this is my first fan fic so plz bear with me.the first chapter is not good but it gets better.trust me!i would like to thank Darkisaac for helping me create names for sum characters.thx!here i go:
Chapter 1: struggle
"I'm a little old for kiddie games", said the boy. A seventeen year old being challenged to fight a fifteen year old just didn't seem fair . "You know what i think?", said the fifteen year old. "I think that your just afraid that your gonna lose". The seventeen year old replied, "fine, i'll take you on. Who ever you are.""it's Hayner", he said. "I'm Axel. Got it memorized?" "Let's get this started." Hayner announced. "Let's", Axel said. The two suddenly charged at each other, weapons raised. Hayner tried a few quick motion attacks, but Axel just batted them away. "See...kiddie stuff,"Axel said.
Axel dodged Hayner's attacks and got a few hits of his own in. He could tell Hayner strength was waning. Finally, Axel decided to end it. He rolled under one of Hayner's horizontal slashes, got behind him and hit him in the back with a quick stabbing motion. Hayner fell to the ground, moaning in pain. "I'm getting so sick of this town and these ridiculous children and thier stupid "struggle battle's". Axel left Hayner and wandered the streets of Twilight Town.
what do u guys think???
Chapter 1: struggle
"I'm a little old for kiddie games", said the boy. A seventeen year old being challenged to fight a fifteen year old just didn't seem fair . "You know what i think?", said the fifteen year old. "I think that your just afraid that your gonna lose". The seventeen year old replied, "fine, i'll take you on. Who ever you are.""it's Hayner", he said. "I'm Axel. Got it memorized?" "Let's get this started." Hayner announced. "Let's", Axel said. The two suddenly charged at each other, weapons raised. Hayner tried a few quick motion attacks, but Axel just batted them away. "See...kiddie stuff,"Axel said.
Axel dodged Hayner's attacks and got a few hits of his own in. He could tell Hayner strength was waning. Finally, Axel decided to end it. He rolled under one of Hayner's horizontal slashes, got behind him and hit him in the back with a quick stabbing motion. Hayner fell to the ground, moaning in pain. "I'm getting so sick of this town and these ridiculous children and thier stupid "struggle battle's". Axel left Hayner and wandered the streets of Twilight Town.
what do u guys think???
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