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Post chapahtah pweeaase? Pretty please with a pizza and hot cheetos on top? It's actually pretty good.
EDIT: Ummm... 2?
EDIT: Ummm... 2?
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Fanfiction ► Without The Heartless (AGAIN)
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25!KingGabriel_VXI said:
plz dont smack the crap out of me if im wrong!
Erm. O.O
Im behind on my typing... o.o ITS NOT MY FAULT!
I couldnt update until my sister made my lemon and she was taking so long!
Argh!
o.o...And you idiots! Youre wrong! Stupid stupid stupid! xD jk But teh numbah is -324Gabe. =P
Myra scurries off to the bathroom. A lady coming out of the bathroom holds the door open for Myra.
Myra: Thank you.
Amy: No problem.
The girl (Amy) is very sexy and has a lusty look on her face.
Riku: Sigh. (smacks self) Stupid stupid stupid!
Amy stands in the ball room, looking around for any hot guy. Sora and Kairi are talking to Riku. They are handing him his birthday present from them.
Sora: hands Riku a razor) You have got to shave that thing, Riku.
Kairi; It makes you look old.
Riku: Maybe if you didn’t have it, when you looked in the mirror, you wouldn’t see your dad.
Riku: Riiiiiight.
Kairi: The instructions are on the back of the box incase you can’t do it yourself.
Riku: Sure. Thanks.
Riku puts the shaver in his pocket and goes back to the punch bowl.
Kovue is talking to Amy and pointing at Riku.
Riku: Argh…
S-dad: That’s the guy.
Amy: Okay, thanks, Kovue!
Amy kisses Kovue on the cheek and walks toward Riku.
S-mom: Who was she?!
S-dad: No one special.
S-mom: Yeah right!
Sora’s mom punches him in the gut.
S-dad: OW!
Riku watches Amy as she comes trotting toward him.
Riku: …
Amy: skips over to Riku)
Riku’s eyes lock on to her breasts.
Amy; Hi!
Riku: …Hello.
Amy: Are you the birthday boy?
Riku: Yes.
Amy: I have a present for you, Riku. (winks at him)
Riku: What kind of present?
Amy: A birthday present, silly.
Riku: Is it something I can touch?
Amy: You can touch all you want.
Riku: Is it something that will get me in trouble?
Amy: Maybe, but I like trouble.
Riku: What is it?
Amy: It’s a surprise!
Riku: ...When do I get it?
Amy: As soon as you want it. Am I making you nervous?
Amy puts her hands on Riku’s strong pushup-swollen chest.
Riku: Of course not.
Amy: Are you suffering from paranoia? (moves hands over his chest)
Riku; No.
Amy: Okay. Would you like to get your present?
Tyra: And I was like “No!” and-
Tyra glances at Riku and her eyes widen.
Tyra: Who is that woman over there hitting on my sister’s man?!
S-dad: That’s my friend Amy.
Tyra: I think she needs a little more eye shadow! (pops knuckles) Why is she being so friendly?!
S-dad: It’s her job.
Tyra: What?! You hired a WHORE to seduce Riku?!?!?!
S-dad: Uh-
Tyra: When Myra finds out about this-
Amy: Let’s go.
Amy smiles and takes Riku’s hand and pulls him toward the back.
Riku: Let’s go where?!
Amy: To my hotel room, Riku. (pulls him)
Myra comes thru the hallway and sees Amy dragging Riku off.
Riku: But…I don’t wanna-
Riku glances back at Myra.
Myra: ...
Assuming the worst, Myra runs back into the bathroom.
Tyra: See what you did!
Tyra back hand smacks Kovue and follows Myra.
Tyra: Myra, wait up!
S-dad: OW!
Wakka: It-a hurts ya?
S-dad: ...Ow…
In Amy's hotel room...
Amy: pushes Riku on the bed)
Riku: I’m not too sure about this.
Amy: You’re so funny.
Amy pulls her dress off revealing her naked body.
Hehehehehehehehe…
Riku: Um!
Amy sits in Riku’s lap.
Amy: Ready for your present?
Riku: No-
Amy French kisses him.
Riku: …
She kisses him again and he kisses her back. She starts to unbutton his pants.
Amy: unbuttons his pants)
Riku: Uh, stop.
Amy: Huh?
Riku: I can’t do this.
Amy: You just need some motivation.(unzips his pants) I can already tell you want me; you’re as hard as a bat-
Riku: Hey! I’m trying to be nice cause you’re so horny, but I already told you!
Riku pushes her off.
Riku: I said I don’t want it, so back the hell off of me! Damn!
Amy: You don’t wanna sleep with me?!
Riku: No! I don’t even know your name!
Amy: Then why do have a condom in your pocket?!
Riku: Because I’ve got something planned and it doesn’t include you!
Amy bursts out crying after Riku walks out, slamming the door.
