Um random drawings =P

[MangaCrazy101]

This quality is crap cause I took the pic on my phone...

One i did for an assignment at school, I looked at Kairi on the front of KH2 cover to make it =/

 

[Seeshinamaru13]

The first one is really adorable... I love the chibi style... and you seem to draw it quite well.

The second one looks a little awkward... especially the necklace...
I'm not the biggest fan of the wing either.
Although I really do like the outfit on her... I think you drew the skirt and shirt quite nicely.
To be honest... for the most part the picture just looks a little awkward... changing the face a little... as well as coloring in her skin would help.

 

[Lancelot]

I think, more or less, the lack of centering of the second is what's killing it. The wing is just way too large, in all honesty. and circular ._. otherwise, you have the right toning in the body going, so it's pretty good, all in all.

The first one is just kawaiiiii lol. the boy wouldn't happen to be Syaoran, would it?

 

[MangaCrazy101]

YES!!!! I love him ofcousre itsSyaoran ^^ Good guesser.
Sorry bout the pic but that was liek last year some time the first one was yesterday...

 

[Chaos]

wow manga i didn't know you can draw your good

 

[MangaCrazy101]

Um thanx Chaos... kinda hence the name.. Manga ^^;;;

 

[Kiwi +]

Like i said before you draw very good.
even though you think you don't..
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[D∆NTE]

The first pic is pretty good. the second one, well , it's ok, but, I think that the wing could be drawn better.

 

[MangaCrazy101]

Is this betta (cant get it smaller)

 

[Reverie]

Your drawings are quite nice and...cute chibis on the first one. :3

 

[Fractured_Heart628]

cool drawings, they are both pretty.

 

[RuffPuff]

The wings, to me, don't really make sence. The "feathers" are going in all directions, and the shading is.. weird. The fact that all the feathers are going downwards makes the wings look heavy, imo.

And congratulations on getting your chibi's to look cute. Mine always turn out freaky. xD

 

[DreamingOutLoud]

Cute! Your style is so cute! ^_______^ <3 I love it!

 

[MangaCrazy101]

Everyone likes the chibis.... i didn't like them =P
Guess Theyre sposed to look like that. Thanks for the criticism, I will take it all into context next time I draw.

 

[Annoyance]

Um thanx Chaos... kinda hence the name.. Manga ^^;;;

since when does liking manga mean you can draw?

The chibis are disproportionate even for a chibi and her chest seems like you were trying to mix both normal and chibi and it just looks really weird. Her mouth is way too far to the side as well.


As for Ms. Angel-No-Pants, the wings just seem to be tacked on to make things a bit cooler so they look sort of awkward sitting there. I think you should fix that up for next time. Her breasts are too high up for her body I think, too. And what's up with the chain? :c

I have to say I'm LOVING the fact that it looks exactly like Kairi on the cover rather than just her pose is the same. It just looks like a trace and a recolor so it isn't looking all that original and I'm not liking it.
C'mon, girl. You can think of original poses or use references without making it look exactly the same and just taking on some different colors.

 

[MangaCrazy101]

yerh i spose on the name =/

Thankyou, I thought they looked weird too. Was my first chibi attempt so i was kind of like.... confused.

Well this wasn't really sposed to be that much thought out it was one of those projects, go-home-draw and come back next day things. The chain was awkward and I couldn't get it to sit the way I wanted so I was lazy and left it there.


As for it looking exactly like kai'z Im not so much for being original...Im not really good at drawing original stuff =/
Thanks for your comment =D

 

[MOLD]

Have you tried doing some lineart, bro? I'm sure those colored pictures would come out quite nicely with more define lines. Using a pen to do it is not so bad after a while once you get used to it haha.

 

[AxelRoxasFan223]

I think theyre both nice
The first one is quite cute
The 2nd one is nice but I think you need to work on the wing a bit ^^;