Things of late

[gene chaos]

Just wanted some critic on stuff i've recently done.
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/153/e/3/Dragon_of_Yu_by_Erebues.jpg
this one i made for a friend in pieces i wanted to put the pieces together since she only used the legs so i did but the color scheme i didn't know what to put. i want to redo it but i wonder what main color scheme should i use.

http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/153/6/5/Flames_of_yamanaka_yume_kuroha_by_Erebues.jpg
another that a friend wanted done for a rp for hit man reborn.

lastly not new but i want some critic on it
http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/153/8/6/Sentry_of_the_Alguroan__s_by_Erebues.jpg

 

[june]

love the colouring
just one thing
the her is way TOO thin D:

 

[gene chaos]

I tend not to puff out my characters hair at times often leaving them sorta flat. though i know people with similar hair, but their asian so not sure if that counts.

 

[System Shock]

I really like it.

I'm not sure if I'm feeling the person as much as the machines. I feel like you have to get the facial expressions and pieces down to make it better. The eyes and mouth and fingers don't feel real enough. If you can work on them so they give off a less unfitting vibe, I think you can get it to look great.

Like I said though, the machines look sweet. As june said, your coloring is incredible.

 

[gene chaos]

I really like it.

I'm not sure if I'm feeling the person as much as the machines. I feel like you have to get the facial expressions and pieces down to make it better. The eyes and mouth and fingers don't feel real enough. If you can work on them so they give off a less unfitting vibe, I think you can get it to look great.

Like I said though, the machines look sweet. As june said, your coloring is incredible.

ya, i'm far better with tech and places than with people, though about the coloring do you think the colors shift to darker and lighter tones naturally?