Amy: I’m a slut!!! (cries)
A few seconds later…
Riku: knocks on her door) ...-
Amy: It’s open!
Riku: comes in) Can I use your bathroom?
Amy: sniffles) Sure.
Riku goes in her bathroom and looks in the mirror.
Riku: ...
He gets out his razor and shaves his beard and mustache.
Amy: cries)
Riku: Now that looks good.
Amy: What are you doing in-
Riku busts the mirror.
Amy screams and then faints. One again, the alarm goes off and Riku runs out. He runs down the halls, pass the men’s’ bathroom when-
Tyra: I know, Myra. (opens door)
Riku: runs into the door)
Riku blacks out for a couple of seconds and falls.
Im behind on my typing... o.o ITS NOT MY FAULT!
I couldnt update until my sister made my lemon and she was taking so long!
Argh!
o.o...And you idiots! Youre wrong! Stupid stupid stupid! xD jk But teh numbah is -324Gabe. =P
Myra scurries off to the bathroom. A lady coming out of the bathroom holds the door open for Myra.
Myra: Thank you.
Amy: No problem.
The girl (Amy) is very sexy and has a lusty look on her face.
Riku: Sigh. (smacks self) Stupid stupid stupid!
Amy stands in the ball room, looking around for any hot guy. Sora and Kairi are talking to Riku. They are handing him his birthday present from them.
Sora: hands Riku a razor) You have got to shave that thing, Riku.
Kairi; It makes you look old.
Riku: Maybe if you didn’t have it, when you looked in the mirror, you wouldn’t see your dad.
Riku: Riiiiiight.
Kairi: The instructions are on the back of the box incase you can’t do it yourself.
Riku: Sure. Thanks.
Riku puts the shaver in his pocket and goes back to the punch bowl.
Kovue is talking to Amy and pointing at Riku.
Riku: Argh…
S-dad: That’s the guy.
Amy: Okay, thanks, Kovue!
Amy kisses Kovue on the cheek and walks toward Riku.
S-mom: Who was she?!
S-dad: No one special.
S-mom: Yeah right!
Sora’s mom punches him in the gut.
S-dad: OW!
Riku watches Amy as she comes trotting toward him.
Riku: …
Amy: skips over to Riku)
Riku’s eyes lock on to her breasts.
Amy; Hi!
Riku: …Hello.
Amy: Are you the birthday boy?
Riku: Yes.
Amy: I have a present for you, Riku. (winks at him)
Riku: What kind of present?
Amy: A birthday present, silly.
Riku: Is it something I can touch?
Amy: You can touch all you want.
Riku: Is it something that will get me in trouble?
Amy: Maybe, but I like trouble.
Riku: What is it?
Amy: It’s a surprise!
Riku: ...When do I get it?
Amy: As soon as you want it. Am I making you nervous?
Amy puts her hands on Riku’s strong pushup-swollen chest.
Riku: Of course not.
Amy: Are you suffering from paranoia? (moves hands over his chest)
Riku; No.
Amy: Okay. Would you like to get your present?
Tyra: And I was like “No!” and-
Tyra glances at Riku and her eyes widen.
Tyra: Who is that woman over there hitting on my sister’s man?!
S-dad: That’s my friend Amy.
Tyra: I think she needs a little more eye shadow! (pops knuckles) Why is she being so friendly?!
S-dad: It’s her job.
Tyra: What?! You hired a WHORE to seduce Riku?!?!?!
S-dad: Uh-
Tyra: When Myra finds out about this-
Amy: Let’s go.
Amy smiles and takes Riku’s hand and pulls him toward the back.
Riku: Let’s go where?!
Amy: To my hotel room, Riku. (pulls him)
Myra comes thru the hallway and sees Amy dragging Riku off.
Riku: But…I don’t wanna-
Riku glances back at Myra.
Myra: ...
Assuming the worst, Myra runs back into the bathroom.
Tyra: See what you did!
Tyra back hand smacks Kovue and follows Myra.
Tyra: Myra, wait up!
S-dad: OW!
Wakka: It-a hurts ya?
S-dad: ...Ow…
In Amy's hotel room...
Amy: pushes Riku on the bed)
Riku: I’m not too sure about this.
Amy: You’re so funny.
Amy pulls her dress off revealing her naked body.
Hehehehehehehehe…
Riku: Um!
Amy sits in Riku’s lap.
Amy: Ready for your present?
Riku: No-
Amy French kisses him.
Riku: …
She kisses him again and he kisses her back. She starts to unbutton his pants.
Amy: unbuttons his pants)
Riku: Uh, stop.
Amy: Huh?
Riku: I can’t do this.
Amy: You just need some motivation.(unzips his pants) I can already tell you want me; you’re as hard as a bat-
Riku: Hey! I’m trying to be nice cause you’re so horny, but I already told you!
Riku pushes her off.
