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Zacdos

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Okay, since the first attempt kinda flopped, I'm going to redo this. Some thing about my character have to be said, and I wanna say 'em. ^_^

Story:


There exist a rare spiecies, that grew from man. And man has given it the name 'diclonius'. This new race, is looked down upon as a monstrosity. For not only is it the next evolutionary step, but it is also a threat to humanity. But after the near genocide of this spiecies, a small few have survived.

Two indiviuals in particular, are the most fortunate of the race. (Dispite their agonizing time so far.) They are known as Zack, and Lucy.

For these two diclonius, have suffered greatly for nearly 15 years. But they were finally freed (accidently), they quickly met up, and went into hiding for a while.

They had to rely on each other, and try their best to control their dark instincts. Both of them seemed to be getting alone alright, and they connected very quickly. But because Lucy suffered a massive injury upon escape, another personality was created, Nyu. So Zack had to do more to take care of them both.

But peace doesn't last long for a diclonius. It wasn't long before Zack and Nyu were discovered by a military search party, sent out by the diclonius research facility. So once again, they were on the run.

Finally after many narrow escapes, the two discovered an abandoned warehouse, where some secret technology was being creafted. Unbeknownst to the two diclonius, it was Gummi technology. It had secretly found it's way to Earth. But there was no time to stare in wonder. Nyu and Zack were still being persuded, and they were willing to believe that another world would hold a better fate, than that if they remained on this one. So they immediatly got in, and after an accidentaly press of a button, they were off into the stars.


From then on, the've been traveling to different worlds, mainly searching for a place they can feel at home in. And though some worlds have offered, Zack and Nyu would still like to keep looking, for many reasons of their own.

It's been three years since they both excaped, their world and began traveling. Now they have visited many worlds, have seen many things, made a few friends, and even accuired some new tricks and items. And this diclonius duo, is no longer a duo. For on two particular worlds, they have befriended an alien symbiote named Toxin, and two digital monsters, Veemon and Keramon.

Note: They have only found two places where the party liked to call 'homebase'.

The Doc's house/lab in Hill Vally - Where Doc Brown acts as a base operater
The Todou Academy (japan) - Here they met Maya Natsume; the leader of the Juuken club at the school and a near-expert in many martial arts, Aya Natsume; (Maya's sister) a master with a katana and may have feelings for Zack after a few adventures, Souichiro Nagi; an arrogent and headstrong fighter with vast (untapped) power, Masatak Takayanagi; Maya's star pupil and one of the best fighters in the school, and Bob Makihara; Souichiro's friend and a strong fighter with his legs.

((On occation, Zack and the rest travel to Haven City (Jak) to get tune-ups on varuious tech equipment))


But little do Zack, Nyu and their friends know, there is a dark force at work, that aimes to utalize the diclonius' power to complete their devilish plans...



~Where we last left our heroes...~
~At the Todou Academy, in the Juuken Club's dojo~

"Take that!!" Zack shouted as he swung his katana downwards. (for Zack's katana, check 'weapons' section of bio)

Aya hit the katana with her's and pushed it aside as she tripped Zack with a sweeping kick. "Careful!" She smirked and giggled.

"What? WHOA!!" Zack shouted as he feel on his backside. "Ah...that smarts...and what's worst, is I lost...AGAIN!!"

Aya laughed a bit and extended her hand, "At least you're getting better with the new [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Reiki."

Zack sighed a bit, then smiled as he took Aya's hand and got up. "Heh, yeah. I'm glad it's not causing any more trouble for you." He said as he smiled at her.

Aya blushed a bit and smiled, "Yeah. Thanks to you..." Then got a bit embarrased, and said, "So, how long are you going to stay here, this time?"

"Not too long unfortunatly," Zack said putting the Reiki-roth, away. "I still need to tie up a few loose ends before I can do anything peacfully. But I promise to come by often." He said smiling.

Aya was glad to hear that.

But Maya walked in to the dojo at that time and said, "Good. If you're staying for a while, you can help Masatakaclean the dojo up.
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Zack sighed, "Looks like I'm staying longer than I thought..." ^^;


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Rules:

-No godmoding
-No powerplaying
-NO FREAKIN' SPAMMING!!!
-No 'mysterious/enigmatic/unkown' past!
-put 'It's a redo...' at the top of your post
-You can be anyone, or an original character, only you may not be another diclonius. (original character preferred)
-Swearing is allowed. Just not too often. We don't want a South Part RP now do we?
-Romance is greatly allowed! But keep it PG-13 people! (unfortuatly, XD)
-No double-posting
-Follow the various rules, set by Morph and LoC
-Put '...again. ^^;' at the bottem of your post


Template:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Weapon(s):
Power(s):
Appearence:
Bio:
Homeworld:
Other: (whatever else you wanna add: tattos, themesong, etc.)


Read the rules! =3

I'll post my template soon. ;D
 
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Lord of Chaos

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Heh... long time no see, my... I guess older brother of sorts? You are two years older than me... I just noticed that. Odd. Haha...first to join. Proud as well.


It's a redo...


Name: Zay Makai

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Weapon(s)/Power(s): Two Nine-point chakra wheels (since everyone knows them by that incorrect name...-.-) And thirteen levels of power, starting with just basic increased abilities. You have to get him to that next level in order to experience it. ^_^

Appearance: Think a mix between Xemnas and Zexion, inbetween, and about 17 years old. That is what he looks like, except his eyes are platinum/purple in color. He wears a gothic-styled outfit and over it, wears an Organization coat, er, what used to be one. Now it's just black, with the XIV marked out, and a Crescent moon with a Seven Point Star in the middle of it. Around his neck, he wears a seven-point star amulet, and he has that symbol branded into his face under his left eye.

