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Well teh sun has burnt my shoulders,but it shall not stop me ;)

Chapter16:Houseflaming​

The Hybrid lay in silence in the Mayor's front room.
"Booooored"G'Tarr announced,breaking the silence.
"I've only really noticed now,that all we do,is lay around,we haven't trained since Rob left"Laura declared,as she sat up.
"We barely trained when Rob was here"Erika dismissed.
"I guess"Laura agreed as she lay back down.
"It's done"the Mayor shrieked as she skipped into her front room.
"What?"Fayth asked,as her and the rest of the Hybrid sat up.
"Your new HQ,the construction is done"Mayor Fallon announced.
The Hybrid jumped up and ran for the door,grabbing the Mayor along the way.
All of them clamberred into the H-Mobile,which sped off to where their new lair was.
"Seen as your not going to be staying with me anymore,can you do me one favour?"the Mayor asked as she sat squashed between Erika and Fayth.
"Depends what it is"Laura replied.
"Well could you take off your masks,just for a second"Mayor Fallon requested.
"No way,no how,not gonna happen"Laura replied.
"Oh alright"the Mayor said,as she sat back,folding her arms.
"Don't get in a huff" Laura orderred.
"I'm not"the Moyr insisted.
"Oh your such a baby"Erika quipped.
"I am not" Mayor Fallon shouted back.
"Fine,your not"Erika replied.
The car screechd to a halt on the outskirts of the city,where a large tower stood.
The Hybrid jumped out of the car and looked up in awe.
It was a tall tower,going straight up,with a large H at the top.
It was a shiny metallic silver,while the windows were a shimmering blue.
"It's nice and all,but is it a little,you know,visible?"Laura asked as she stared at the giant H.
"Yes,but watch this"Mayor Fallon instructed as she picked up a rock.
She threw it at the tower,which revealed a cannon.
The rock was obliterated by a laser beam that shot from the cannon.
"That's just one of the many defensive features"Mayor Fallon anounced proudly.
"Sweet"G'Tarr uttered in awe.
"Now let me show you inside"Mayor said as she openned the doors.
"The first floor is the garage,the second is the training area,third is the girl's floor,fourth is the boys,fifth is where you'll eat and cook and the sixth is the living area" the Mayor informed tjhem,as they went up in the elevator,straight to the top floor.
As they all got out at the top floor,the Mayor handed Laura a remote control.
"This is the key to all doors,over there is the defense core,the current password is "FALLON", which I trust you'll change,I think that's all"she announced afer showing them the defensive grid,in the wall.
Before entering the elevator the Mayor waves goodbye.
She left in the H-Mobile,which dropped her home,then came back instantly and settled in the garage.
"This place is amazing"Fayth declared,as The Hybrid agreed after a proper look around.
"I'm going to go change the password to "CENTRO""Laura announced,as she left the room.
"What sort of crappy `password is Centro?"Erika asked as she went over to the sofa.
"Give Laura a break,your always on her case,give her a chance"Fayth insisted.
"Why should I?She has no idea what she is doing"Erika announced.
"And you could do a better job?"Fayth asked.
"Damn right I could"Erika shouted.
"Get off your high horse,why should you be leader?"Fayth replied.
"Because Chris is our main enemy,I know his weakness',I know more about him then any of you"Erika declared.
"Yeah right,I was his girlfriend, for longer than you even knew him"Fayth counterred.
"Neither of you knew him,not as well as I did"G'Tarr said quietly.
"Shut up G'Tarr"the two girls screamed in unison.
"Did you two know, that up until he was 14 he slept with a stuffed otter, called "Olly"?"G'Tarr asked.
A silence filled the room.
"No?"G'Tarr asked again"Did you know he has a fear of snails?"
"No" the two girls muttered in unison.
"How about the fact that he is emotionly insecure and uses his arrogance and boasting to cover it?"G'Tarr questionned.
Fayth and Erika stared at G'Tarr in awe.
"Said too much,but it had to be said"G'Tarr whisperred as he stormed off.
Fayth and Laura flopped on the couch,with anger in their eyes.
Laura enterred the room,to find the three of them with faces on them,that could break a mirrior.
"Um......."Laura stuttered"what did I miss..................."


