Still good in my opinion Zero, you could use a little bit of more detail, but other than that it was great and funny. i thought they were gonna kill Sparky if they fought him any longer. Good work
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im glad they didnt kill sparky. i like him.
Lol, I like him to and I wouldnt kill an Experiment thats wrong but I would kill any character instantly.
Lol, I like him to and I wouldnt kill an Experiment thats wrong but I would kill any character instantly.
The four ran towards the Lightning as fast as they could before anyone could get hurt. When they got there they saw people running away, screaming, a car blown up, and just total chaos. They saw the Experiment that was doing this (1) and it was short just like Stitch, with yellow fur, cone shaped ears, two antennas on its head, a giant grin, and red eyes. When it saw the four it quickly zapped towards them while laughing insanely. So the four (2) quickly took out their weapons and Rachel brought out a Blizzara from her Staff and it hit the Experiment right in the face which knocked it out.
"Is it dead?" Wondered Remi (3) and he got down to his knees and stared at the thing (3) and after a quick second it jumped up and grabbed onto Remi's head. It started to laugh again (3) and it let out a shock on Remi (3) and it then jumped off of him and zapped itself behind the fallen car. "Im going to kill that thing." He yelled and his hair was all messed up and his face had dark spots from the shock.
"Wait! This Experiment is an Electric type (4) so we need to use its weakness on it.(5)" Rachel then pulled out a weird, blue charm from her pocket and gave it to Remi. "Its Blizzara. I need you to help me out for this to work." The group (6)then huddled up and Rachel told them her plan.
After a while the Experiment peeked over the car to see what (7) the four were doing (4) and it only saw Kevin and Viktor. It was bored so it it (8) decided to let out some Lightning at the two to get things started. Kevin and Viktor waited (4) and all of a sudden Lightning appeared in front of the car (4) and it raced towards the two so they quickly got out of the way.
"You piece of-" Muttered Kevin (9) and he ran towards the Experiment (9) and Viktor did the same. Viktor then shot at the Experiment with his Arrow Gun (9) but the Experiment quickly hid behind the car. Kevin ran right at the car and swung his blade (9) which (10)then broke the car in two. (11) And behind it was the Experiment with its hands over its face (9) but it (12)didnt matter to Kevin (9) and he lifted his blade. The Experiment (10) then stopped pretending to be afraid (9) and it let a shock onto Kevin and Viktor and zapped over them so he could get away. He (10) then looked at the paralyzed (13) two and pulled his tongue out at them.
(14) But it wasnt paying attention (9) and Remi shot a Blizzara at it which froze a part of its head. (15)So Remi quickly took out the container and put it in it (9) but it started to go crazy (9)and it let out shocks in the container. (14) But Rachel came out and let out a Blizzara on the container (9) and it froze the Experiment inside it, leaving the container looking like a clear crystal.
"Glad that's over.(5)" (16) And Viktor let out a sigh (9) and Rachel started to giggle.
"Whats so funny?" Asked Kevin.
"Your faces. Hahaha.(5)" (16)And the three guys looked at each other (17) and their hair was standing up (9) and their faces looked like something exploded right in their face. They all began to laugh and fixed themselves.
"We should really get going to the Mountain, Lilo and Stitch are probably there already.(5)" They all nodded (9) and Remi put the Experiment on his back (9) and they headed towards the Mountain.
Er :w- what's there to say, good story for one, nice adding Lilo and Stitch, is Lilo a kid seeing as Jumba (or whoever) said that (I think Remi) reminds him of Lilo when she was younger. That's all I got. (still weirded out.)
So, the other Stitch is a version made out of darkness?
True that. Dark, Darkness. (no way to hide what it means.)Yes but I was going to reveal that the dark matter was darkness but then again dark matter already lets you know its darkness.
True that. Dark, Darkness. (no way to hide what it means.)
They ran towards the mountain, and before they started to walk up it they all looked up and saw a black fog covering some of the mountain.
Remi nodded and they all looked back down at the fight, but it was hard to tell who was winning because the moved at a fast pace.
Then the fight slowed down and the real Stitch was looking exhausted, but the fake one didn't care and he kept punching. Stitch then fell near the edge, and as he looked toward the bottom of the edge he saw raging waters below. The fake Stitch laughed insanely, and at that moment Remi jumped into action. He threw the container on his back in the air and jumped down to the fight. Kevin grinned as he caught the container at what Remi was doing for Stitch.
Tell that to Jumba, when he had first created him.Stich is too good to get sucked in the darkness.