Homeworld: Theorion

Other:

Bio: Zay is a being that many have tried to figure out...but none have succeeded. His origins are unknown...but his past since then certainly isn't. He started as a young boy growing up off of Theorion (the only part that is known about his origins). He was adopted by the original Organization XIII, only to abandon them later on, before they became officially known as the Thirteenth Organization (elsewise we would have Org. XIV).

His powers are phenomenal, and almost unlimited it seems...though it has shown that he does have a weakness, and can be defeated. He has faced Zack twice, and both times... Zack escaped.

The last time that Zay was seen, he was about to destroy another world, or, have a crazed psychopath destroy it for him (*cough* Zetsumi *cough*). He aptly disappeared, however, and went trekking for an unbeknownst amount of time. Though it looks like he hasn't aged.... maybe he has... more than we know. A question remains though...

Is he still evil...and does he want revenge on Zack for him being the only person to escape his wrath?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Other~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Theme Song: Rapture by Hurt

Ship: http://www.isp101.com/~mikenoel/Images/yel_ship.jpg

Tattoo: He has the tattoo of a weird symbol on the back of his left shoulder, right under the shoulder blade.


...again. ^^;
 

Raynie

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"It's a redo..."

Name: Raynie "Lockedheart" Strife
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Weapon: Promise Whisper. A pair of fingerless fighting gloves, one of many but one of her favorite to use. They're entirely black in color, all except for the silver broken heart design on each upper-knuckle.

Appearance: Raynie has shoulder length dark brown hair with blonde tips and one streak Running along the right side of her head near her face. She has mako-blue eyes and a slight pale complexion, her body build is regular really. Except for the fact that she does have some muscle one both arms, though not very visible. She wears an outfit completely made out of a soft black material. a black tank top with a zipper running verticaly in front of it. Along with a pair of black baggy pants and a half matching apron around her waist. A pair of
black combat boots, a wolf symbol, similar to her dad's, on both sides of the boots.

On her left shoulder she wears a silver shoulder guard, a long black fabric cascading down from it, covering her entire left arm. She also wears black gloves and a silver chained necklace with a tear drop pendant hanging off of it. On both ears she has a piercing on each, a small silver hoop on her right, while her left was adorned with a tiger shaped stud. (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25984490/ (( Click to see howher outfit looks like Warning: You steal that piccy... You die... D< ))

Personality: She has a pretty upbeat attitude and very talkative, which can sometimes be annoying. Raynie can get real cocky in battle and hardheaded many times on and off battle. Her whole thing is acting tough and never showing her real emotions on the inside. Always wearing a 'mask' so as to not let others worry for her, also due to the fact she hates sympathy from anyone.

Bio: Raynie was raised in the busy and almost forgotten city of Midgar. Despite it’s past, she loves being there, and even if there have been many hardships along the way in the main city of the Planet. She was taken into care by the Planet’s Hero, Cloud Strife and eventually Tifa Lockheart as well, though she thought of Cloud as more of a Father figure to her and Tifa as a best friend or Sister at most. But before she ever made a presence in Midgar, she originally spent her days, years, in the labs of the Shinra Electric Company. Naming itself an ‘electric company’ as a ploy to hide its true intentions.

Herself and three more, all of which were silver-haired and looked almost identical if it wasn’t for their different facial appearances. Raynie was an experiment, having stayed the same age for years along with the other three men that she grew to know. But those memories were hardly there anymore, as if they were erased, starting a new life for her, masking the past with shattered images in her mind. The only one she could remember was the youngest of the three, shoulder-length silver hair and piercing Mako eyes, that she remembered would make her shudder or sent shivers down her spine everytime she gazed at them. Kadaj…

Raynie soon pushed those fragment of memories away, all except for Kadaj whom she was determined to find one day. As she aged, her body did not, nobody, not even herself, knows her exact age really. But as long as she had that appearance, she stuck with it, her mentality and personality sticking to that of a fifteen year old, unintentionally. But no one else knew, except her. As she kept going on her days in Midgar, she soon learned how to fight with Tifa’s training… After of course some pleading and bowing, all out of humor as Raynie so put it. At the same time she built a rivalry with the ‘Great Ninja’ Yuffie Kisaragi, both of them going at each others necks everyday.

Years passed, Raynie going off on her own now, disappearing for several days at a time before returning back to Midgar and to her adoptive Father after some Materia hunting or racing with Yuffie to see who could find the most Materia. Unfortunately, one day she never returned. She had gone off to the real Forgotten City of the Planet, straying off from her usual path and into the enigmatic path that laid before her. Anything after that, she couldn’t remember, waking up in a ‘topsy-turvy’ town… Traverse Town. She met up with the Gunblader and surprisingly and much to her luck, the ‘Great Ninja’ as well.

Yet, she knew her, it seemed the Ninja did not know her back. Raynie disregarded it, eventually turning Traverse town into her makeshift home till she got back to Midgar. She stayed with Leon and Yuffie, helping them out here and there. Leaning about the Keyblade Master and the Keyblade itself as well, making her mission to find this Keyblader. Though she mostly took up the challenge to impress Leon due to her crush on him and out of finally putting down that stupid Ninja girl. Raynie was certainly one hell of a Alice stuck in ‘Wonderland’.

