Fanfiction ► The Forgotten Warrior

[Nojerom]

I'm on page ten in word processor thingy. =D

 

[Nelo Angelo]

im really sorry about the lateness guys.
i got halfway through it and then i was bombarded with assignments. I best get those done first and i will finish the next chap up. hope you guys dont mind. sorry again.

 

[Xuan]

Don't worry bout we ferreting about no updates, just get it done and post it up and that'll do!

 

[Nelo Angelo]

..........................

 

[Lectori Salutem]

YAY for a new chapter!!! It's really good.

I found one grammatical error (I think...) though, in the first sentence.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

Ooh did ya. Where is it, there probably is one. I did rush it
And thanks for readin it!

 

[Lectori Salutem]

'Neloangelo was sat in silence for what seemed like an age'
I think there's something wrong with that, but I'm tired right now so it could also be some weird exception I don't know/recognize.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

Oh right, hmm i dunno probably is something wrong with that. What do you think i should change it to.

 

[Lectori Salutem]

'Neloangelo sat' or 'Neloangelo was sitting' I guess... I never know when to use what time....

 

[Nelo Angelo]

Done! Thanks for that. ^^

 

[Xuan]

Hurray to myself for finally being able to see a new chapter and boo to you for taking so long.

Just kidding.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

Haha sorry for the lateness my friend. Thanks for reading it.
Appreciate it :thumbup:

 

[Nojerom]

Nelo, I'm proud of you, kid. That was one heck of a chapter. Awesome.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

Really? thanks mar ^^
I did my best in a short time.

 

[Ban Mido]

Sorry for late response. Great vork Virge.

 

[Ultima Star]

:blink: da heeeeeeeeeeeell I lost so many chaaaaps T___T da hell duude

Well..I gotta catch up on this though..this isnt over is it? *checks up* no it isnt so yeah will read it again... T___T sowie...I didnt have time ya know why D= and alas.. talking on msn too much takes my time too XD lol jk jk ..I blame j00 XD jk jk

 

[Ban Mido]

Awesome work Virge. keep it up!

 

[Ultima Star]

Eto Matt ..nii-sama hasnt written anything yet .__.

 

[Ban Mido]

I forgot to read his last chapter.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

:blink: da heeeeeeeeeeeell I lost so many chaaaaps T___T da hell duude

Well..I gotta catch up on this though..this isnt over is it? *checks up* no it isnt so yeah will read it again... T___T sowie...I didnt have time ya know why D= and alas.. talking on msn too much takes my time too XD lol jk jk ..I blame j00 XD jk jk

haha ye my bad ^^;; I know you're "busy" these days so its cool. Make sure you do catch up when you can kar, would appreciate that.
XD MY fault is it?

Awesome work Virge. keep it up!

Thanks Matt, appreciate it, i shall continue indeed.