Hey Gabe. Sorry i couldn't post sooner. Great new chapters! HOT DOG!! (Always will be my fav) It sucks that you have to go. But if by any chance youll come back, i will still be here. I will always be you fan. 
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Noooooo! Gabe, how can you leave?!! Right now that I've become a fan! I'm finally here, posting and reading along, AND YOU'RE LEAVING! Oh, umm...nice chapters. <.<
at least i was here a lil longer.
If someone had read the whole thing and you made it a closed thread..
dude.... suicide...
If someone had read the whole thing and you made it a closed thread..
dude.... suicide...
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Me: Damn.. I never did finish reading this completely and complimen again! I'm sorry that you're going to leave soon... well, have a nice offline life!
No!gabe is leaving!Yay my best friend in real life has finally relized the greatness of gabe's fic!Yeah,starlitangel is my best friend/neighbor.
That me?!Wat!woman!?me a little kid!wat you talkin about?does that mean i'm a bad person?!*starts to cry*No!!!I didnt mean too!I just didnt want to see good people's computer's crash...I shall accept it!..Well, after i sit in a dark corner and moap for a couple days...It's not my fault...stupid virus...stupid news channel sayin to unplug your computers....stupid terriorists...stupid war...stupid me...Hey maggie is back!WOOT!WOOT!*hands out pudding*
When I say woman, its a compliment. XD
A bit later...
Sora is on his way to work.
There's a finger in da street.
Sora: Ew.
Sora goes to work.
Sora: Morning, boss!
Manager: Hello, Sora.
Sora: We are not open today!
Manager: But why?
Sora: Because you have a date! (takes her hand)
Manager: With who?!
Sora: With a friend of mine! (drags her out) (puts closed sign up and leaves)
The manager walks with Sora to her house so she can get fixed up.
There are a lot of antique things there.
Sora: looks at antique mirror) Coooool.
Manager: puts on make up)
Sora: touches music box)
The music box makes a soothing tune.
Sora: Oooooh! (blows dust off a chest) Ooh! (opens the chest)...
There are some old pictures of Bridget and Jones when they were younger.
Sora: looks at pictures)
Manager: comes out) Well, Sora. What do you think?
Sora: I think you clean up pretty nicely.
Manager: Shall we be on our way?
Sora: Sure.
They go to Kovue's mansion.
Sora: Keep your eyes closed.
Manager: Gee, Sora.
Sora: Okay open them.
Jones is standing near with a rose.
Manager: opens eyes) ...
Sora runs and hides behind a plant.
Jones: Bridget, I’m really sorry for what I did. I know it hurt you but those were not my intensions. I-
Manager: It doesn’t matter why you did it. I’ve only been waiting for you to apologize.
Jones just smiles and hands her the rose. She hugs him.
Sora: Yes! I did it- Dad?!
Kovue is hiding behind the plant too.
S-dad: What?
Sora: Why are you hiding behind here?
S-dad: Hey! It’s MY plant!
Sora: Okay. Bye, dad.
Sora gets up and leaves.
S-dad: ...
Meanwhile...
Tyra: Bye Johnny.
Johnny: See ya. (kisses Tyra)
Tyra: I had a great time last night. Maybe I’ll call ya.
Johnny: ...Okay. (leaves)Tyra: closes door) What are you staring at?
Wakka: sits up) Who was that, man?
Tyra: None of your business.
Wakka: You sleeping-a with him?
Tyra: Shut up, Wakka. (puts jacket on)
Wakka: Where-a ya going?
Tyra: I ran outta beer. (leaves)
Wakka: ...(digs in nose)
Later...The islanders are all meeting at Kovue's place.
Riku: And she says she's moving out and we can move back in. And she wants me to say hi to Sora for her..
Sora: ...Hi.
Riku: So are we moving back?
The parents hesitate to answer.
Parents: Uh...We like it here.
Riku: What?! But it’s our island!
S-dad: I’m famous here.
S-mom: It’s comfy here.
Selp-dad: I feel welcomed here.
T-dad: I haven’t thrown out my back since I’ve been here.
T-mom: There's more cookie dough here.
Selp-mom: Have you seen the selection of make ups they have here?!
K-mom: Cid wants to stay and I’m staying too.
Cid: chews on toothpick)
Riku: You old people don’t-
The parents get mad.
T-dad: What, boy?!
S-dad: We will whip your-
They start yelling really loud.
Akira: STOP FIGHTING!!! I wanna go home!
Tidus: Me too!
Sora: Yeah!
Kairi: I’m getting homesick!