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Excellant SS - keep it up. And post another chapter before I go to sleep tonight >.> or I'll have to buy a plane ticket and send some zombie chainsaw wielding chinchillas after you........
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Don't ask.......
 
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Ok it's been 3 dayz and I've been bizzy,so don't get narky xP

anyway another for my folks ;)

Chapter17:Refytial​


The sun was about to rise as The Hybrid lay in their beds,sound asleep.
Laura lay under the covers of her neat bed,Fayth lay spread out under the covers of hers,Erika lay over the cover,huddled up in the cold,Rob lay under his neat covers,while Chris lay in his underwear,half under,half over the blanket,while G'Tarr slept on the floor beside Chris' bed.
Laura was the first awake,she made her way to the bathroom.
Just as she reached the door,a beam of light flew down and swallowed her up.
In turn,the same happenned to each of The Hybrid.
"Where are we?"Chris asked as he lay,on his back,in his underwear,in a dark room.
"I don't know"Rob admitted,as he sat up,in his pyjamas,rubbing his head.
The only one fully clothed, was G'Tarr as all he wore was boots he never removed,the rest of The Hyrbird were in thier underwear,except in Chris' case,who was in his underwear.
"Welcome" a sweet voice announced.
A light shone through the dark room,to reveal a beautiful woman,with long brown hair,sparkling eyes,a slim figure and a tall body.
Her eyes were a light green, she wore a blue dress,which draped from her cleavage,and down as far as her knee's,as a small golden crown lay on her head.
"Who are you?"Erika asked as she stood up.
"I am Clemencia" the woman replied "princess of this planet."
"Planet!!!"Erika exclaimed.
"Yes,Planet Refytial,two solar systems from yours"Clemencia responded.
"Why did you bring us here?" Rob asked.
"I was bored,I wanted company"she replied.
"I'll be your company,anytime"G'Tarr replied.
"Nice" Chris remarked,as he and G'tarr gave each other a high five.
"Godamnitt G'Tarr not with the cannon"Chris shouted as he held his hand in pain.
"Sorry"G'Tarr replied.
"Well,what shall we do first" Clemencia asked "shall we hang out?"
"I don't trust her" Fayth whisperred to Rob.
"I know,but she could be dangerous,we should go along with it,atleast just for now"Rob whisperred back.
"Ok"Fayth replied.
"Um.........ok we'll hang out"Erika declared.
"Where?"Clemencia asked in anticipation.
"Well we don't know........"Laura hesitated.
"Refytial"Clemencia interupted.
"......Refytial very well,in fact,we didn't know it existed"Laura finished.
"Ok,well we can go to the Mall,Cinema,Skatepark,McDonads..."Clemencia listed.
"McDonads?"Chris interrupted.
"Yes,it is an eatery,they serve the nicest Oxarion testicles in the whole galaxy"Clemencia explained.
"Well,we aren't going there"Chris orderred.
"Oh ok"Clemencia folded.
"Em...I guess we can go to the mall"G'Tarr suggested.
"Probably safest"Laura agreed.
"Excellent"Clemncia screeched,as she clicked her fingers.
Before they knew it,they were in giant shopping mall,surrounded by hundreds of stores.
"Is this the biggest Mall in the universe?"Erika asked in excitement.
"Hardly"Clemencia answered "the mall on Fryton is ten times the size of this."
The group sighed in awe,at what they were seeing.
"So what will we do now?"Clemncia asked with excitement in her voice.
"Look around"Rob suggested.
As they trekked through the mall,they noticed how empty it was.
"Why is there nobody else here?"Erika asked as she looked around.
"Well,seen as my father is the King,and my mother the Queen,I simply ask for it to be closed"Clemencia informed them.
"Sweet"Laura uttered.
"So,where do you shop?"Erika asked.
"There"Clemencia repied as she pointed to a shop with the name "Rytong" over the door.
"Ok,then let's go in"Fayth said.
The group ventured into the store,which stretched,a mile down.
"Dear god"Rob muttered.
"I don't want to walk that far,neither does G'Tarr,right G'Tarr?"Chris argued,as he walked on.
G'Tarr didn't reply,so Chris looked over at him to see why.
G'Tarr was staring at Clemencia behind her back,he then sighed.
"Well,well,well"Chris said,as he walked through the store"looks like G'Tarr has a crush....................."