Homeworld: Midgar. Currently in Traverse Town.

Theme Song: Yellowcard-Lights and Sounds

"...Again. ^^;"
 
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Funky Bear

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WTF "It's a redo..."

Name: Shiro Akuyatama
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Weapon(s): Oni soul saber
Power(s): Once overcome with sorrow Shiro is able transform into a powerful Demon king called "Soul Taker" which has a gargoyle like form with horn's that face forward,with Gargoyle wings blue skin and gash across his chest.he has a helmet which covers his face. Here
Appearence: Shiro has brown spiky hair along with dark black brown eyes,along with a dark yellowish and brown coat with a red wave scarf with black boots,and pants a well. Here
Bio: Later
Homeworld: Mobius

Theme music: "In the end"

Again...
 

Zacdos

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What the hell, I'll post my template now and others can join up 'till we start. (unless told other wise)

[FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif] Name: Zack
Age: 18
Spieces: Diclonius
Weapons:
- Metal Gear RAY
- Twilight Bracelet
- Vectors (eight of them)
- Symbiote Suit (Toxin)
- The green Chaos Emerald
- Vector Keyblade (http://forums.khinsider.com/showpost.php?p=277404&postcount=174)
- Innermost Heart Keyblade (Shown in my pic here: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/27779783/)
- Knows some Shinobi Skills (Jutsu, Genjutsu, etc.)
- Soul Robber (used for slashing and grasping things)
- Alchemy (from FMA not the real kind) (he's having trouble, but is quickly learning how to use it right)
- Life Crystal (given after his visit to Atlantis)
- Sephiroth's Masamune combined with a cursed masamune called 'Reiki' (this is the most poweerful and dangerous weapon Zack has)
[For short typing reasons, I've decided to call this combined blade, the Reiki-roth. (Don't laugh XD)]
Summons:
--Beetlejuice = "Showtime!"
--Edward Scissorhands = "Hedge Trimmer"
--Sly Cooper = "Swipe"
--Clank = "Maintenance"
--Daxter = "Action Star"
--Stranger = "Big Bounty"
--Nny = "Late Night Fun"
Powers: 1 secret one I'll reveal in the RP. ;D
Appearence: Has these horns (For body image, see below)
Bio: Zack is not like other humans. He's...........different. But not in the unique way we all are. He's been treated harshly because of this difference. For Zack is something more than a human...........he is a diclonius. This is supposedly the next evolutionarty step in the man's evolution. The main characteristic of the diclonius, are two horns that stick out just atop the head. Above the ears, but not quite on the top of the skull. Dispite this difference, Zack's parents didn't care what he looked like; they loved him just the same. And with his parents help, the first 4 years of Zack's life was good. Like any normal kid's life. Just..........Zack had to wear a hat to cover his horns most of the time. Just so he wasn't treated harshly based on sudden appearence. (They were smaller at this point)

But like all good things, they must come to an end. Unfortunatly, this end came far too soon. For there was a secret organization that specialized in studying the diclonius. (But they were also controling the diclonius population so they don't overrun humans) And they wanted to take Zack in. But Zack's parents refused. They wanted to raise him as best they could, as a normal kid. However, this organization was ruthless, and after a grand struggle for Zack, his parents were killed before his very eyes. Leaving him slightly scarred. Unlucky for the scientists who were capturing Zack, this was also about the time his vectors came through and Zack learned how to use them. (It comes naturally after age 3) So, Zack slaughtered many scientists and gaurds in a blind anger, but was eventually subdued.

When he awoke, scared and confused, Zack had no idea what had just happened. For there are certain times, when the diclonius instincs within Zack take over, and they are ruthless and care not for any life the stand in or around it's path.

Zack then spent 11 years undergoing torturous experiments. This also damaged Zack's personality. Giving him a dark side, and causing his killer diclonius mind to grow. Finally, after this long time, an electrical error caused Zack's shackles to crack open and Zack was then freed.

Dispite the trauma and chaos now invoked within Zack's personality and mind, he still manages (or tries to) keep an upbeaat attitude.

Immediatly after excaping the facility, he came across another diclonius to whom he immediatly befrended and cared for deeply. A young girl named Nyu. Together, they accidently discovered mysterious technology that allowed them to travel to other worlds. That's when their journey really began.

And for the next three years, he's undergone a few changes and aqquired a few things. ((See above))

In the short time of three years, Zack, Nyu and Toxin have visited far more worlds than you'd think. Together, they've helpped more people and worlds then they care to count. And on a few worlds that often have offworlders, Zack's name is becoming fairly well known throughout the Omniverse. Just imagine if he and his friends continue this path...

Think of the possibilities these three (sometimes six) could accopmlish...

Recently, Zack and everyone, have found another refuge in Japan, on a variation of planet Earth. (different to his home) This place is the house of a close friend, Aya Natsume. There, he goes to the Juuken club (run by Aya's sister, Maya). He can learn many different fighting styles and techniques there, as well as better weapon combat.

Over the short time Zack and his friends have helpped out in the Juuken club (rivals, events, etc.), and after loosing
[/FONT]Souichiro to her sister, Aya has started develpoing feelings for Zack. Thought Zack's a little oblivious to them (unintentionally). Sometimes she even manages to come along with Zack onto other worlds.
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He looks something like this pic:
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Party:
- Toxin (within)
- Nyu/Lucy
- Veemon
- Keramon
- Aya Natsume

Theme Song: Chosen One - Shadow OST, What you see - Oingo Boingo


Crips....I need to shorten that whole profile a bit. XD


Okay, and just to let you people know, here's a list of SOME of the worlds you can expect to visit in this RP.

