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~Bleach: Ressurection of Nemesis (Jet_Fire & †AoІ Production)~



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Chaotic Dreams

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WARNING: Continue reading if you have seen Bleach past the first arc, or if you want the plot to be spoilt for you....

It has always been said that the original is always the strongest and most powerful... Unfortunately, this is the same for the Hollows. The first hollow was rightfully called Nemesis, because no matter who was in it's way, they would be obliterated. Countless Shinigami, Quincy and average people fell to this monstrosity, feeding it with more and more souls.

But every monster has a weakness. Nemesis' was that he actually had a spirit level, and this was how he was so powerful. The captains of the 13 squads gathered together, and in secret began to create a tower made of deathstone, a material known to sap all spiritual and psychic energy. Once it was finished, they named it the Shrine of Penitence, and revealed it to the rest of Soul Society.

Nemesis put up a battle of epic proportions, but was eventually sealed under the Shrine of Penitence, and a second seal, the execution tower was put there to keep him at bay.

Unfortunately, when Ichigo desroyed the execution tower while rescuing Rukia, he allowed for Nemesis to begin restoring his power. Hollows have begun to appear in Soul Society more frequently, and the captains are starting to whisper conspiracies about his return....

Little do they know, it is too late.

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In this RP, all captain and lieutenant spots are open. There is ONE player allowed to play as the hollows and Nemesis, but you must have a very good rep around KHInsider.

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Rules:
1. No GM/PP
2. Cursing is allowed but keep it under control
3. No spots will be saved!
4. Be literate
5. No killing off an RP Character
6. Don't double post
7. PM AoD or myself if any problems are happening in the RP.

There is an OoC thread for this RP. ANY and ALL questions or OoC go to this thread. http://forums.khinsider.com/showthread.php?t=77699
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Name: (Your name)
Age: (How old you are)
Gender: (Male or Female)

Appearance: (What you look like. One paragraph minimum)
Personality: (What you act like. Two sentences minimum)

Position: (Captain, lieutenant, quincy...etc)
Specialty: (Captains MUST have a specialty. Medical, Fighter, Demon Arts....etc. All must be different and lieutenant can't have a different specialty.)

Zanpakuto Name: (The name of your Soul Slayer)
Zanpakuto Sealed: (What your Soul Slayer looks like when in its sealed form.)

Shikai Release: (ShiKai = When the people in the Bleach universe say a command and then the name of the sword, followed by a transformation. Renji's ShiKai is Zabimaru, the spiky-whip sword.)
Incantation To Unlock: (What you say to release Shikai)

Bankai Release: (BanKai = The even higher up power up where the people say "Ban Kai" followed by an even longer name than originally. This is usually a monstrously huge weapon that is capable of mass destruction. Renji's Ban Kai would be Hihou Zabimaru, the giant snake bone sword.)

History: (The past behind your character. Two paragraphs minimum. No forgotten pasts!!!)

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1st Division - Captain: NPC Lieutenant: ~open~
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2nd Division - Captain: ~open~ Lieutenant: ~open~
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3rd Division - Captain: ~open~ Lieutenant: ~open~
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4th Division - Captain: ~open~ Lieutenant: ~open~
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5th Division - Captain: Chisoku Kasai (Angel of Death) Lieutenant: ~open~
Specialty: Control of Fire

6th Division - Captain: Edward Arthrimn (Breakdown) Lieutenant: ~open~
Specialty: Knight of Elements

7th Division - Captain: ~open~ Lieutenant: ~open~
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8th Division - Captain: ~Unknown~ (Redemption) Lieutenant: ~Unknown~ (mastersepiroth)
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9th Division - Captain: ~open~ Lieutenant: ~open~
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10th Division - Captain: Kenji Arabishi (RoxasXII) Lieutenant: ~open~
Specialty: Control of Air

11th Division - Captain: Ryoku Kontan (Jet_Fire) Lieutenant: Ishikawa Makoto (cricket)
Specialty: Control of Ice

12th Division - Captain: ~open~ Lieutenant: ~open~
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13th Division - Captain: ~open~ Lieutenant: ~open~
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Angel Of Death

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Name: Chisoku Kasai
Age At Death: 18
Age: 19
Birth Date: 07.08.1970
Gender: Female
Home: Soul Society
Height: 158 cm (5' 2")
Weight: 68 kg (151 pound)

Appearance: Chisoku stands around 5’2”, with long blonde hair that hangs around the mid of her back. Chisoku body is build for speed more then power, but she’s no push over. Chisoku wears a mask of the hollow that kill her family when she was a Shinigami. Chisoku wears basic Shinigami robes, the only item different is a red belt.

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Position: 5th Division Captain
Specialty: Element of Fire
Nickname: Flames of 5th Division
Motto: “If anyone get is our way, they’ll get burnt!”

Personality: Chisoku is dark, and tends not to talk to anyone. She has a short temper, and is very merciless when angered.

Zanpakuto Name: Faia-Konpaku
Zanpakuto Sealed: Faia-Konpaku made up off two 1-handed katana, the hilts are wrapped with a red and black material. The blade’s is about the same length as her arm. The sheath’s for Faia-Konpaku is black with a red flame pattern on the sides one is place on either side.

Shikai Release:
Chisoku pushes the two swords together side by side, the hilts join making 1 sword with two blades. The blades are slightly larger, Chisoku can use Faia-Konpaku too shoot fire balls at her enemies, also the blades heat up to massive temperatures quickly.

Incantation To Unlock: "Faia-Konpaku, Burn Our Enemies To Ashes!”