Riku: I said I don’t want it, so back the hell off of me! Damn!
Amy: You don’t wanna sleep with me?!
Riku: No! I don’t even know your name!
Amy: Then why do have a condom in your pocket?!
Riku: Because I’ve got something planned and it doesn’t include you!
Amy bursts out crying after Riku walks out, slamming the door.
Amy: I’m a slut!!! (cries)
A few seconds later…
Riku: knocks on her door) ...-
Amy: It’s open!
Riku: comes in) Can I use your bathroom?
Amy: sniffles) Sure.
Riku goes in her bathroom and looks in the mirror.
Riku: ...
He gets out his razor and shaves his beard and mustache.
Amy: cries)
Riku: Now that looks good.
Amy: What are you doing in-
Riku busts the mirror.
Amy screams and then faints. One again, the alarm goes off and Riku runs out. He runs down the halls, pass the men’s’ bathroom when-
Tyra: I know, Myra. (opens door)
Riku: runs into the door)
Riku blacks out for a couple of seconds and falls.
Yes you are
NOO I WAS WRONG!
But we got a chapter anyways!
AND IT WAS AWESOME!!!
LAWL..
Off topic- Dark Keyblade!!! Why arent you ever on AIM!!?!?!? Ya gotta get on so I can hit on- *cough*- i mean chat with you! D00de! I gotta chat with mah fans.
Off topic- Dark Keyblade!!! Why arent you ever on AIM!!?!?!? Ya gotta get on so I can hit on- *cough*- i mean chat with you! D00de! I gotta chat with mah fans.
umm...I hope you know D_K is a guy....O_O
Bold, brave, cool, lemony, made by Gabe the best fanfic maker, whats not to like about it? Your crazy not to read it.
Why I like the fanfic: First fanfic I read and only one because it has the best dam story you can get in the forums.
Why I like the fanfic: First fanfic I read and only one because it has the best dam story you can get in the forums.
I know that. o.o;;;King_Mickey1000 said:
I said chat, not hit on! <.<;;
Dont make fun of me cause Im bi. >.>;; *gets a Q-tip and cleans ears*
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WOOOO chapter. He ran BAM into the door. Awaiting a chapahter mon capitan.
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ouch, straight into the door o_o...
i did that once <.< >.> it hurt like hell and my head was sore...for a long time
oh well, update soooooooon @_@
i did that once <.< >.> it hurt like hell and my head was sore...for a long time
oh well, update soooooooon @_@
OMG!!!! You posted yesterday!?!!? K_M told me that you didn't! Must get revenge! *calls redharry* Hey red, i need eugheys mob really quick... MWUAHAHHAHA!!!!
Great Chapter gabe. I though i was gonna go back to hating riku and wishing he was dead again. That makes about 5 mirrors hes broken right?
Great Chapter gabe. I though i was gonna go back to hating riku and wishing he was dead again.
That makes about 5 mirrors hes broken right?*gives Dark_Keyblade the phone number for eughey's mob* her ya go ^_^ order in the next 14351361341134536532 minutes and they'll double your order! yay! lol
riku ran into a door....it was like...BAM and then BAM! and then BAM BAM BAM! and then some more BAMS! and a BANG! maybe even a BOOM! WOW! lol
riku ran into a door....it was like...BAM and then BAM! and then BAM BAM BAM! and then some more BAMS! and a BANG! maybe even a BOOM! WOW! lol
Gabriel;You don't want to be adopted?!?! *broken heart* </3 xD jk
Srry well i dont feel right that way. Great chappies!
(Off Topic; Have you ever eaten tomato flavored muffins? they taste really good! Try some!
Srry well i dont feel right that way. Great chappies!
(Off Topic; Have you ever eaten tomato flavored muffins? they taste really good! Try some!
*bites into a tamato flavored muffin*....o.o.....needs more tomato. *squirts ketchup on muffin* there we go! *eats muffin* DELICIOUS! ^_^
Gabe, post a chapter! NOW! ..i mean...PLEASE!
Gabe, post a chapter! NOW! ..i mean...PLEASE!
redharry123 said:
It was my original recipe!!You can also try tomato flavered ice scream and scones. My penguins can send u some from their underground fortress!
Gabriel i am speechless about your chappies.There is nothing i can think of that describes them so i will simply say awesome!
scones? icecream? my day keeps getting better and better! YAHOO!
now gabe, what have i told you? *pulls on his ear and drags him to the computer* POST YOU SHALL FEEL THE WRATH OF ALL THAT IS.....FURRY! *gets bunny army ready*
now gabe, what have i told you? *pulls on his ear and drags him to the computer* POST YOU SHALL FEEL THE WRATH OF ALL THAT IS.....FURRY! *gets bunny army ready*
Should I post one? YOURE BEING MEAN TO MEH.
*turns away* Hmph. <.<;;
=P
*turns away* Hmph. <.<;;
=P
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