(NOT IN ORDER)
-Halloween and Christmas Town
-Hill Valley
-Mobius
-The Facility (Elfen Lied)
-New York Citiy (Spider-man)
-Hollow Bastion (Kingdom Hearts)
-Midgar (Final Fantasy 7)
-Sin City
-TRON




We'll start in a bit, or when a few more ppl join.
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Alaude Drenxta

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OOC: never fear, I'm here Zacky-boi :p
Nice to see you're still alive there ^-^

IC:
It's a redo...
Name: Makyu Eramiss
Age: 28
Gender: Male

Weapon(s): He is equipped with the two blades of legend, the heirlooms of his planet. Dragonheart and Gryphonsoul. He also carries the obsidian black stone, which holds the power to summon the obsidian dragon, a gargantuan black beast of legend. His dragon amulet allows him to take upon the form of his heart and mind, his inner most being. A small diamond has been imbedded in each of his palms, their use remains unknown to all but him. There is another item he hold with him, one of drastic important. The ring of darklight, it's powers unknown to the world of the living, none understand it's use.

Power(s): Makyu's abilties, in summation, range from elemental manipulation, dark and light bending, the ability to transform, summoning, and being able to re-arrange the atoms of a creature.

Appearence: http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/9052/a4df536e9cc.jpg

Bio: Makyu was born on the planet of Novod, a peaceful and serene kingdom on the outskirts of the Sylphus galaxy. It was a beautiful planet, green and lush. Magic and strength dominated the country, the mightiest warriors fought for its peace. Makyu, was born to the king and queen of the planet, making him, the prince of Novod.

As a child, Makyu was unusual. At birth, he performed a mysterious act, driven by powerful and ancient magic. The doctor's shrugged it off, passing it by as some strange fluke, and thought nothing of it. His upbringing was erratic and unstable. Some days he'd seem to be an angel, the perfect child, and seemed even to emit a heavenly glow. On others, his mood was dark and malicious, scaring other children, and in many cases grown men. Darkness engulfed his thoughts, and as he grew older, the dark side seemed to become predominant.

When he was 6, he was sent to a private school, as the king's court advisors feared the boy's mysterious magical powers. He seemed to be able to manipulate dead, ancient magic, of phenomenal power. In this school, his tempers raged and flared like wildfire. He beat on other children, fought constantly, and was always in some sort of trouble. By the age of 7, he'd committed an unforgivable act.

He was being picked on at the school, and in an effort to avenge the wrong doings placed upon him, his temper flared, and he hunted the boys down. Anger and hatred sparked a deep magic in both him, and the planet. He killed the boys, releasing massive stores of dark magic in the process, a brutal murder.

There is a legend on Novod, the story of a dark beast, and the hero of light who would purge him. In the legend, the hero used the power of light, and the pure thoughts and hope of the people, to defeat the beast, and sacrificed his own life, to seal the beast's power away. The two powers, consuming the world's magic, merged, and were absorbed into the energy of the planet, sealing them away for eternity. Provided that the hearts of the people remained hopeful and pure, the beast would forever remain sealed.

Makyu, in his fit of dark power and rage, broke the seal. The planet began to shake, and crack. The lush greenery shriveled, and fell away dead. Novod became barren and dark, cold as night in the desert. Fearing darkness would consume them, all the planet's inhabitant fled the planet, and became scattered across the universe. Makyu's family fled to Twilight Town, where he lived until age 12, unable to remember his dark power fits, or the act he'd commited.

Here, he lived a somewhat normal life, much of the dark power he'd held drained away. When he was twelve, the yearly tournament was held. Every year, five 12 year olds were taken to the keyblader's academy, a school led by Sora himself, the legendary keywielder. Makyu trained here to control his power, unacknowledging either, and not knowing of his potential. He met three people here at the school, and the four of them became close friends. Kraf, Zack, and Raynie. Each of them all had a mysterious magical potential, or some secret power that was hidden form them.

They journeyed into the black abyss, a land of unfaltering time. There, they each faced their darkness and their fears, evils they had held in their hearts. Casting aside their distractions and undefended principles, they trained, for two years, to strengthen themselves. Makyu found out his ultimate truths. He was made from the culminated powers of the dark beast, and the legendary hero, his great great great grandfather. He had the very power of the planet itself, and held the strength to unleash it. He was both light and dark, and was prepared to utilize either, when needed. In the abyss, they met Leon, and old friend of Sora's, who had resided in the abyss for years, and had become a hermit. He trained them to release their great powers, and prepared them for their oncoming battle.

Leaving the abyss, they returned to the school, two years older, and a hundred times as strong, although only two hours had passed by. Their battle was against an oncoming heartless army. They led a thousand students, against a thousand fleets of heartless, and won. They drove the heartless into a mountain range, and were dispatched to rid them of the heartless leader. Sephiroth, the dark prince, was the leader. The four of them tried to defeat him, but he escaped and fled from the planet, leaving the heartless to be dispersed. Makyu, unable to live with his failure; left the school, his friends, and everything he knew; to chase after Sephiroth, and put him down for good.

In his ventures, he traveled the span of time; fighting alongside Sora in his first venture. He brought salvation to feudal Japan, obtaining the obsidian black gem in the process. He liberated Konoha Village from the hierarchy of the demon ninjas. He also fought in the legendary endgame tournament, alongside and against many heroes and heroines of legend. He served in AJ's imperial army as a lieutenant captain, and he fought alongside Ukiah Oregon, The Dreamer himself, against the demons of the nine circles of hell.