Bankai Release: When Chisoku uses Bankai the two blades melt together forming a blade engulfed in flame. In Bankai Chisoku’s Zanpakuto blade becomes thinner yet longer then when it was in Shikai, the heat from the flames on Faia-Konpaku can melt through most metals. Chisoku can use Faia-Konpaku to create a fire dragon, but she rarely uses it because she still can’t control it.

When Chisoku goes into Bankai her robes change slightly, a flame pattern come up the legs of the robes. She also removes the hollow mask revealing her face, her lips are a bright red colour almost looks like there on fire and her eye pupils red.

History:
Chisoku’s afterlife wasn’t any better then her life before she died, she was still treated like dirt. Chisoku was sick off benign treated this way, she saw how people respected the Shinigami, “If I become a Shinigami, no one will dare treat me like shit again” Chisoku thought to herself. Chisoku already had sprit energy stronger then a Shinigami Lieutenant, the only problem was she didn’t know how to use it.

Chisoku gradually learnt how to control this power, she soon became a Shinigami in the 10th Division under the command of Tōshirō Hitsugaya. Chisoku goes on a mission into the real world, were she confronts the hollow who killed her family when she was young. But this wasn’t any ordinary hollow, it was a vizard. The vizard takes off its mask and throws it away. The vizard comes close to killing Chisoku but some inner strength and will for revenge on the vizard gives Chisoku a bust of energy and she kills him. Chisoku wears the mask as a reminder of her revenge.

One Chisoku return she finds out that the 5th Division Captain has died, thus being a opportunity for Chisoku to advance. Chisoku is fighting the other Lieutenant who wish for the position as Captain, she beats them all one by one until she is to fight her Lieutenant Rangiku Matsumoto. Since Captain’s must have the ability to use there Bankai to rank to Captain Chisoku uses her Bankai, she unleashes the fire dragon which almost kills Rangiku Matsumoto with its first hit. Within months Chisoku becomes 5th Division Captain.

Battle Theme Song:
No Reason - Sum41
Goodbye - SR-71
Three days grace - Animal I Have Become
 
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Name: Kenji Arabishi

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Appearance: Kenji is a very stern looking man with black hair that extends down to his shoulders. he wears the captains vest over his regular garments an d has 2 swords one along his backwhich is the sword he uses regularly then there is the swords kept ina hilt on his left side which he never uses for reasons of his past.http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f230/roxas06/swordsman_by_Takun32.jpg

Personality: Kenji is always closed away from others unlike many captains he is often quiet and takes things very seriously. Kenji feels strongly for young children and takes care of the ones that reside in the Soul society they all call him big brother. however when there is danger around he rarely speaks just destroys the opposition.


Position: 10th Division Captain

Specialty: Fighter Master swordsman. Able to manipulate the wind

Zanpakuto Name: Kirmaru

Zanpakuto Sealed: The blade has a black and white design that goes upward around the edges of the blade. the hilt is wrapped with a black and white cloth with intricate designs on it. The secondary blade is black and red similar to the design of the first blade. however he never refers to this blade as his zampakto just a piece of his pass he wishes to forget. The blade itself is his Senseis Zampakto that his sensei told him to keep safe as his last wish. the man that killed his sensei wielded 2 blades therefore he wishes not to be as such

Shikai Release: Kenji unsheaths Kiramaru and says Burst Kiramaru" The blade creates a small tornado around it which moves at a speed so fast that it cuts the very flesh and metal. As the wind picks up if a attack is thrown if the opponet dodges the wind can either pull him in or push him away depending on the users will.

Incantation To Unlock: Rip the wind! Kiramaru!

Bankai Release: BanKai = Kaze-tenma Kiramaru. When Kenji pulls out te secondary blade The blades themseves distort slowly until they turn into twin Wind Dragons. this realese allows Kenji to fly gain total control over the air. each time he whips the sword in a direction the wind demon charges to that area. so not only does the opponent have to dodge the blade but the incoming dragon attack. the dragons wings are emded onto Kenji's back and the blade itself turns into a white seemingly transparent blade which holds spikes that aim upward all around the blade down to the sword guard. the swords gets bigger in lenght and in width.

History: When Kenji was alive he used to work under a master swordsman. this swordsman taught him everything he knew about combat. Kenji's father was strongly against violence therefor, he forbid kenji from fighting. On kenji's 21st birthday a Opposing army raided his small village pirating all there gooods and belongings. Kenji pushed many of them back single handedly from the teachings of his teacher. He made his way to the dojo to watch his teacher killed in cold blood. he then engaged the villian in mortal combat to the death and he killed the man with a final strike from his steel. however the man was able to pull enough strenght to stab kenji though the heart.

He now dispises the day June 15 and he tries to stay alone on this day. he still looks for his sensei at the soul society however the chances of him meeting him are zero and 1. He seemingly gets along with every captain and he tries to steer clear of all and any annoynaces. in his previous life he had a younger brother which he still longs to see to this day. this is one of the reasons he takes care of poor children and those who wish to be loved. Kenji can always be found sitting on the large pillar that overlooks the pond. Whenever he is there it always means he is in deep thought

He fights in a dark style he uses tremendous skill and counters to slay his opponets. even though he has 2 swords at his side, he never reveals his second sword unless in immense danger or it is a absolute emergency. this is becauase his master was slayin by a man that wieldied dual blades. Duel wielding was his specialty in his previous life but he has become a single sword master.
 
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Name: (Your name)
Age: (How old you are)
Gender: (Male or Female)

Appearance: (What you look like. One paragraph minimum)
Personality: (What you act like. Two sentences minimum)

Position: (Captain, lieutenant, quincy...etc)
Specialty: (Captains MUST have a specialty. Medical, Fighter, Demon Arts....etc. All must be different and lieutenant can't have a different specialty.)

Zanpakuto Name: (The name of your Soul Slayer)
Zanpakuto Sealed: (What your Soul Slayer looks like when in its sealed form.)