Selphie: I miss my teddy bears!
Riku: If we stay here, who will take care of the island?!
S-mom: ...
The parents are speechless.
S-dad: I’m staying.
Riku: ...Let’s make a deal.
S-dad: Let’s hear it.
Riku: Since all the old folks wanna stay, you can stay.
The parents start to yack again.
Riku: Were going, but you guys have to come to the island once every month to supply us with more food, clothes, and other stuff we need. Meaning you gotta spend some money on us.
Complete silence.
S-dad: ...Okay. I’ll have my butlers help you pack your things.
A bit later...
Sora is on his way to work.
There's a finger in da street.
Sora: Ew.
Sora goes to work.
Sora: Morning, boss!
Manager: Hello, Sora.
Sora: We are not open today!
Manager: But why?
Sora: Because you have a date! (takes her hand)
Manager: With who?!
Sora: With a friend of mine! (drags her out) (puts closed sign up and leaves)
The manager walks with Sora to her house so she can get fixed up.
There are a lot of antique things there.
Sora: looks at antique mirror) Coooool.
Manager: puts on make up)
Sora: touches music box)
The music box makes a soothing tune.
Sora: Oooooh! (blows dust off a chest) Ooh! (opens the chest)...
There are some old pictures of Bridget and Jones when they were younger.
Sora: looks at pictures)
Manager: comes out) Well, Sora. What do you think?
Sora: I think you clean up pretty nicely.
Manager: Shall we be on our way?
Sora: Sure.
They go to Kovue's mansion.
Sora: Keep your eyes closed.
Manager: Gee, Sora.
Sora: Okay open them.
Jones is standing near with a rose.
Manager: opens eyes) ...
Sora runs and hides behind a plant.
Jones: Bridget, I’m really sorry for what I did. I know it hurt you but those were not my intensions. I-
Manager: It doesn’t matter why you did it. I’ve only been waiting for you to apologize.
Jones just smiles and hands her the rose. She hugs him.
Sora: Yes! I did it- Dad?!
Kovue is hiding behind the plant too.
S-dad: What?
Sora: Why are you hiding behind here?
S-dad: Hey! It’s MY plant!
Sora: Okay. Bye, dad.
Sora gets up and leaves.
S-dad: ...
Meanwhile...
Tyra: Bye Johnny.
Johnny: See ya. (kisses Tyra)
Tyra: I had a great time last night. Maybe I’ll call ya.
Johnny: ...Okay. (leaves)Tyra: closes door) What are you staring at?
Wakka: sits up) Who was that, man?
Tyra: None of your business.
Wakka: You sleeping-a with him?
Tyra: Shut up, Wakka. (puts jacket on)
Wakka: Where-a ya going?
Tyra: I ran outta beer. (leaves)
Wakka: ...(digs in nose)
Later...The islanders are all meeting at Kovue's place.
Riku: And she says she's moving out and we can move back in. And she wants me to say hi to Sora for her..
Sora: ...Hi.
Riku: So are we moving back?
The parents hesitate to answer.
Parents: Uh...We like it here.
Riku: What?! But it’s our island!
S-dad: I’m famous here.
S-mom: It’s comfy here.
Selp-dad: I feel welcomed here.
T-dad: I haven’t thrown out my back since I’ve been here.
T-mom: There's more cookie dough here.
Selp-mom: Have you seen the selection of make ups they have here?!
K-mom: Cid wants to stay and I’m staying too.
Cid: chews on toothpick)
Riku: You old people don’t-
The parents get mad.
T-dad: What, boy?!
S-dad: We will whip your-
They start yelling really loud.
Akira: STOP FIGHTING!!! I wanna go home!
Tidus: Me too!
Sora: Yeah!
Kairi: I’m getting homesick!
Selphie: I miss my teddy bears!
Riku: If we stay here, who will take care of the island?!
S-mom: ...
The parents are speechless.
S-dad: I’m staying.
Riku: ...Let’s make a deal.
S-dad: Let’s hear it.
Riku: Since all the old folks wanna stay, you can stay.
The parents start to yack again.
Riku: Were going, but you guys have to come to the island once every month to supply us with more food, clothes, and other stuff we need. Meaning you gotta spend some money on us.
Complete silence.
S-dad: ...Okay. I’ll have my butlers help you pack your things.
Woot, great chap gabe, I don't see why they don't want to go back to their home island.
I understand why Kovue doesn't want to go back...HES FREKIN RICH!!!! I know i wouldn't want to go back
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WOOOO chapter!!!
LOL He called them old people. And I finally went on my MySpace. Thanks for the spoiler.