He reunited with his friends, ten years later, and spanned the multiverse in a final journey. The four of them, once again united, fought on many planets, raged and concluded wars, and finally completed Makyu's quest. Together, they finally put down Sephiroth, banishing him to the Farplane.

His final stretch, the last story of his life. The restoration of Novod, twilight of magic. He hosted a massive tourney, numerous heroes and fighters across the omniverse fought here against enemies both dead and alive. A happy fight it was, victory was grand. But, at twilight, Makyu lost his life. It was his destiny to die that day, for as twilight hits, and the sun falls completely behind the horizon, should he be on his home planet, his life and magic force would be taken, and returned to the planet from whence it came. Novod was a flourishing kingdom once more, and became ruled by the family Makyu had formed. His unknown wife gave birth to a son, upon her deathbed, Velkion Eramiss, the king of Novod.

Cast out of the land of the living, Makyu retreated to the Farplane, where he has lived for almost thirty years. He has not aged a bit physically, but his former power has returned to him, and in his ancient age, he has gained even more, new powers. He received a gift from the gods, the ring of dark light. The ring has the power to shine through the farplane, giving life to the dead. Makyu has finally decided to return home.........

Once more in the living realm mMakyu was finally feeling the sensation of life, almost at the peak he had felt during his true lifetime. Although his very exsitence had become a sham, a half-life, he lived as if all reality were but a wave of a hand. His journey's across the ever shifting wastelands of eternity in the Omniverse had led him across a multitude of "heroes" and "heroines". He'd yet to see his childhood friends, but recognised the faces of many memorable beings.

Scaping the deepest reaches of the many levels and planes, the most distant galaxies and dimensions, Makyu encountered an ancient planet that had seemed to vanquish itself form the clutches of time. The planet itself felt virile and foreboding, as if an ever shifting omni-prescence had floated in the aura of the planet. Sarka, the brink of eternity. This was the planet's title, given to it as the planet was set on the very line between this world and the next, the final depth of the mortal plane. Here, Makyu quickly took up the ways and teachings of these people. Although they were technologically inferior to the vast portion of the mortal plane, they were on a whole nother set level of intellectual understanding.

Their eons of study had brought them to an impasse of reality, tempting to bridge the gap that they bordered and allow them to acheive ascension of the godly nature. It was said that the 4 basic elements that had culminated all physical existence; fire, water, earth, and wind; had molded together to form energy and life. It was the potent energies and limitless re-usable power supply that came from these elements that fueled everything on the mortal plane, the very cause of existence. They told him that on a sub-atomic level, the raw and ingrained power of a single element was naught but a glimpse at the limitless power posed by fusing the four together.

This was where the rumors flooded. Theories swarmed that molecular fusion of the exorcised energy emitted from the elements could indeed produce life, power, and limitless energy. They also theorised the capabilities of un-fathomable control of time and space, a sort of warp force that could rip the fibers of the mortal plane, allowing a being to enter a sort of limbo, where time stands still. Entering this limbo, one must only get to there destination, and rip the hole open again to re-enter the mortal world at the exact moment they left. A final rumour, immortality. Ascension. Godly might. The legends of the people spoke of the Sarkan diamonds that could bend this raw energy and fuse it together inside the cells of it's wielder. This user was to be...immortal....

That was 2 years ago today. Makyu has since gone from the outer rim of the mortal plane, straight into the exact center, the epicenter of the multiverse. Her lies the youngest planet of them all, the recreation of the eldest. The multiverse's catalyst planet, it marks the rebirth period of life, which is what intrigued MAkyu the most. The prospect itself seemed to represent how the young take place of the old, and bring new perspective into view. This planet had become his home, not yet inhabited by an "intelligent species." This was also where the signs of the mayhem had begun to show.

As he made his way there, he came across signs of darkness expanding like wildfire, and sought truth from the prophets of the Farplane who were surely looking the situation over with a finetooth comb. They were the ones who told him what precious little he knew about this dark entity. They warned him that he alone could not handle it, and to gather himself aid from the most powerful forces in the mortal plane to aid in the fight. He'd have to return with them, and see what else could be learned.

Homeworld: Novod

Other: Alive-P.O.D.
 
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"its a redo..."
Name: Hiroki Sato
Age: 19
Gender: male
Appearance: http://www.animevisions.net/Pictures/guys/guys228.jpg

Weapon: the sword in the pic- dark maurader, a sacred heirloom in the Sato family passed on through generations. It is said that it has slayed many men, and demons that their energy has been stored in the sword itself, waiting for the right master to unleash it.
silver pheonix gloves- able to summon silver tipped flames that rush the advesary, many times consuming everything but a few ashes.
pheonix tail daggers- these are tied around each of his arms, which allows him to throw them fast and long.

power: he can mold most metal to his will, shaping them, and move them around. Also with the help of his tattoos, he can create a silver pheonix to aid him.

Personality: the out-going and leisurely type, he wants to live life to the fullest. He gets along with everyone, trusting, what they call it. Sometimes to the point of being called gullible. When he’s angry though, he will kill his best friend if he doesn’t control himself.

bio: Hiroki grew up on the war-torn world of ashen. On one side, were a barbaric race who, who fought against Hiroki's Faction, Silver Sun, for dominance on the planet. The world wasn't only split up by factions, but by terrains. Many different biomes were on his planet, ranging from Densely packed forests, to ever-changing deserts.