Shikai Release: (ShiKai = When the people in the Bleach universe say a command and then the name of the sword, followed by a transformation. Renji's ShiKai is Zabimaru, the spiky-whip sword.)
Incantation To Unlock: (What you say to release Shikai)

Bankai Release: (BanKai = The even higher up power up where the people say "Ban Kai" followed by an even longer name than originally. This is usually a monstrously huge weapon that is capable of mass destruction. Renji's Ban Kai would be Hihou Zabimaru, the giant snake bone sword.)

History: (The past behind your character. Two paragraphs minimum. No forgotten pasts!!!)
 

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Name: Ryoku Kontan
Age: 20
Gender: Male

Appearance: There a few things that people notice about Ryoku at first glance. The most noticable is his distinguishing hair. He has black hair on the top and half the sides, and underneath is a shining silver. His hair comes down to his shoulder blades, and is usually let out free, except in battle, where it is tyed up with a red, worn piece of material. The next thing people notice are his eyes. They are usually a dark blue colour, his pupils being white. When he goes into battle though, his eyes turn fully red, and the skin around his eyes goes dark, almost black. Lastly is his body structure. For his height of 5'5, he is extremely fast and powerful. When his torso is seen, it is well toned, and his skin is a dark tan, but not black.

He has the typical shinigami uniform, with a few exceptions. The sleeves are shorter, almost at his shoulders, and they are a dark red. Where there is white, they are now stained with blood, giving them a red-ish look also, the older blood giving patches of black through-out. The lower robes are changed to more of the samurai-type pants; long, black and more open towards the end. Over these are like a half-skirt, where they flow over the pants, and still allow freedom to move. On Ryoku's feet are the typical shinigami sandals with red socks instead of white.

Personality: Typically quiet, Ryoku generally only talks when he needs to or giving orders. Things tend to change a little once he begins battle, or has the taste of blood in his mouth. After this, he becomes more sadistic, tending more to torture his enemies, and talk to them before delivering the final blow... often about their mistakes in battle.

Position: 11th Squad Captain
Specialty: Master fighter/swordsman, Control of Ice

History: Ryoku first started off as a simple shinigami, in the lowest seat of the 11th division. He was below average in all his fields, and was extremely lazy, not wanting to learn anything. His captain decided to show him the true battlefield, and took him out on his first mission. After watching Kenpachi anihilate the Hollows with his power, Ryoku wanted more....

He would do anything to surpass his captain now, and studied in each of the four areas. Over the years, he became skilled in the areas of Demon Arts and foot combat, but his main two areas that he focused on were his hand to hand combat and his swordsmanship. Kenpachi took him on more missions, and soon he was at the third seat... but still the power lured him to go further.

This is when he started to go down the wrong path. Training himself in secret, Ryoku soon found out the name of his Zanpakuto. She was a ice maiden, and soon he could easily use his Shikai. After several months of training, he was going to take on Kenpachi... he wanted captain.

The stage was set. Kenpachi against Ryoku. The hundred witnesses surrounded them, and Ryoku lunged first... Kenpachi stood there, his sword at his side. Screams erupted from Ryoku's throat as he swung his Zanpakuto down, striking Kenpachi's chest with all he had.... nothing. Not even a scratch... Ryoku leapt back, and tried to figure out what was wrong. Before he had the chance though, Kenpachi had already thrust his own Zanpakuto through his chest.

... a drop of blood fell from Ryoku's mouth, and with that, the battle was over. Not a word was said by anyone as they all began to move back to their stations. Ryoku fell to his knees, and Kenpachi re-sheathed his sword. The captain turned his back on Ryoku, and walked away. As soon as the now desolate battlefield contained but a single soul, Ryoku raised his head to the sky, and let out an almighty scream... almost sounding like that of a hollow.

In the months to follow, Ryoku slowly started to slip, especially around Kenpachi. He finally gave in, and left Soul Society, but still managed to sustain his Shinigami powers. He travelled to the Real World, hiding his Spirit Power and himself.

He trained for almost a year, and finally came to grip with his Bankai. He mastered it quicker than anyone, and soon returned to Soul Society. The first thing he did was challange Kenpachi again. A roaring laughter emitted in the area, and Kenpachi replied, "This time, I'll kill you..." Ryoku laughed quietly, and whispered, "Try to see me first..."

Again, Ryoku and Kenpachi faced off. But this time, instead of lunging at Kenpachi, Ryoku raised his Zanpakuto to the sky, and yelled "BANKAI!!" The area around them became cold, even Kenpachi shivered a little. Out of no-where, Ryoku lashed out at his enemy, and watched him fall. Before Kenpachi had hit the ground, Ryoku was walking away with the 11th squad jacket over his shoulder. He never actually wears it though...

Now, the time has come for the 13 squads to join and unite for a enemy threat larger than anything else they've encountered.

Zanpakuto Name: Koorikiri.
Zanpakuto Sealed:Ryoku's Zanpakuto looks similar to the normal Zanpakuto's carried by the Shinigami, with a few exceptions. His blade is slightly wider, and has more curve to it. The hilt looks like ice, and the handle is covered in blue and silver material. It has a chain hanging off the handle, with a small frozen tear coming from it.

Shikai Release: After reciting the incantation, Koorikiri's blade becomes longer, almost 5' in length, and is entirely covered in ice. The ice also travels up the arm he holds the Zanpakuto in. Also, the area around him becomes covered in a light, cold mist.

Shikai Incantation: "Cover my steps and freeze the enemy, Koorikiri......"

