A Kingdom Hearts-ish fan fic, and my first...ever! Cnc, please.
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Chapter One
The cold morning breeze made Sosh pull his hood closer over his face. He didn't really know why he woke up this early, except that he enjoyed seeing the sun rise. He felt good knowing that a new day was about to begin.
"Cold this morning" he said to no one. He knew that no one else would be up this early.
He inhaled the cold morning air. He felt revitalized, and knew it was the right choice to see this. The sun slowly came up over the horizon, covering everything in a pale light.
"It's a new day" he said as he walked back towards his house.
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"I'm disappointed. Such a strong hearted world, with such weak hearted individuals."
A dark figure looked down at the images displayed to him.
"No matter. Being inhabited by beings with such weak hearts, the Heartless will take it over easily."
He raised his hands into the air as the Heartless were called to that world.
*****
Sosh walked slowly with his backpack slung over his left shoulder.
"Stupid homework" he muttered to himself.
He was about to open the door to his house when he heard something strange.
Wait! The time is soon...
"Who said that?" Sosh said, startled. "Where are you?"
Follow the music. All shall be explained.
"What music?" Sosh said. Then, he began to hear a soft humming. It seemed to drown out all other sound. "What the?" He slowly began to walk along the beach, mesmerized.
Soon enough, he reached a small crown shaped glyph sketched out onto the rock surface. He tapped the glyph with his fist. At first nothing happened. Then, the different sections of the glyph began to glow. The light became so blinding that it engulfed Sosh whole...
End Chapter One
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Wow, it seemed a lot longer on paper!
Am I going a little too fast?
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Chapter One
The cold morning breeze made Sosh pull his hood closer over his face. He didn't really know why he woke up this early, except that he enjoyed seeing the sun rise. He felt good knowing that a new day was about to begin.
"Cold this morning" he said to no one. He knew that no one else would be up this early.
He inhaled the cold morning air. He felt revitalized, and knew it was the right choice to see this. The sun slowly came up over the horizon, covering everything in a pale light.
"It's a new day" he said as he walked back towards his house.
*****
"I'm disappointed. Such a strong hearted world, with such weak hearted individuals."
A dark figure looked down at the images displayed to him.
"No matter. Being inhabited by beings with such weak hearts, the Heartless will take it over easily."
He raised his hands into the air as the Heartless were called to that world.
*****
Sosh walked slowly with his backpack slung over his left shoulder.
"Stupid homework" he muttered to himself.
He was about to open the door to his house when he heard something strange.
Wait! The time is soon...
"Who said that?" Sosh said, startled. "Where are you?"
Follow the music. All shall be explained.
"What music?" Sosh said. Then, he began to hear a soft humming. It seemed to drown out all other sound. "What the?" He slowly began to walk along the beach, mesmerized.
Soon enough, he reached a small crown shaped glyph sketched out onto the rock surface. He tapped the glyph with his fist. At first nothing happened. Then, the different sections of the glyph began to glow. The light became so blinding that it engulfed Sosh whole...
End Chapter One
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Wow, it seemed a lot longer on paper!
Am I going a little too fast?