Hiroki lived on the outskirts of a forest that rose up, that it reached the heavens. There he was taught like a normal kid, played with the others, and had a normal life. One thing they told him never to do was step into the forest, no matter what.

Well, i think we all know what happened after that.... His curiousity high, he took his first step into the forest, which was known as Aven's forest.(again sorry for the bad name) Inside, he saw wonderful creatures, all different color, and trees that actually reached out and grabbed him. He wasn't afraid though, he felt secure in this enviroment, and walked on. After a while, he reached a clearing, when he stepped unto it however, the floor shook, and out came a creature he had never seen before, and for the first time, he felt scared.

It seemed to be made out entirely out of rock, the only facial features he could see were eyes, and they were staring at him. He ran as fast as he could out of the clearing, as the creature raced behind him. Suddenly, the forest ended at a cliff, at the bottom was a raging river, and as Hiroki turned his head to see if he lost the beast, he accidentily fell off.

As he rushed to the raging waters, a silver pheonix came by his side, and seemed to stare at him, as if reading him. " Do you want to die...?", he heard in his head, realizing it was speaking to him.

"Of course not.."
"If you choose to come to me, you will not die, but you will never see your loved ones ever again..."
" If I stay here, it won't matter... I'm yours!"


At that moment, the pheonix wrapped its wings around the boy, and dissapeared in a flurry of flames just before hitting the water. As promised, he didn't die, and spent time around his homeworld, learning new things, but always keeping in touch with his freind. Although he doesn't know of what truely happened that day, when he made that agreement with the pheonix, every single person he knew and love, his hometown, anyone he ever met in his past, were consumed by an unearthly fire, never extinguishing, until nothing was left.

He has found a way to use his phonix to travel to different worlds, to learn anything he can, never forgetting that fateful day, he left his old life, and picked up a new one...

homeworld: ashen ( sorry for the bad world name)
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other: has 2 solid black pheonix wing tattos going down each arm, ending at his wrists.

theme song: "mouth like a magazine"- showbread
"again..."
 
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Now then...

IC: Zack and [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Masataka worked hard for the past little while as they cleaned the dojo from top to bottem. Nyu helpped as well.

Once they were done, both
[/FONT][FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Masataka and Zack fell on their backs on the floor, exahsted.

"Man...this is tough..." Zack gasped. "And you had to do double this?" He asked.

[/FONT][FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Masataka caught his breath, "Nah. Heh, sometimes I'd have to clean the outside too..."

"...WHAT?!?! Maya works you like a dog! And this isn't even training!" Zack sighed. "I'm glad she's not teaching me then..." He said smiling a bit.


"Well, well, laying down on the job, huh?" Maya asked looking over Zack.

"Uh! Maya! N-No! We weren't slacking off or anything...RIght
[/FONT][FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Masataka?" Zack said getting up fast.

[/FONT][FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Masataka responded, "O-Of course sensei! We actually finished eariler than we thought."

Maya smiled a smug little smile, "Well, I guess that's alright then. And seeing as you DID manage to get the place clean. Alright, take a break you two."

Zack and
[/FONT][FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Masataka took another sigh and smiled that they'ed get a break.

"Nyu!" She smiled as she copied Zack's sigh. (always playful ^_^)

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In another area, far beyond...

Three powerful figures stood in front of multiple veiwscreens, gazing upon many worlds and people. But many of these screens now showed images of Zack at the Juuken dojo.

"Are you sure this is the one you spoke of?" A dark shadow asked.

A figure nodded, "That is the one..."

"But this creature is practiacally a child!" A fairly muscular figure pointed out.

"Do not let appearences guide your judgement...You of all people should know that Thanos." The main/leader figure said.

Thanos grumbled a bit and continued to watch the monitor, "Very well. If you saw so cloaked one...And if your information can be trusted, then you have done us a great favour in finding this individual."

"But of course." The cloaked figure said with a slight bow.

"Hmm...perhaps we should test his power before creating a plan to apprehend him..." The shadow said.

"What did you have in mind, Aku?" Thanos asked.

Aku just looked at Thanos with his burning eyes, as a large and evil grin, consumed his demonic face...
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" You know Phoenix, after all these years, I've never given you a name.." He pointed out to his freind, which he was riding on at the time. " Actually, I've given you my name, You've just never listened to it..." The bird said in thought-speak. " Oh, ok, so what is it?"

He said, turning to see the view. They were high, really high. The forest looked like grass from up here, and the concrete paved roads, looked like a small, muddy, river. " Hey! You did it again!" Said the Pheonix, doing a barrel roll, dropping Hiroki, 60 stories from the ground. " Oh... no" was all he could say as he plummeted to the ever-increasing road. " Would i actually do that to you?" said the bird, as he went under him, just in time.

" Fine! Whats your name! I'll listen!" He shouted. "Its kane" the bird said. "All that for that name? Man, your lucky, were high in the air, or I'd kill you." Hiroki said. 'Where are we anyway?", he thought. " I think its called Japan.."
 

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This new anomaly, was not the first of his kind Makyu had heard of or encountered. Having spanned the many levels of the mortal plane and the multiverses within for so long, he knew just as well as any other that almost anything is possible. He'd seen such a multitude of races and levels of intelligence that it seem uncanny there would be any living he'd not seen nor heard of. Diclonius was no exception.

