Fanfiction ► The Forgotten Warrior

[Xuan]

Er, I do not, Nojerom. The emperor has no concern from me.

 

[lightdark]

Interesting story, I didn't read it all (>_<) but keep up the good work.

 

[Haku]

I thought it was a great chapter, it kept me entertained.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

@Xuan: no? lol. whats your concern then my friend? did you like the update?..
@lightdark: a new reader? awesome. thank you for that, hope you carch up and enjoy the rest. thanks.
@Haku: thank you haku my friend, i try my best to.
(oh and i found that tonne is indeed tonne. in the american dictionary its spelt ton, but since im english i use tonne. hehe..)

 

[Xuan]

I like the chapter. But whether the Emperor is dead is none of my concerns. I sense that even though you wanted to change the story, the Emperor will not play any major role in your story. Ruled it outta my mind.

 

[Obscured fire]

Wow!!!
That was an actually great chapter!!
It worthed all the way i see ;D
The fights,oh man how much i love reading the fights >w<
Great writting man,can't wait to see another chap!!! ^-^

 

[Nelo Angelo]

@Xuan: ah i see. im not changing the story. this event is part of the story, his death means something..you'll just have to wait and see my frined. but your not wrong though. ^^

@Liz: thanks liz, im really glad you like it. thank you.

 

[Obscured fire]

No need to thank me big bro,i always enjoy reading well written stories,so don't thank me^^

 

[Ban Mido]

Hey nelo, it still says "tonnes"

 

[Nelo Angelo]

^^ ok liz. thanks. oops...i mean no thanks, no wait..

lol ye it still says tonnes because that my friend is the correct spelling in the English dictionary. It is spelt differently in the american one. Like the word honour. You spell it without the u, 'honor' right. whilst we spell it with a u in it.

but still thanks for pointing it out man. you see any more you let me know ye, thanks man.

 

[Ban Mido]

Oh, okay. My bad.:toungesmile:

and no problemo.

 

[Lectori Salutem]

Why did you post it at a moment when I couldn't be online for a few days, now I'm late again!
Anyways, very, very, very good chapter! I really love how you wrote the fights.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

my bad LS. thanks for that. i try my best.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

..........................

 

[Obscured fire]

1ST COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh man!!!!
That was...i can't say it,i was like T_T when i read "you're not your parents child"
I have to say that that chapter was another really well done.
Nice length,proper grammar(sup?),just awesome! =3
Can't wait to see ur next chap comming up man!!!!

 

[Nelo Angelo]

hehe.. thank you liz. ye it was a bit tearful, glad you liked it. ^^

dont worry, ill get workin on it as soon as i can, thanks again.

 

[Xuan]

Glad to see another chappie. However not very satisfied with the length, too short! (Just kidding, I was venting my frustations to post a 3k 1 chapter cause of the ridiculous rules)

 

[Obscured fire]

hehe.. thank you liz. ye it was a bit tearful, glad you liked it. ^^

dont worry, ill get workin on it as soon as i can, thanks again.

Hehe,okies!!!
And no need to thank me!!!!! ^^
*sits down and waits*

 

[Nojerom]

Nelo, that was.. incredible. So saddening, well put, and vivid.

Master Tenkai reminds me of a dream I had a few years ago...

Lovely...

 

[Haku]

Mostly everyone else has already pointed out the main ideas that I had, but otherwise this was another great chapter.