Bankai Release: Once Ryoku uses Bankai, the area around him freezes, and a heavy mist surrounds him. If Ryoku is ever seen, he is covered in a thick, ice armour. He gains two ice wings and two mist wings on his back. Also, his hair and eyes turn a solid blue, and his hair spikes up. His Zanpakuto becomes extremely thick and long, and shines with a brilliant blue colour.

Theme Song: Storm Centre - Bleach OST
 
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Name: Nemesis
Age: Over 1,000,000 years old.
Gender: Male

Appearance: Nemesis, or the first hollow, appears as accordingly, setting the standard for his descendants. He is humanoid in appearance, sinewy and long-limbed, and a deep grey in colour, with streaks of red across his body. Two stumps protrude just below his shoulderblades that transform into wings.

Personality: As many of those that follow him, Nemesis is melencholy, boardering on psychotic, and often delving deep into psychosis. His personality is much the same as that of 'Hollow' Ichigo's, he believes his own power to be infallible, and screams with laughter whilst fighting.

Position: Hollow Guiding Intelligence
Specialty: Hollowisation - The arts and powers of the Hollow race.

Abilities:

Cero Blast: The red energy blasts produced by many Hollow. It involved compressing a large amount of energy almost instantly and firing it. Cero blasts can often be erratic or unpredictable.

Negacion: An ability exhibited by Menos-class hollows, it involves creating a seperate dimension, either to evade attacks or to rescue allies. This dimension, while taking the place of a normal area in the hollow's current area, and while visible to those not in it, is impossible to penetrate or destroy.

Sonido: The hollow equivilent to the Shinigami Flash-Steps. It allows Hollows to move at an amost instant speed.

History: Nemesis has played a part throughout the histories of both the living world and soul society. In particular, even whilst sealed, he has acted as a guiding mind for the hollows, influencing their movements and actions on an instinctual level. When Inoue's brother, the soon-to-be Hollow Acidwire, was transformed, Nemesis was behind it. When the thousands of hollows converged upon Kakura town following Ishida's use of hollow bait, Nemesis drove them there. Now, his consolidarity over the race threatened by one 'Sousuke Aizen', Nemesis seeks to be freed, and to assume control over his race once more. This is, of couse, only made easier by the first seal being broken.
 
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Re: ~Bleach: Ressurection of Nemesis (Jet_Fire & †AoІ Production)~

Name: Ishikawa Makoto
Age: 19
Gender: Male

Appearance:

Makoto stands roughly at 5'8, with a build meant for a balance of speed and power, appearance wise though, nothing really stands out in that area.
His hair is pure white, a rather shaggy style that drops over his blue eyes of which have a pirecing glare to them.

As far as his attire goes, he wears the normal shinigami uniform of a black and white robe.
The only that would catch your eye here would be the bright blue sheath.

Personality: By no means a happy-go-lucky, out going person, Makoto is the laid-back, slow to anger type.
He is on the border line of anti-social, perfering to only speak on common terms with those he interacts with daily.
However, do not mistake that for him being afraid to speak with others, that is far from it. He will speak his mind to those others freely, it just seems to annoy him, or otherwise displease him to do so.

Makoto may be cocky and a bit arrogant, but he knows his place when it comes to his Captain.
And even though he knows Ryoku could rip him apart in a second, he still has a strange burning desire to be able to defeat him, or at the very least be on the same level as he is.
Despite this, Makoto is loyal to his Captain first and formost above all others, and holds Ryoku in utmost respect, even if he doesn't always agree with his...methods and tendencies.

Position: 11th Squad Lieutenant
Specialty: Control of Ice

Zanpakuto Name: Reiketsu
Zanpakuto Sealed: Reiketsu, when sealed, has a very basic but somewhat unique appearance.
Starting from the hilt, it is wrapped with a blue and gold material.
The guard is a dull golden color, with three points each on the top and bottom.
The blade itself is a long and straight katana, the top end being a deep, sapphire color. While the sharp end of the blade has a silver-blueish tent.

Shikai Release: Two long ribbins, one blue, the other gold, hang from the hilt and are made from the same material that it is wrapped in.
The guard becomes diamond like, spiking out on each side.
Although Reiketsu's shape does not change, the blade changes entirely to the deep, sapphire color and gains what appears to be a scale like effect, one which you would find on a snake.

Incantation To Unlock: "Reiketsu, Come forth and spread your cold poison!"

Bankai Release: (has not yet been achieved) When Makoto releases his bankai, his robes becomes inverted while Makoto's eyes gain the appearence of a snakes.
At this point, Reiketsu compately changes shape. It becomes a large, curved, double-edged sword. It's nearly as big as Makoto himself and reminds of a fang.
In the center of the blade, from the very tip to the guard, is what appears to be blue blood pulsing throughout the rest of the blade by means of small veins that reach out into the sharp edges.
The sharp edges appear as if they could be made from diamonds, being at least 14 to 15 inches wide themselves.
The guard as the same basic appearence as the blade. In the center is the sappire colored blood, while the diamond surrounds it.
The hilt remains the same as before. The blue and golden ribbons from before twist into eachother, growing to about 35 inches in length and has the ability to grew longer if needed.

History:
Makoto, who had died at a young age, resided in Kusajishi (Or the 79th district) for much of his life in Soul Society.
Unlike most people who find false families upon coming to Soul Society, Makoto did not, for whatever the reason.
His life at this point was rather dull. Even though it was Kusajishi, a lower level district, which meant that it had it's fair share of thievery and murder, after while it became nothing new, and pervaded nothing but perhaps a heavy heart for Makoto. If even that.

Makoto was going to change this.
He had decided he wanted the life of a shinigami, from his point of view there was no better life.
Although he failed the entrance exam to the academy on his first try, coming back a mere month later, he was able to pass.

