" said Even, but he recieved no reply.
"Even! Help me!" yelled out Ienzo, struggling against the darkness.
Even spun around, only to find that he had already been fully dragged under.
"Ienzo! Not you too!! No..."
Even had never been angry, so we know it wasn't anger that triggered this change. It was his failure as a guardian that brought this on. The whole street suddenly became increasingly cold. A snowy breeze blew throughout the street too. The walls of the buildings around him began to freeze, and form icicles. He embraced the cold feeling, the same feeling running through his heart. The icicles began to make a path towards him, then, a group of larger icicels formed around him, just as the rocks had done for Aeleus. He cried out from this ice prison: "Ice! Embrace my cold heart!". And as with the others, it did. A pedestal formed infront of the ice prison, and slowly began to build up an oval shape. It was a shield. Even picked it up, then swung the bottom end into the ice. It completely shattered, pieces flew across the street, scattered all around. As they flew, the breeze re shaped them, into sharper shards, then changed direction, and headed for the groups of Heartless. "You've takem too much from us! Now, you wil pay!!!"
As Even yelled this out, icicles formed in the wake of him moving his had around. They shot through all the remaining Heartless. "Yeah, how do you like that? Haha!"
As the groups fell back into darkness, releasing the hearts again, Ienzo came back to the surface. "Ienzo! You ok?"
"Yeah... Hey, 'like the shield!"
He was still smiling, despite what he had just been through. "Oh, thanks. You sure -"
Even was cut off by the sound of something; something further away. "Even, go. You're the only one of us fit to fight" Dilan said from under his arm.
"What about Ie-"
"I'll be fine! Just go, and take care, ok?"
"Right then!"
And with that, he shot off towards the origin of the sound.
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Nice chapter!
I can't wait for the next one (which will hopefully be up in less time than it took to get this one up).
And I was right about my suspicions of that "mysterious person" in the earlier chapter, and I think I know who "drippy" is.
Nice chapter!
I can't wait for the next one (which will hopefully be up in less time than it took to get this one up).
And I was right about my suspicions of that "mysterious person" in the earlier chapter, and I think I know who "drippy" is.
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"Drippy", huh?
"He would be good around fire", huh?
I think I know who this one is too now!
And, at last! Another great chaper!
"Drippy", huh?
"He would be good around fire", huh?
I think I know who this one is too now!
And, at last! Another great chaper!
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Hooray!!! New Chapter!!! Great story, by the way. I have been reading this story for a while, cannot wait until the next chapter.
Hooray!!! New Chapter!!! Great story, by the way. I have been reading this story for a while, cannot wait until the next chapter.
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lol Drippy, and yes, I knew it was Larxene, the "lightning fast" part tipped me off.
lol Drippy, and yes, I knew it was Larxene, the "lightning fast" part tipped me off.
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YAY!!! Another Chap ( FINALLY XD )
I knew it was Larxene and I already know who Drippy is X3
Keep it up
YAY!!! Another Chap ( FINALLY XD )
I knew it was Larxene and I already know who Drippy is X3
Keep it up
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