Old one with no feedback

[Kazuma]

Made this one a while ago but couldn't get feed back

Critique me

 

[Kazuma]

Just made this one first tag in year

 

[KingdomKey]

I'm not much of an artist, but I'm all for giving you feedback.

First of all, kudos for making such a unique piece of art. The airplane on the left with the laser coming out looks wrong. Simply because, it's not piercing the flesh, like the other two airplanes. So, I feel like that is misplaced. For the most part, I like how you cut off her lower body, but feel it's still slightly higher than necessary; although it displays the organs extremely well. [Either she's a giant of sorts, or a human being, who has an abnormal body.] Otherwise, I'm impressed with what you shown, and if there is a statement about this picture in particular, I'd love to hear about it.

As for your new tag, I personally like it. The only thing I don't care for, is the splatter of purple paint. Since, I like the light itself more around Aqua as a whole. Depending on the size, I think you didn't need it to be that long in length.

So yeah, hope you'll accept what feedback I give you. C:

 

[Kazuma]

I'm not much of an artist, but I'm all for giving you feedback.

First of all, kudos for making such a unique piece of art. The airplane on the left with the laser coming out looks wrong. Simply because, it's not piercing the flesh, like the other two airplanes. So, I feel like that is misplaced. For the most part, I like how you cut off her lower body, but feel it's still slightly higher than necessary; although it displays the organs extremely well. [Either she's a giant of sorts, or a human being, who has an abnormal body.] Otherwise, I'm impressed with what you shown, and if there is a statement about this picture in particular, I'd love to hear about it.

As for your new tag, I personally like it. The only thing I don't care for, is the splatter of purple paint. Since, I like the light itself more around Aqua as a whole. Depending on the size, I think you didn't need it to be that long in length.

So yeah, hope you'll accept what feedback I give you. C:

Thanks I'll give an update soon

 

[Pablo]

Those planes feel really awkward and out of place and the shooting really throws off any kind of flow. Her lower area looks super sweet though.

 

[Efflictim]

you're so sick it's unfair fuck you ;___;