His time there was for the most part, uneventful, but he actually enjoyed it. The thing he enjoyed most was probably gaining his Zanpakuto.
He made a friend here and there, nothing very close but it was something.
He found it funny listening to those few talk about becoming stronger for the reason of surpassing another. This was something he didn't understand.
To him, getting stronger was so he could have a long and entertaining fight, and perhaps even protecting the few close to him.
It wouldn't be untill a while after he graduated from the academy and joined the 11th Division that he would finally understand what they meant.

Makoto gained a seat in the 11th Division, which started out unenjoyable. For the fact that Makoto had no respect for Kenpachi or his lieutenant.
Makoto's personality just clashed with Kenpachi's and Yachiru's. Not that they noticed, since they had very little to do with him.
He tried his very best to get into another squad, but was unable. The only other thing he could think of doing to change the situation was to defeat Kenpachi in a fight. Which was a very laughable thought since Makoto had not yet even learned the name of his Zanpakuto.

Not long after becoming apart of the 11th Division, he heard talk of a man by the name of Ryoku Kontan who had challanged Kenpachi shortly before Makoto joined the squad, and lost horribly.
For whatever the reason, this drove Makoto to want to become stronger. Maybe it was so he would never end up as he did, should Makoto ever do such a thing.
But at the same time, it seemed that even Makoto himself didn't even know why.
However the desire came about, it worked. As the desire kept growing, his Zanpakuto apparently felt it.

"My my, working hard aren't we?" The Zanpakuto had said, sounding as if a hissing snake.
"And for a reason you don't even know yourself. So what's the point? I bet you don't even know the answer to that either. Am I right? What, cat got your tounge?"
"You talk to much for a damn sword."
Makoto said testily, after which was a long silence.
"I guess I'm starting to like you after all. Reiketsu is my name, remember it."

After being able to release Reiketsu, he worked hard to master all of it's aspects. And soon begain to train for his Bankai, but with his drive fading quickly, it didn't look like it would happen anytime soon.
But It still gave him a good reason to stay as far away as he could from Kenpachi and his lieutenant.
Things stayed like this for nearly a year, training and work.
But once again, things would change when a challange would come to Kenpachi, by the very same man as the last challange he got.

Makoto was actually training when the battle took place. But even where he was, he could feel the strong reiatsu from Ryoku.
Because of that strong reiatsu, his training was cut short. However it was long since over with by the time he arrived.
It didn't take long for Makoto to hear the news of Kenpachi's defeat. After all, it's not everyday one of the most powerful and feard shinigami of the gotei 13 is beaten in the blink of an eye.
That right there was a man he could respect.
Not for the fact that had he defeated Kenpachi, but more so because he finished what he had started.
And to top it all off, he seemed to be a man of few words.

The longer he worked under his new captian, the more he came to respect him.
Watching the stregth of Ryoku, this re-newed his desire to become stronger. It was odd though, the person he respected the most, was the one he wanted to surpass the most.
Now he finally understood what it meant to want to surpass another. And his first step to do so, was to become the 11th Division Lieutenant.

Since the defeat of Kenpachi, Yachiru gave up the title of Lieutenant. The spot had just been given away to a person Makoto felt unworthy of such a title.
This was even more reason for him to become the lieutenant.
The current lieutenant laughed at Makoto when he challanged him. For at the time, even though at had been a year since he had reached his shikai release, he had let none know of it.
But, he accepted the challange none the less. And right then and there did the fight take place in front of only one other soul. Captian Ryoku Kontan.

The fight dragged on, when it didn't even need to.
Makoto was having fun, playing with someone who was supposed to be of lieutenant level. He hadn't even release Reiketsu yet, that was until he made a comment about it. The lieutenant demanded for Makoto release his Zanpakuto, and so he did.
"It's a shame, I was having fun here. . .Reiketsu, Come forth and spread your cold poison!"
Four. Thats how many cuts from Reiketsu it took to end that battle after the release.
As the victor of the battle, Ryoku allowed him the position of 11th Squad Lieutenant.

Makoto continues to draw nearer to his Bankai, just as the threat to Soul Society draws ever closer.

Theme Song: Ruthless from Tsubasa
 
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Name: Jin Keninshi

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Appearance: 6'6'' and alittle bit over 275. He has the normal appearral worn by the Captain except the colors are alternated. His pants are white and his under shirt is ripped and white. His jacket is black and the sleeves are torn off. His feet are heavily taped and he where a bandana over his right arm to conseal a scare that he got in a fight with a hollow.
His Zanpakto sheath is positioned horizontally on his lower back and a hole in the back of the jacket is where the handle of the sword hangs from.

Personality: Choonshi has a care free attitude about the life of a Death God. He doesn't really care to fight but will if he has to for the Soul Society.

Position: Captain of the 9th Division

Specialty: Element of Water

Zanpakuto Name: Kirenami

Zanpakuto Sealed: A sleak and long black blade katana. The blade is reversed to prevent himself from hurting others until he releases his Zanpakto.

Shikai Release: The blade of the sword will grow and turn to its normal position. The edge of the blade will turn white. The tip of the blade will become forked and have the appearance of a little pinch fork. The forks of the blade will turn an ocean blue. It gains the ability to gather moisture in the air and shoot waves of water at an enemy or summon the water to his feet and jump to a certain height.

Incantation To Unlock: "Drown my Enemy, Kirenami!"

Bankai Release: The blade will thicken and turn navy blue. The white edge of the blade will become a dark gray. A black serpent will wrap around the blade and a end of the handle will have a serpent's head with the tongue coming out looking like blood red ribbon. The Zanpakto will then be able to control and summon a number of water serpents with a horizontal slash. The moisture around him is able to be seen. He can gather the water and use it as a glider to fly or a extend the distant of a jump.