Go back to island with Marylin?!I think not!Was Pirate left on the island taking care of the seagull egg?
OOOHH I HOPE SO!!
(im obsessed?)
well anyway...
warn us efore you close this thing..( please dont close it)
so we can say our... *sniffle* final goodbies
WAHHH...
and I'll take one of those puddings thankyouverymuch.
The seagull is taking care of its own egg, I think I said on myspace that I got writers block
oh. dangit!
how the heck did I forget about that?
but i doubt a parrot can live that long anyway
how the heck did I forget about that?
but i doubt a parrot can live that long anyway
After they’ve gotten packed-
At the store-
Manager: But you just got here!
Sora: I know, but it’s time for me to go home. It was great getting to know you.
Kairi: kisses Ringo's nose)
Ringo: tail wags)
Jones: clears counter)Manager: Well, thanks for everything, Sora. (hugs Sora)
Sora: You’re welcome.
Bridget straightens Sora’s collar and pats his head.
Manager: Goodbye...
Sora: Bye.
Sora smiles and walks out with Kairi.
Kairi: picks up Ringo and follows him)
Somewhere in a club-
Tyra: CHEERS! (holds drink up)
There are eleven guys with Tyra. They share a toast.
Tyra: Lets get wasted and go to my place!
Dudes: YEAH!
Tyra: Yeah!
Dudes: Yeah!
Tyra: Shut up and get drunk already! (Chugs beer)
Wow. Tyra's gonna be busy tonight.
Meanwhile again...Wakka is visiting stores and asking stupid questions...
Wakka: Ay! Do you have a beach ball, yah?
Clerk: A what?!
Wakka: Never mind, man ...
Looks like Wakka doesn’t have anything to do now.
Wakka: looks around) ... (goes to hotel)
Wakka walks from door to door asking for a place to stay.
Wakka: knocks on door)
A guy named Bob answers the door.
Bob: Hello?
Wakka: ...Can-a I stay-a here?
Bob: Well sure, big guy!
Wakka walks in and sits on the couch, feeling awkward.
Bob checks Wakka out.
Wakka: Sigh.
Bob: How long will you be staying?
Wakka: Only a day, man.
Bob: Okay. Would you care to play some pool?
Wakka: Sure.
Bob: So, what’s your name?
Wakka: I’m Wakka.
Bob: I’m Bob.
They go and play pool.
Bob: So, what kind of ascent is that?
Wakka: I don’t-a know.
Bob: I like it, it’s sexy.
Wakka: ...
Bob: You’re good at this game. Ever played it before?
Wakka: Nah.
Bob: Well, you’re beating me good.
Wakka: I know-a.
Three minutes later...
Bob: ...I think you’ve won.
Wakka: I did?!
Bob: Yes sir.Wakka: YAH! I won!
Bob: Want your prize?
Wakka: I get a prize, yah?
Bob: Yep.
...I would show this part if I wasn’t being monitored. <.<
Around dark...
Tyra: Yes! For the last time, they are real!
Tyra is sitting on the bar table with her shirt off.
Tyra: sips beer) Somebody pass me another drink!
BARTENDER: You’ve had enough, Tyra!
Tyra: I’m not even drunk yet and I’ve had enough?! Stop fooling around!
BARTENDER: frowns)
Tyra: Aw, come on!
Bartender: It says drink responsibly!
Tyra: Oh, thanks MOM! (Gets off table) I’m still waiting!
Outside Myra passes by. She’s taking Akira to get her hair trimmed.
Akira: LOOOOK!
Myra: looks in Bar window) What the?! ..Stay rite here, Akira!
Myra runs into the bar.
Myra: Tyra!
Tyra: One more bottle?!
Bartender: Nooo!
Tyra: What’s wrong with you? You need some love? I-
Myra snatches Tyra’s arm and pulls her outside. She zips Tyra’s shirt back up.
Myra: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! What is wrong with you?!?!
Tyra: There's nothing wrong with me!
Myra: What are you doing?!
Tyra: I’m partying. We’re leaving tomorrow!
Myra: But-
Tyra: Let go of me! I can take care of myself.
Tyra gives Myra a mean look and walks back into the bar.
Myra: ...
Akira: ...(pulls Myra's pants leg)
Myra: picks her up) Come on, sweetie.
Myra keeps walking and Tyra goes back to partying.
At the store-
Manager: But you just got here!
Sora: I know, but it’s time for me to go home. It was great getting to know you.
Kairi: kisses Ringo's nose)
Ringo: tail wags)
Jones: clears counter)Manager: Well, thanks for everything, Sora. (hugs Sora)
Sora: You’re welcome.
