Terra/Aqua's BBS Armor - Crit Needed

[GIIIIIIIIIRLZ :D]

Doing a cover art request for the greatest KH fanfiction evar and I had to do the uh...BBS armor.

I don't really care if I'm missing out on some details (though point it out if you wish), it's more about the proportions and perspective of the armor and that I'm pulling my hair for. I need a second pair of eyes to look at this since I've been at it to the point that I'm used to what I'm seeing.

Any other remarks, critz - especially redlines - would be greatly appreciated.

Oh yeah and I have a bit of an issue with Ven's pose. Which looks better in your opinion, the one above or the one like this?

 

[Rix]

wow! It looks amazing! keep up the good work

 

[Raiko]

ah that looks great.keep up teh good work. as for ven's pose..i think the one in the link looks much more better. the one on the top seems abit disturbing and odd...

 

[GIIIIIIIIIRLZ :D]

Thanks guys C:

And about the pose, yeah my sister basically said the same thing too. I wasn't too keen on the legs though, but I'm trying to fix them atm - I'll update the link when I'm done.

 

[Blight]

First of....HOLY.... Are you sure yooour not Noruma, cause your pretty damn good at his style.

Now that the shameless praise is out of the way, Terra's left arm is kinda wonky The Middle is way to skinny even by Kh standers. It like BIG MUSCLE. skinny arm, HUGE HAND. Same thing with where is leg connects to his Knee although it not as distracting. And ya go with The Ven pose in the link....the one up top ...disturbs me.

 

[Euphoria]

Good lawd, I'ma steal yo skillz. >:

But in all seriousness, this is wonderful. Such detail in the armor, and the faces--I coulda sworn Nomura himself drew them. The proportions on Terra and Aqua seem fine to me--I always found KH characters to have weird proportions; big hands and feet and small bodies.
I would certainly say use the second pose for Ven. It's different and catches my eye a lot more than the first pose.

My friend, you have talent C:

 

[GIIIIIIIIIRLZ :D]

First of....HOLY.... Are you sure yooour not Noruma, cause your pretty damn good at his style.

HAI GUIZE, Nomura here. For having such a sharp eye and spotting my identity, I bring thee a very special sneak-peak information Blight: FFVII-2 is in the works! :^D

In this installment my darling Gackt takes the lead role (of course <3), Cloud finally comes out of the closet and it is revealed that Barret was really Rufus' brother! Complete with a 30 minute Sephiroth shower scene rendered in technology's highest quality yet. In all his majestical "pretty boy" glory. My trademark sparkle effects, hairflips, and of course rainbows are ensured to be present in this most secretly fantasized (come to life!) scene. Promised to feed the eye and cock/vag to the point it makes porn look stale and Angelina Jolie look like she needed an SOS face lift (we all know Sephiroth is prettier than Angelina anyway). Watch out for stains boys!

Ah, and Kingdom Hearts 3 you say? Larxene lives and is married to Tifa, she takes the lead role.

Now that the shameless praise is out of the way, Terra's left arm is kinda wonky The Middle is way to skinny even by Kh standers. It like BIG MUSCLE. skinny arm, HUGE HAND. Same thing with where is leg connects to his Knee although it not as distracting. And ya go with The Ven pose in the link....the one up top ...disturbs me.

Thanks a lot for the heads up, you're right. I double-checked the Terra ref I used and the elbow joint indeed isn't that skinny D: NOTE TO FIX. *notes*

Good lawd, I'ma steal yo skillz. >:

But in all seriousness, this is wonderful. Such detail in the armor, and the faces--I coulda sworn Nomura himself drew them. The proportions on Terra and Aqua seem fine to me--I always found KH characters to have weird proportions; big hands and feet and small bodies.
I would certainly say use the second pose for Ven. It's different and catches my eye a lot more than the first pose.

My friend, you have talent C:

That was essentially the point

To make it look as official as possible, so that's definately a good sign. AAAAAND settled, using the second pose. I slightly changed the legs and it looks marginally better:

http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n154/StupidAquarius/khiii_revival/chasers_hereweare.jpg

Thanks Europhia!

 

[Herb]

Really amazing. I don't like the first Ven pose though,
it's a bit too feminine. The one in the link is good.

 

[MF29]

It looks just like Nomura's work.

 

[GIIIIIIIIIRLZ :D]

^Like I said it was the point.

 

[Rix]

Are you gonna psot the finsihed work here too? I would have loved to see it

 

[GIIIIIIIIIRLZ :D]

Yeah 'course, though it sure as hell won't be done any time soon.

 

[Raz]

It looks nothing short of amazing.
But Ven has boobs. But I'm sure that's just the armor or something.

 

[1-up salesman]

That's...amazing... though, I have one question. Why does it have VAT, when I looked through the fan-fiction and it was all about Sora?

 

[Danica Syer]

It's really good and I like it. Pick whatever you want. I'm guessing. I like both pictures, so I can't really decide, though having it to be finished is all I really was gonna say. XD