History: Jin came from a noble family in West Rukongai. Being from a rich family, people didn't really respect him as a child. Him being so young, humble, and carefree, he was often mistaken for a common child of Rukongai. He hung out with other kids of Rukongai and began to distance himself from his noble roots. One of the kids found out his secret and used it to get to Jin. But Jin being humble, didn't really care about what his friends thought of him. He told his friends when it was his time to go train to be a Death God. He waved good bye with a heavy heart and left them behind.

Jin then began to train and people didn't really notice him. Since people only knew him by the people he use to hang out with, they assumed that he was just another charity case. He didn't let anyone know of his status in Rukongai. He trained day in and day out to perfect his craft and began to embraise his zanpakto. He saw his zanpakto in a dream he had and was amazed. Amazed by his years of training, Kirenami told Jin his name. Jin couldn't believe it. Jin awake and grabbed his zanpakto and quickly began training again.

He was given a seat in the 9th division. He loved every minute of it. The training, the missions, every part of it. After 3 years of waiting, he was able to obtain his bankai and challenge for the seat of captian. He felt good about his chances and went ahead with it. But when the problems started to occur in the Soul Society, he had no chance of doing so.

When the betrayal of Gin Ichimaru(3rd Division Captain), Sosuke Aizen(5th Division Captain), and Kaname Tosen(9th Division Captain) happened, Jin assumed position of the 9th Division. Jin felt like he didn't deserve such a position but he realized that he could make up for the trouble that his former captain caused.
 
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Liutenant of squad 8 reserve plz
Name: (Your name)
Age: (How old you are)
Gender: (Male or Female)

Appearance: (What you look like. One paragraph minimum)
Personality: (What you act like. Two sentences minimum)

Position: (Captain, lieutenant, quincy...etc)
Specialty: (Captains MUST have a specialty. Medical, Fighter, Demon Arts....etc. All must be different and lieutenant can't have a different specialty.)

Zanpakuto Name: (The name of your Soul Slayer)
Zanpakuto Sealed: (What your Soul Slayer looks like when in its sealed form.)

Shikai Release: (ShiKai = When the people in the Bleach universe say a command and then the name of the sword, followed by a transformation. Renji's ShiKai is Zabimaru, the spiky-whip sword.)
Incantation To Unlock: (What you say to release Shikai)

Bankai Release: (BanKai = The even higher up power up where the people say "Ban Kai" followed by an even longer name than originally. This is usually a monstrously huge weapon that is capable of mass destruction. Renji's Ban Kai would be Hihou Zabimaru, the giant snake bone sword.)

History: (The past behind your character. Two paragraphs minimum. No forgotten pasts!!!)
 

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I have to say....I am VERY lazy. This is a custom template I made a long time ago, if not accepted, just tell me what to change, or, I can just change the entire thing. Vaizard full of winz<3

6th Captain place, pl0x.

Specialty: Knight of Elements

Name: Edward Arthrimn

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Appearance: Ed starts with normal Blonde hair, spiked in an average fashion, so it stays only on the top of his head. He has brown eyes, with silver goggles above his eyes. His ear is pierced, and of course, he has an average body-build for his young age. He tries to look his best, since he doesn't really want to truely be made fun of by any of his friends, since of course, ya have ta look your best at all times.

Ed wears mostly easily fitted shirts, with short sleeves, so that he can get cold easily on hot days. Matched with easy wear shirts, he likes to wear plain old blue jeans, since they really don't matter, or show anything about a person. His shoes are a mix of red and black, and he wears gloves on each hand. When he turns himself into a Shinigami, he basically only wears a black kimino, which seems weird in this day and era, yet it is what every Shinigami wears. Matched with the outfit, he wears sandals, and plain old socks to mix with.

Personality: Ed isn't that smart, yet he is an average child. He may not look it, but he is pretty smart if you get to know him. He has a short temper, and usually wears a scowl on his face, since he rather not let anyone get to truely know everything about him. On the inside, he is carefree, yet he loves to get into small fights. Since he fights often, he has a strong personality, which is also influenced by Raigar and the Hollow with in him. It's pretty hard for him to control his body at times, since when he is in a battle, he hightens his senses, so that he is ready for absolutly anything that could or would possibly happen. While in the human world, he can be a bit tense, since Hollows appear regularly, and they could hurt either himself, or his friends.

History/bio: Born on Earth, as the majority of weak humans are born on, Edward Arthrimn mixed in with them. He was an average human as well, even if he was a bit different than an average person. His parents, both kind, loved him for who he was, and both had no clue that he had an power, or anything of the sort. He fit in with everyone, and it seemed as if he was just another human on the planet, yet he was not. Ed, from the beginning of his life, had a strange power, one that involved something with those who already passed on long ago. Ed could see spirits, those of dead humans, and even of dead creatures, ever since his date of birth. Strange as it seems, yet true for some apparent reason, which is still left unknown.

When Edward was young, about the age of three, his mother and father died, from an attack by a demon spirit, one who fed on souls so that they could live longer. Cruel as it seemed, yet there were many of these creatures and their numbers kept expanding. As soon as his mother and father died, he basically lost all will to live, with being an only child, he had basically no one to turn to. Since he was young, all he could truely do was live on his own, in a desolated house, with absolutly no one he knew. He decided one thing at this age, he would avenge his parents, no matter what the cost was. It was at this age that his power grew so high, that even scanners at Soul Society had noticed his true powers which were locked away. Strange as it seems, yet Ed was one of the most powerful humans on the Earth, even when he was only three years at the moment.