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Yesh another fan(hopefully)

anyway here's a treat two in one day ^^

Chapter18:Alien Love​

"G'Tarr?"Chris said,as he tried to snap G'Tarr out of his trance.
G'Tarr murmerred back.
"G'Tarr?"Chris said,his voice getting louder.
There was no reply this time,as G'Tarr stared blankly at Clemencia.
"G'TARR!"Chris shouted.
G'Tarr awoke from his trance.
"What?Who?Where?Oh Chris,what?"G'Tarr asked.
"Nevermind"Chris replied,as he looked away.
G'Tarr was confused by Chris' dismissal,but soon turned his attention back to Clemencia.
"What's the matter Chris?Jealous?"Erika teased,as she walked alongside Chris.
"No,of course not,they deserve each other"Chris barked.
"Sure"Erika replied.
"Shut up"Chris mumbled,as he stormed ahead.
"Em...Clemencia,this place is great and all,but can we go to a clothes store"Rob suggested.
"Why?"Clemencia asked.
"Well we are still in our pyjamas,and Chris is in his underwear"Rob infromed Clemencia, as he shuddered.
"Oh ok"Clemencia gave in,as she turned in the opposite direction.
"What's wrong with walking around in my underwear?"Chris roared.
"Nothing"Rob squeeked as he walked backwards.
In the clothes shop,Erika was trying on a plaid black skirt,and black t-shirt she picked out.
"Ok G,lift me up,so I can see in the stall"Chris orderred.
Once again G'Tarr didn't reply.
Chris looked around,to find nobody in the store with him.
"G'Tarr?" he shoutd,but there was no reply.
"Laura?"he screamed.
"I'm in stall 3...............DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!"Laura replied.
"Don't flatter yourself"Chris replied"where's Fayth and Rob?"
"They went off to some different stores,they didn't like this place"Laura answered.
"What about G'Tarr and Clemncia?"Chris asked.
"I don't know"Laura shouted over the stall.
"Ok,thanks anyway"Chris replied.
"If Laura is in stall 3 and stalls 1,2,4,6,7,8 and 9 are free,then Erika must be in stall 5"Chris thought to himself as he snuck into stall 6.
Chris clciked his finger,then a mound of rock lifted him up above the stall walls,he giggled in anticipation.
He peaked over the wall,but to his horror it wasn't Erika in the stall.
"G'Tarr,Clemencia,what the hell?"Chris shouted as he fell from the rock.
"You two were making out,your sick"Chris shouted.
"What do you mean,you refer to all the "chicks" you've made out with loads of times,or should I say your "conquests""G'Tarr replied bluntly.
Chris went red-faced,as Erika and Laura poked their heads out of the stalls,to laugh at Chris.
"Damn it,she was in stall 10"Chris mumbled to himself.
"Chris,maybe you should go put some clothes on"Laura suggested.
"Fine"Chris shouted as he stormed off.
Chris wanderred the hollow mall.
"It's kinda creepy,nobody here at all"he muttered to himself as he creeped through the mall.
""The Store of No Return"?"Chris read,from a sign above a store.
Chris ventured in,without giving the name a thought.
He stood in the doorway,to see nothing on the shelves,no storekeeper,nothing.
Suddenly the floor disappeared,and all that cloud be seen was a swirling vortex.
"Crap"Chris uttered as he was sucked into the hole.
Chris hurtled through a colourful tunnel,as potatoes floated past him.
"Potatoes?"Chris wonderred.
"Yes Potatoes"a small dog replied,as he floated past Chris.
"Em...where am I?"Chris asked.
"If I knew that"the dog replied"I wouldn't have been stuck here,for the past 400 years............."


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interesting chapters there SS. Well done and all. Usual amount of humour even when ur abroad. As usual ur chasing the ladies, ur almost as bad as chris ya know that?