Bridget straightens Sora’s collar and pats his head.
Manager: Goodbye...
Sora: Bye.
Sora smiles and walks out with Kairi.
Kairi: picks up Ringo and follows him)
Somewhere in a club-
Tyra: CHEERS! (holds drink up)
There are eleven guys with Tyra. They share a toast.
Tyra: Lets get wasted and go to my place!
Dudes: YEAH!
Tyra: Yeah!
Dudes: Yeah!
Tyra: Shut up and get drunk already! (Chugs beer)
Wow. Tyra's gonna be busy tonight.
Meanwhile again...Wakka is visiting stores and asking stupid questions...
Wakka: Ay! Do you have a beach ball, yah?
Clerk: A what?!
Wakka: Never mind, man ...
Looks like Wakka doesn’t have anything to do now.
Wakka: looks around) ... (goes to hotel)
Wakka walks from door to door asking for a place to stay.
Wakka: knocks on door)
A guy named Bob answers the door.
Bob: Hello?
Wakka: ...Can-a I stay-a here?
Bob: Well sure, big guy!
Wakka walks in and sits on the couch, feeling awkward.
Bob checks Wakka out.
Wakka: Sigh.
Bob: How long will you be staying?
Wakka: Only a day, man.
Bob: Okay. Would you care to play some pool?
Wakka: Sure.
Bob: So, what’s your name?
Wakka: I’m Wakka.
Bob: I’m Bob.
They go and play pool.
Bob: So, what kind of ascent is that?
Wakka: I don’t-a know.
Bob: I like it, it’s sexy.
Wakka: ...
Bob: You’re good at this game. Ever played it before?
Wakka: Nah.
Bob: Well, you’re beating me good.
Wakka: I know-a.
Three minutes later...
Bob: ...I think you’ve won.
Wakka: I did?!
Bob: Yes sir.Wakka: YAH! I won!
Bob: Want your prize?
Wakka: I get a prize, yah?
Bob: Yep.
...I would show this part if I wasn’t being monitored. <.<
Around dark...
Tyra: Yes! For the last time, they are real!
Tyra is sitting on the bar table with her shirt off.
Tyra: sips beer) Somebody pass me another drink!
BARTENDER: You’ve had enough, Tyra!
Tyra: I’m not even drunk yet and I’ve had enough?! Stop fooling around!
BARTENDER: frowns)
Tyra: Aw, come on!
Bartender: It says drink responsibly!
Tyra: Oh, thanks MOM! (Gets off table) I’m still waiting!
Outside Myra passes by. She’s taking Akira to get her hair trimmed.
Akira: LOOOOK!
Myra: looks in Bar window) What the?! ..Stay rite here, Akira!
Myra runs into the bar.
Myra: Tyra!
Tyra: One more bottle?!
Bartender: Nooo!
Tyra: What’s wrong with you? You need some love? I-
Myra snatches Tyra’s arm and pulls her outside. She zips Tyra’s shirt back up.
Myra: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! What is wrong with you?!?!
Tyra: There's nothing wrong with me!
Myra: What are you doing?!
Tyra: I’m partying. We’re leaving tomorrow!
Myra: But-
Tyra: Let go of me! I can take care of myself.
Tyra gives Myra a mean look and walks back into the bar.
Myra: ...
Akira: ...(pulls Myra's pants leg)
Myra: picks her up) Come on, sweetie.
Myra keeps walking and Tyra goes back to partying.
Ohh man I wish I was in that bar when she was drunk XD
How long have they been in olyumis anyway?And hey doesnt it only take 1 month for an egg to like do all that stuff?I cant get into the myspace thing.My computer is just really weird.And if pirate was like a macaw or quaker or a parrot taller than 10 inches, the usally live for 10-15 years.I know lots about birdies!Birdies are sooo cute and cuddly and totally can peck you to death!My bird killed the other one because she was jealous.Sad sad day.I dont want to relive sad stuff so please don't leave.Or you can go to a friends house and get on the computer!Who cares if you can't post the rest of your fic!Just don't leave or or or um.....someone will call eughey's angry mob!Hey, where is eughey anyway???
HOLY ****! Dam what a slut! For a second there i though myra had enough and was gonna knock tyra out. XD maybe in the future?
For a second there i though myra had enough and was gonna knock tyra out. XD maybe in the future?
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WOOOOOO chapter!!! I wonder why I say that?*shrugs* I think i Know what happens next. Blah Blah goes and blanks something then everyone will be sad.
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