As he grew to about the age of six, Soul Society decided that now they would take him, and make him one of their own, so that they would have a more powerful shinigami as he slowly grew and aged. On his sixth birthday, he sat lone, still using the money he gained from his mother and father to live on. As soon as he hit age six, every window in his house immediatly blew up, leaving sharps of glass everywhere. In seconds, just about six Rank 3 officers were there, ready to bring him to Soul Society, and Ed didn't hold back at all. At this point, he wanted to leave, since he had no other reason to live on, if he had no family, or anyone to care for him whatsoever. At the thought of this, he decided that if he went, it would be for the best, and probably be best for everyone else as well.

With in hours, Ed was in Soul Societies main base, and immediatly sent to the school there to train his powers as fast as he possibly good. Although he was only six, he was progressing with faster speeds than any of the other Shinigami, who were all years ahead of him. Although Ed did not have a blade of his own, he was skilled at using his hands in combat, even if it was against a blade. Since he was young, his mind was not fully developed, so he still didn't know some combat techniques, and wasn't the best at strategy. Even though he was alone in this world, he felt almost as if he truely had a purpose now, and that was to protect any person he could, at all costs. It was a strange thing, yet he couldn't do any Kidou at all, and he still didn't have a Zanpaku-to of his own to fight with, which left him at a disadvantage in any battle. He usually fought with someone elses sword, yet he couldn't release the full power of the sword. This is when he realized, he would need to find his own death god powers.

As soon as he realized it, he immediatly went to the 2nd Captain and asked him for a way to get his own death god powers. The 2nd captain sent Ed to the world of the living, and immediatly was knocked into his spirit form. In an instant, the 2nd captain cut the chain of fate, and said only one thing, he would be able to become a death god if he could survive. Ed was shocked, if the chain of fate disappeared, then he would end up becoming a Hollow, which he truely did not want to happen whatsoever, since he would then never be able to truely live life. He waited and time passed, yet he found no way, and it ended up that he would become a Hollow. As soon as this happened, a mask formed over him, yet at this time, he fought with in his soul. It ended up that he survived, yet his face was covered by a mask, and he was completely in Hollow form. He eventually got out of it, and threw the mask, yet Ed never got passed the fact that he was actually Hollow.

At this moment, his human age was about 8, while he was about 20 in spirit form. Strange, but he still had to return to his human body. As time passed he became more skilled in both Soul Society, and in the human world. When he was 13, he recieved captain level, and became the captain of the 10th squad. Strange, yet he was still one of the strongest at his young age. Being a bit bored, he left on his own accord, saying that he was not suited, and slowly went back to Earth, the weak, defenseless planet, and decided that he could protect the town.

One year passed, and he met a being that he would and could never forget. Makyu, a sacred being, one of strength unknown to even him. In a battle, would Ed even survive? He didn't even want to think of that, yet time passed, and they became friends, but Makyu, always being on the move, left the Earth quickly, and Ed hasn't seen him since that one week that he was on the Earth, well, on the earth near him. It seemed as if the presence never even left the area that he was in, since at that moment, Hollows came at rapid speed, and Ed had to take care of his job.

Finally, two years slowly passed, and Ed learned his Bankai, which increased his strength even further than it was at the start. Within this time, he learned a great amount, and decided to set off on his own, to explore the worlds to gain more strength as well.

Demon magic: None ._.

Weapon: Zanpaku-to



Zanpaku-to Info



Name: Raigar

Normal Appearance: The normal appearence of this blade has no guard, nor a handle. It goes straight like an average blade, and is about the size of a 13 year old. The speed may not be fast, but of course, the power of the blade is great, since it is used often.

Shikai summoning phrase: Crack Raigar

Shikai's appearance: As soon as the words Crack Raigar are spoken, the blade disappears all in all, and all that is left is a handle. Now, as soon as he repeats these words, two blades shoot out of each end of the blade, leaving it more powerful than before. The two blades, while together, are just about as big as Ed when he is standing tall, since the blade is basically a fusation.

Shikai's special abilities: Raigar's special abilities are with ice and water. Whenever Ed swings his blade, he can shoot ice or water anywhere he wants, and control it, sealing it, or disenigrating it. It's effective when in a speedy battle, and it needs to be slowed. He can also use fire anywhere he wants, as a smokescreen, or to fight to his own advantage. There is another ability of Raigar, which Ed doesn't like to use. If Ed is truely in danger, than he will fill both ends of the blade with fire on the bottom blade, and ice on the top, using it to effect the best way possible.

Bankai: To activate Ed's bankai, he must focus every bit of his spirit energy, and then swing is sword foward, and yell 'Bankai.' In doing this, Ed activates his Bankai, "Hitsanga Truiga." Which has no true meaning, yet it's abilities are truely known as legend just about anywhere.

Bankai Special Abilities: Different than most Bankai, it is not a very huge thing, yet it does deal a lot with increasing ones power. This first thing that happens is Raigar turns into it's normal form, and slowly ice forms over it. With this in play, Ed's entire right arm becomes engulfed with ice, as if an arm of only ice, and his sword becomes attached with in the palm. The next thing to happen is an ice wing to appear from behind him, appearing on his back, and fusing up highed and higher, until the wing is about the size of a full grown human. The special thing about this is that Raigar splits into two at this moment. Slowly, the left hand become engulfed with fire, continuing up until there is a fire wing as well. As soon as the wings are created, it slowly starts to cover the face, makeing and ice/fire mask in front of Ed's eyes. During any moment when Ed is in Bankai, he can destroy all the ice to have complete fire, or destroy the fire to use only ice. This is effective on just about any kind of foe, since it specializes in two different attributes, which furtherly help increase the power of the bankai, but there is something that can happen while in Bankai... Infact, the mask of fire and ice that engulfs his face is actually a hollow mask, giving him his Vaizard powers. His full strength only holds the mask for 12 minutes, giving him limited time.