Anyways keep em coming and i hope to find out more about this whole secret revival everybody seems to have. and a 400 year old talking dog stuck in a vortex sure seems somewhat unusual but hey, i've heard stranger things. :)
 
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Back from Spain since yesterday,but haven't felt like writing,but now I'm here,so here's a chapter ;)

Chapter19: Drawn Together​

"This?"Rob asked as he stood out of a stall,dressed,in denim jeans,brown shoes,a grey t-shirt,a green light jacket over it,openned to reveal a slim chain dangling from his neck.
"Much better"Fayth assured him,she was dressed in a denim mini skirt,high brown boots and a pink tank top.
"I preferred the other one"Rob moaned.
"The T-shirt that said "Love Machine" on it?"Fayth asked.
"Yeah"Rob replied,as they left the store.
"But you,my friend are not a Love Machine"Fayth sighed.
"Oh yeah"Rob said,as he grabbed Fayth by the head and pressed his lips against hers.
After a brief kiss,he pulled his head away from hers.
"Go get the T-shirt"Fayth giggled.
"Thought so,now how about you and I go somewhere,quieter"Rob suggested as he winked at her.
"Naughty boy"Fayth teased,as Rob dragged her away.
Meanwhile,Erika stepped out of the stall,donned in her new clothes,she walked over to a mirror.
As she spun around,watching herself in the mirror,she asked "what do ya think?"
"Chris?"she asked,as she stopped,to look around for Chris.
"G'Tarr?.........................Clemencia?"she called,as she could not see anybody.
She checked stalls one to four,but found nobody in them.
Erika pulled back the curtain to see G'Tarr and Clemencia kissing tenderly.
"Oh,give it a rest"Erika moaned.
"Hey,just cos you ain't gettin' any"G'Tarr snorted,as he closed the curtain over.
Erika stood on the spot,speachless for a couple of seconds,before leaving the store to look for Chris.
Little did Erika know,Chris was floating in a vortex,with a brown and white colly called Lodger.
"400 years?"Chris asked as he floated alongside the dog.
"Or a week,I don't know,I have no concept of time.........I'm a dog"Lodger quipped.
"Smartass,eh?Well see how smart you are when I fry you"Chris threatenned as he summoned a flame in the palm of his hand.
"Then animal wlefare will be on your case"Lodger argued.
"In a vortex?"Chris dismissed.
"My boy,your smarter than you look"the dog complimented.
"You little bastard"Chris shouted as he grabbed Lodger by the neck and began to throttle him.
"I-it'sss................a-a-a...............comp-p-pliment-t"Lodger gasped.
Chris released hold of the dog.
"Sorry"Chirs said,as he rubbed the back of his neck,nervously.
"It's ok,I'll just have to retract that statement"Lodger replied.
"I'll presume that's a compliment"Chris threatenned.
After a brief silence,a tenson built.
"So..............em,underwear,eh?is that the new fashion?Lodger asked.
"I wish,no I was abducted while in bed"Chris said,as he cheered up.
"Ah"Lodger acknowledged.
"Chris?"Erika called out as she ventured through the mall,until a store caught her attention.
""The Store of No Return""she read from the sign.
"Only Chris would be stupid enough to go in there"Erika said as she ran for the door.
She stood in the middle of the store,when the ground swallowed her whole.
"We should go find the others"G'Tarr suggested,still in Stall4.
"No,they'll be fine"Clemencia said,holding onto G'Tarr's shoulder.
"We should look for them"G'Tarr replied.
"They are fine"Clemencia argued.
"No,were going to look for them"G'Tarr demanded.
"Nooooo!"Clemencia orderred as she pulled G'Tarr to the ground.
She towerred before him,and in front of his shiny black eyes,she morphed.
Wings sprouted from her back,her hair grew,cover her whole back,a tail came out from above her rump.
Her eyes turned a deep red,her teeth sharpened,she remaned the same size and kept the same figure,but her skin turned a light blue.
 
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AAAH! Girl turns from hotty to monster.... I feel sorry for G-tarr his girfriend turned into a monster and since when was Rob a love machine?!! Anyways amazing chapter and thanks for posting on my fan fic...
 