Infact, this particular race was one that had some MANY years before held a close and powerful sway over his own heart. However, he had no heart now. Long since were the ties to this realm broken. He had no need for bonds and ties, they'd merely bring difficulty in moving forward. Losing everything wasn't a burden he needed to add any wheight to. Then again, compassion was fading away more and more along with the remainder os his conscious humanity.

He merely sat and watched from afar, along the rise of the horizon line, falling behind the roof of a house, blended with the twilight dusk. The afternoon waned and the two boys collapsed against the buildings wall. They'd been working for hours it seemed, cleaning as it were. Makyu continued to just watch them serenely as they scuffled about, then dropped to theirs backsides. A young girl popped her head out and greeted them, then walked off and dissappeared into the building once more.

His patience had been well toned over the years, a neccesary feat to upkeep his mental strength. Though, even he felt a bit antsy here. Something about this place, just threatened to suffocate him mentally. Memories could drive even the sanest of men batty if not kept in check. As the sun took it's toll on the ridge of the house, Makyu stood up, and dissappeared instantly from the peak of the horizon.
 

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Raynie held a bored and at the same time annoyed expression on her face as she slumped over by the wall of the Acessory Shop. She could hear a long drabble at the back of her head, literally, going on and on and on about something she could care less to figure out right now. "Shut up." She grumbled, her mouth twisting weirdly, but her effort in trying to stop the voice was useless and only seemed to be encourage it even more.

She slowly turned around, now feeling the echoing pain of a migraine coming on, determined to stop this. "Now listen you, I won't have anymore of your squeaking! Got it?!" She yelled, only increasing the pain in her head now as she raised her right hand up and poked her finger against the fuzzy red nose. "Got... It?" She repeated slowly, making sure the Moogle understood. Could moogles understand English anyway?... Meh, I'll think about that later. Raynie turned back around only to be scared half to death by a wide grin on a girl's face. Yuffie Kisaragi. Of all people she had to bump into now, it was the annoying Ninja Yuffie as she called her.

"Slacking off again, Raaaynieee?" Yuffie laughed, teasing the older girl. Raynie rolled her eyes and walked past her enemy and friend. "Oh shush it." She mumbled, not in the mood to be putting up with the Ninja's antics right now. Something was bothering her, it wasn't the Moogle and it wasn't the fact she had lost half of her Munny mysteriously that day, it was something else... But she couldn't quite put her finger on it.

Yuffie tilted her head at Raynie, it was odd that the girl didn't try to fight her or yell back at her at all. Now she was scared, this was highly unlike Raynie, especially when it included her. She watched as the fighter walked toward the World Gates. "Eh? Where ya going?! We got work to do!" Yuffie shouted, receiving a wave from Raynie's hand, dismissing her. "Away! I'll be back later!" Raynie replied, giving one of the doors a slight push before slipping onto the other side of them and toward the Gummi Ship docks.

"Gaaah, Squalls gonna be pissed. ><" Yuffie whined before running back off toward the Second District doors. Raynie on the other hand was looking at all the various ships around, all mostly belonging to Cid. "Now... Which one shall I take?" She said to herself as she walked off onto the dock. I need to get away... Even if for just a while. Gah, I need to calm down first of all... -__-
 

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~Master Makai, we have arrived at Earth...coordinates directly above the Dojo in Japan~


In the darkness of the helm of the ship, one could see only blinking lights. Truth be told, the one that owned this ship liked the darkness... even more so these days. After resting the eyes, one could make out the silhouette of a figure... a male figure, sitting upon a throne-like command chair. He looked at the large screen, showing the dojo that was almost a mile below them directly. Within the next moment, he nodded his head, before standing up.

"Transporting one."

As he spoke those words, the figure disappeared from sight. There was a slight field of green energy that had surrounded him, before it covered him completely, absorbing and then absorbing in on itself. This same field appeared below, outside the Dojo, seemingly "puking" itself up, and the figure along with it... who came out standing. This silver-haired boy was known by one name...

Zay Makai.

He gave a slight sigh before a smirk blessed his handsome but cold features. It was time that he called up an old friend... so he took in a deep breath... and called out one name.

"ZACK!"
 

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"Hmm....wonder where Aya went off to? She said she'd be back for another spar..." Zack's thoughts were quickly interrupted when he heard someone call his name. "Hmm?" He said turning to the sourse, outside.

Veemon cam running, "Hey Zack! Someone outside just called out your name!" He said, "He has silvery-kinda hair and he doesn't look like he's from this world. You know him?"

"Silver hair?" Zack thought. At first he thought it might be the one he was searching for. But that person doesn't know Zack's name. So, he and the others headed for the entrence of the dojo and Zack looked out to see who it was.

Once Zack stood outside the dojo (with the others, looking from the dojo's entrance), he saw the person and quickly remembered. "Zay?" He said to himslef.

"Nyu?" She said looking at Zay.

"A friend of yours Nyu?" Maya asked.

"Hmmm....." Nyu thought.
 

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Zay watched Zack as he appeared with his friends. Nyu, and some girl... how fun this would be. He slowly gave a nod as Zack called his name. He looked over to Nyu and cocked his head, as his eyes widened a little.

"Remember me Nyu? I remember you...and Lucy...she thought that her vectors were badass...until she saw mine..."

He walked up until he was approximately ten feet away from Zack. He stared deep into his eyes, as if searching there for something. He never said anything...didn't even move his body or his face in any way. It was as if he was grabbing onto his soul, locking him into a trance with Zay. One could say that for this moment... time was not a matter, that only these two existed...then it all went back to normal.