Zanpaku-to's spirit: Raigar

Spirit's Personality: Raigar is rather short tempered during most times, yet he is a nice guy, if you get to know him. He likes to be quiet, yet at times, he can be yelling very loudly over nothing. His power is great, so he gets physical sometimes when angered. He mostly likes to make fun of Ed, trying to make him look stupid, yet mostly fails, so he ends up running off. Raigar mostly likes to relax, since while in battle, he must lend almost all of his strength to Ed, so that he may win, and at the same time, he must protect his life from any danger it may be in. From fighting so much, Raigar tries to keep an up-beat personality, but since he's tempered easily, he gets to blow off steam a lot in Ed's soul.

Spirit's appearance: Raigar starts off with light red hair, all spiked up, and brown eyes. He wears glasses over his eyes, and wears a navy blue shirt, with a black overcoat. His pants are a brownish color, while his shoes are a mix of red and black. He tries to look his best, and wants to be cool at all times. His body is an average build, since he doesn't work out, and he doesn't have any scars at all, since he is not the one fighting. Overall, he tries to look his best just about anywhere he goes with Ed, yet he can't be seen so there is no true point.

Theme Song: In My Darkest Hour - Megadeth
 
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(Ok, I'm going to start this. Others may join after if they want to... Anyone that hasn't finished their bio, please do so quickly. Breakdown, you are accepted. Nice work on the Zanpakuto Spirit information.)

Ryoku walked along the hallway of the 11th division structure. He lowered his head, feeling something, and he knew straight away that it was bad. Ever since Ichigo had destroyed the execution stand, he could feel something growing... He had theories, but he waited until the proper place to say so...

"All captains and lieutenants to the main hall." A voice boomed over Soul Society, and Ryoku lifted his head. "Looks like something is happening. Time to get to work." He pushed his foot into the ground, and his image shimmered away. He flash stepped towards to main hall, all the while questions going through his head....

Arriving there quickly, he noticed he was the first there, excluding the 1st squad captain, Shigekuni Yamamoto-Genryūsai. He lowered his head, and waited for the others to arrive.

(Shigekuni Yamamoto-Genryūsai is an NPC controlled by AoD or myself)
 

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Kukuku...it's almost over...hehehe...

A lone Shinigami stood at the gate, rolling his eyes at the booming announcement. Something was going on, and, of course, he'd be left out of it. That's how things went. The captains and leiutenants didn't mingle with the 'common' Shinigami. Even those in the 13 squads had an over-inflated view of themselves. He'd sit here and guard the gate, as normal, until whatever had happened, had happened.

Even as he lamented, a shadow seemed to creep along the wall behind him. It wasn't cast by anything...in fact, one wouldn't deem it so much a shadow as some form of moving black shape. It passed behind him...and, as it reached the gate, began climbing, invisibly scaling the wall.



Within the real world, a shimmering shape stood over a young boy and his elderly grandfather, reaching greedily for them. It giggled with echoing laughter, in a slightly feminine voice, gnashing it's jaws at them. It's head was the size of a car, long and masked, as all hollows, while the spindily body below it seemed incapable of supporting such a weight. A series of holes ran along it's back, and the forehead of it's mask, but otherwise, it had a fairly regular appearance. A deep purple and red flushed through it's skin, while the bone-white mask put them in sharp contrast.

He said to come, and look at the prizes I've won! A tasty living spirit... it intoned sharply, looking into the eyes of the elderly man, whilst the boy clutched the chain emerging from his chest tightly.

"Grandpa...run away!" the young man cried, but his beloved grandfather could no more hear nor see him then he could the hollow.



This scene was repeated several times across Karakura town. A long, thin, scarecrow-like hollow threatened two young girls, both living. A heavy-bodied creature tore pieces from buildings and cars, eating as it advanced on a teenager and a young woman. A cold, icicle-adorned hollow looked lovingly upon a frozen 'punk', encased in a brick of ice.

Hollows had suddenly emerged from Hueco Mundo, in such force and numbers as had never been seen before. And they threatened, and destroyed, not only dead souls, but living too.

The world screamed in fear, and, as per usual, Soul Society would answer it's call.
 

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It had been another long night for Makoto, from dusk till dawn he trained, as he does much of these days. Not as if he had much better things to do, it had been 'peaceful' since the whole affair with Ichigo Kurosaki. If he could ignore the feeling in the pit of his stomach, everything would be just fine and dandy. But, at the moment he could care less. Because at the moment...He was walking around with his eyes half open, unable to walk in a straight line and was dragging his sheathed zanpakuto.
Put simply, he looked like a drunk.
But that wasn't the case, he's far from drunk. He had just failed to gain sleep in the past forty-eight hours.
A few follow shinigami greeted him, only to get a reply that sounded like it came from a goul.

For quite a few minutes now, Makoto had been wandering around the 11th Division's district, until without warning, he just stopped.
The shinigami in the area paused and looked at him, it had been the second time he wandered through the place, but it was the first time he stopped.
Makoto lazily swung his head to his left and sized the building next to him, and then jumped to the edge of the roof nearly failing backwards. He countered his weight to gain back his balance and...fell forward onto the roof.
Slight snoring sounds could be heard as he practically lay on his head.

"All captains and lieutenants to the main hall." the words echoed through out the 11th division district, reaching Makoto's ears.
He let a out a low growl, "You've got to be kidding me," He said this, griting his teeth. So much for sleep.
He pushed himself up, yawing as he tied his zanpakuto to his side. Getting a run start, he jumped from roof top to roof top. What was the point in walking along the ground if he were already up there?

Arriving a few minutes later, he saw his captain already there. "Good morning, Captain Ryoku." Makoto said in greeting, bowing his head slightly for respect and then took his place.
 
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