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^^ just returnin favours ^^

Anywayz,one more before bed ^^

Chapter20: Decoy?​

"Erika?" Chris said,as he held Erika still floating,Erika seemed unconcsious.
She slowly openned her eyes to see Chris and a dog standing,well she thought they were standing,beside her.
"Chris?"she murmered,as she tried to sit up.
"Oh, good your awake,I wouldn't try to stand,you wont be able"Chris recomended.
"Why not?"Erika asked,still a little dazed.
"We are floating in a vortex"Chris replied.
Erika's eyes widenned like plates as she looked around at the potatoes floating by.
"Why potatoes?"Erika asked.
"Why not?"Lodger replied.
"It talks"Erika gasped,pointing to Lodger.
"It's getting him to shut up that's the trick"Chris remarked,as Lodger glared at him.
"Where are we anyway?"Erika asked.
"I told you in a vortex"Chris replied bluntly as they floated alongside each other.
"Not knowing where we are,moving towards an unknown destination,reminds of when we first met"Erika declared.
"Yeah,I guess it is,we've been through alot since then,eh?"Chris added.
"I guess we have"Erika noticed.
"But there is still one thing we haven't done"Chris said as he edged closer to Erika.
"Not in front of the dog"Erika said quickly.
"I think that means no"Lodger explained.
"I know what it means"Chris said coldly as he glared at Lodger.
"I never expected our first fight to be like this"G'Tarr screamed,as he ran from a now demon version of Clemencia,flying after him.
G'Tarr ran past an alley between two stores,where Fayth and Rob were.
G'Tarr stopped,and paced back to the gap.
He stared at Rob and Fayth,while in the alley.
"Em........sorry,I don't mean to interrupt the make-out sesion,but..........."before G'Tarr could finish his sentence,Clemencia appeared behind him.
"Eep"G'Tarr sqeeked,before begin to run again.
"Was that Clemencia?"Fayth asked,as shelooked out of the alley.
"Yeah,we better go help G'Tarr"Rob orderred.
"The job comes first eh?"Fayth joked.
"Always"Rob said as he winked,then ran after Clemencia.
Fayth sighed before taking flight,to follow Rob.
Rob caught up to Clemencia easily and lunged on her tail,trying to bring her to a stop.
Fayth assisted with her powers,but Clemencia put up a strong fight.
She spread her wings out full,then swiftly started flapping them,blowing Fayth and Rob away.
They crashed to the ground beside each other.
"What'll we do?"Fayth asked,as she lay on the ground.
"Get G'Tarr away from her,then attack her head on,all three of us"Rob declared.
"What about the other three?"Fayth asked.
"No time"Rob replied,as he bolted upright.
He ran infront of Clemncia and grabbed G'Tarr,and raced to where Fayth was,and dropped him down.
Clemencia turned around,fire in her eyes,she swooped at them,but was met with a beam of energy,which sent her tumbling back,but she nver touched the ground.
After regaining control of her wings she charged at them once again,this time dodging their attacks.
She grabbed G'Tarr and Fayth and pinned them to the ground in her hands.
Rob tried to run but was caught be her tail,which wrapped around him.
As she slowly squeezed the breathe out of them,she heard a voice.
"Have you gotten fat?"the voice said.
Clemencia glared at the person,it was Laura,now wearing a short blue dress,and blue high heels to match.
Clemencia threw the others and charged at Laura headfirst.
As she tried to catch Laura,she went right through her and crashed into the store behind her,getting her wings tangled in the clothes racks.
"Image manipulation,makes everything easier"Laura remarked,she said,as she emerged from behind a pillar where she hid,her duplicant had now dissapeared.
"Thanks"Rob said,as he picked himself up.
"Anytime,now let's find the other two and try and get home"Laura ordered.
"Yeah,Fayth and G'Tarr,you two stay with Clemencia,we'll get the others"Rob said as he and Laura departed,to lok for Chris and Erika.
Meanwhile Erika,Lodger and Chris floated through the vortex.
"How did you get here?"Erika asked,as she floated along.
"My master sent me here as a decoy,to distract whoever fell into the vortex,while he created a machine,to puree there bones,so he could eat them without getting bits stuck in his teeth"Lodger replied.
"What????"Erika screamed"how long until he finishes the machine?"
"About ten minutes ago"Lodger admitted.
Suddently the vortex disappeared and they fell to the ground.
They were in a dank swampland,where a fat green monster sat in a throne made of branches.
"Are these the humans?" he asked,in a snake-like voice.
"Yes"Lodger replied.
"Excellent"he said as he ushered his guards over to Erika and Chris"have them pureed............................."


"It talks"Erika gasped,pointing to Lodger.
"It's getting him to shut up that's the trick.
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