Hip'Notic Ocean Crush

[Kazuma]

Well its been 2 months since I made any LP seriously. I made one weeks back but it turned to doggy doo doo. I decided to depart from what I was trying to force doing and did what loved doing.Any who whats up DM, glad to be back and kicking from the graphic hiatus graveyard.Not sure it looks too bright on your monitor. The chair I sat in making it was low, so if you sit up high the colors might look overly bright on your monitor...................................

.............CNC

 

[Pablo]

The text kills it. It also seems a little too busy down at the bottom, try scrapping a few of those fish.

 

[Kazuma]

Yeah I figured that too.

EDITED OP post of the new version

 

[Duskk]

Agreed about the bottom being busy and distracting. Is it possible to bring the woman focal down a bit? 'Cause right now it looks like a sandwich (best analogy ever, btw). The woman focal on top, the sea scene on bottom, and 100 or so pixels of nothing really in the middle. If you could eliminate the emptiness of the middle, I think it would achieve a more appealing composition.

 

[Kazuma]

Thanks for the cnc I'll see what I can do about it.

 

[Pablo]

Also, I just noticed, that some of your textures don't melt in with the piece so well. Specifically in the bottom right. You can clearly see where the orange texture starts and ends and stuff. Its the little things maann lol

 

[DF111]

Bottom part looks a bit washed out (no pun intended :/).
Lovin the effects but just looks a bit rusty atm

 

[Kazuma]

Thanks for the cnc guys really appreciate it. I'll put up another version today I see what your talking about Pablo.

 

[Siren]

The 'soda' that is splashing is way too discrete. It seems like it's too edgy, you need to make where the splashes stop a bit more free-flowing. Dislike the texture behind her, but keep it in front of her.

 

[Amphetamine]

The text kills it. It also seems a little too busy down at the bottom, try scrapping a few of those fish.

always hatin' on the fish.

 

[Cloud]

idgaf what everyone else says i kinda love it

and it pisses me off that you're still way better than me

bastard

 

[Amphetamine]

idgaf what everyone else says i kinda love it

and it pisses me off that you're still way better than me

bastard

someone's obviously a little bitter.........

 

[Ðari]

Still a champ with Illustrator Mal.
Damn you.

 

[KB]

What program do you use to make those splash effects anyways?

 

[Kazuma]

^3Ds max

Final version I did some touch ups. I forgot to post it yesterday.

 

[Eric]

Orange soda lol we can all tell you're black

I like the new version, it looks cleaner. But it seems like there should be a bottle at the top pouring out that effect on her arms, I don't know though it might be too much since there's already that bottle at the top.

That splash on the bottom right looks a bit random too.

 

[Salty the Hero]

I think you're god.