Fanfiction ► Lost Hearts

[Silent Avera]

Nya! I'm here now so I just thought I'd go ahead and read it ^-^

Yay for new characters! 0_o Is this the world that's gonna get zapped by you-know-who?!....I like the Silver-haired boy.....*sniff*

 

[Shadowysights]

Wow......I guess everyones too busy ;

Am I the only person on thats not that busy?

Thanks for the good comment........you like the chracters already?

 

[Constellations]

great chapter acein! its getting really interesting!

 

[Shadowysights]

Thanks Angels. I told you it was gonna get more interesting! (As if it wasn't enough already.)

 

[Gullwing Yunie]

Loved the chapter!

Only problem was a few minor spelling errors. Otherwise, well done! =D

 

[Shadowysights]

Eh? What was wrong? I can't see anything...

 

[Gullwing Yunie]

OK, well...

“No much for party’s or crowds.”

Party's should be parties.

And...

“Their…beautiful.”

Their should be they're.

Yes, they're really only minor. Sorry for being picky. xD

 

[Shadowysights]

Oh thanks.

Its okay, I'm gald to see my mistakes so I don't make them later.

 

[Gullwing Yunie]

You're welcome!

Good to know I wasn't being too harsh.

 

[Sonja~Soulheart]

comment!! :'D awesome job as always :3 yay!! :'D btw Tai rocks XD

 

[Rynxeh]

yooo nice chapter man!!
this is very good
oo yeaa... i just remembered: wut ever happened to Range and the others?
anywhooo keep up the awesome work!

 

[Shadowysights]

Thanks for the comments!

You'll find out soon Rynxeh.

 

[~Lenya~]

Wow Tai is nice!!OoO Lucky Blaine to have met her O.O

And nice chappie btw ^_^

 

[Rynxeh]

o ok
cant wait then for the next chapter!!

 

[shadow_heartless]

Nice.Very,Very,Nice ^^ ......................

 

[Rynxeh]

So did this thred die???
i hope not

 

[Sonja~Soulheart]

its been awhile since an update D: awhh D:

 

[Shadowysights]

Well...no.....I just never have time to update >.< I get loads of homework and I'm often fatigued (tried).

 

[Ban Mido]

Wow, 24 pages. Maybe I can improve my fic by looking through yours.

 

[Rynxeh]

i say during christmas break get working on this again lol
i get tired too and skool's a pain
so since we'll have a few days w/out skool and u can sleep-in as long as u want, y not work on it! lol
(someone shoot me quick!)