"It has been a good while Zack...you know...from travelling the Omniverse... I find that you and Nyu here are the only two that have fully escaped my wrath...twice. You know... that angers me...So, what do you think I should do about this?" He cocked his head to the side, awaiting an answer from Zack.
 

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Maya and [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Masataka watched alongside Nyu, Veemon and Keramon. "Hmmm..." Maya said to herself.

"Hmm? Maya?"
[/FONT][FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Masataka asked.

Maya didn't reply. She jsut looked at Zay for a second, "Well, he's a lot stronger than he appeares. And he and Zack don't appeare to be on too friendly terms... Could be trouble if this gets out of hand..."
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Zack was surprised to see Zay here in Japan...but then again, it shouldn't. He then listened to Zay's words.

"Hmm," Zack said with a slight smirk, "I'd like to suggest some calming medication, but I doubt that'd be an option."

"Joking at a time like this?" Toxin asked.

But Zack didn't respond. "So, did you want to tell me you came here, from wherever you were, to kill Nyu and I?"

"Nyu..." She said to herself as she started to remember...[FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]
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Zay gave a slight smirk as he faked a laugh. "Ha-ha. Oh, you're always so clever Zack... funny though how it seems that you lose everytime you try and fight with me... I guess you're still as weak as you were that long while ago? I would very much like to find out... I've been yearning for a good fight for a long time now..."

With that, Zay rolled his head around and popped his neck, before he went into an odd stance. He was facing Zack from his right side, with his right hand out in a fighting position...but his left hand was folded behind his back, as if he was bowing and fighting at the same time. His legs were spread slightly apart...approximately three feet.

"Let's get it on..."
 

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Name: A.J.
Age: 15
Species: Android-Dog Demon

Weapons:

*~Forget Me Not~*
The Memory Kingdom Key, endowed with power equal to the strength of A.J.'s Heart.
More powerful than an Ultima Keyblade.

*~Demonic Blaster~*
A Blaster which was once a sword left to him by his demon Mother. It takes the shape of the need of the user.


A.J.'s Four Dogfang Swords, made froim his own fangs:

~Excalibur 2~
A Sword with the very essence of the Hero within it

~Kujiku Chouseki /Tidal Crush~
A Sword which possesses the essence of the Ocean within it

~Satsu Jikoku/Time Splitter~
A Sword with the essence of Time within it

~Tsuin Doragon /Twin Dragon~
A Sword split into two blades, containing the essence of Tetsaiga and Tenseiga,
Earth and Heaven

( Note: He can wield all four of these blades, plus the Keyblade, Psychokinetically in Eternal Hero form)

~Drive Forms~

Hero Form / Default / No fusion required.
Gallant Form / Fuse with Guilmon
Magician Form / Fuse with Mana
Super Hero Form / Fuse with any two party members
Eternal Hero Form/ No fusion required, but the more people fused with, the stronger
A.J. becomes.

Equip:
-Hero's Helm-
A.J.'s baseball cap. It seems to hold untapped powers.

-Techno Collar-
Makes A.J. "sit" if the word is spoken by Kagome.

-Third Arm Sash-
A Shen Gong Wu that acts as a Third Arm to it's wearer.

-Reversing Mirror-
A Shen Gong Wu which reflects an enemy's attacks back at them.

-Kamehameha Stone-
Allows A.J. to perform the Icy Kamehameha Wave

~Summons~
-Stitch / Ukelele Charm
-Genie / Lamp Charm
-Alphonse Elric / Soul Anchor Charm
-YuRiPa / Gullwing Charm
-NiGHTS/ Dream Charm
-Kos Mos / Zohar Charm
-Pikachu / Pokeball Charm
-Slimer / Ecto Charm
-Optimus Primal / Primal Charm
-Samus / Metroid Charm
-Cloud / Lifestream Charm

~Friend Summons~
-Irvine
-Axel

Appearance:
Native American with black hair and white tips and blue eyes, he has dog ears on the sides of his head which droop down, and wears a blue backwards baseball cap. He wears his usual jumpsuit with his logo except now it's combined with his new Drive outfit.

Bio: The boy who traveled to great lengths to defeat an evil Hanyou, eventually sealing it behind a Demon Door for all eternity.

A.J. met Zack during that adventure, and he was a great help. Naturally A.J. jumped at the chance to return the favor.

A.J.'s never been to Toudou Academy, but he knows someone there.

Maya Natsume. She was one of A.J.'s summons in his first adventure in the other worlds, and she was a great help, and became a dear friend of A.J.'s.

Party Members~*

_Mana_
The Dark Magician Girl herself. She's looked after A.J. since he was a baby, and cares for him deeply. She's A.J.'s best friend.
Weapon: Dark Magic Rod

_Guilmon_
A red dinosaur digimon from the digital world and A.J.'s second best friend.
No one knows how he came to be in the Feudal Era, because there are no computers there.
Weapon: Gallant Shield

( Waaai....AGAIN! BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! )

>>>

A.J.: *walking up the street, just outisde the Toudou academy* Where are we now?....Looks like another Japanese world.

Guilmon: Lots of Cherry Blossoms. *catches one in the air and eats it* Num!---*sniffs the air*...I smell Zack!---*sniff sniff*---And Maya!

A.J.: Cool, Zacks' He-----MAYA? Maya Natsume?! *Guilmon nods* So she did get back to her world! They must be in this school! C'mon guys, let's go see how they're doing! ^_^ *turns the corner into the school*
 
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