Lion-Hearted [Updated...again]

[Dawninmyheart]

Update:

Another Update:

This is not a KR∆NK production. Critique, please.

 

[King Sora X]

Re: Lion-Hearted

First version does it for me. The second has a nice angle, but the circle over Squall is over-doing it. I can see you ran some levels adjustment layers over this, and it looks good. Though I wish there could've been more effects going on, it still looks good. I think the simple and clean look works very nice for you. The only thing I'd say needs work is that red on the triangle. Aside that, it looks great~

 

[Dawninmyheart]

Re: Lion-Hearted

The second has a nice angle, but the circle over Squall is over-doing it.

That's the o in Leon. ._. Maybe I should use different font...

Thanks for your opinion all the same!

 

[AxelYoYo]

Re: Lion-Hearted

I pefer the first one, without Leon written in it.

The second one would look good if you had just Leon written and no triangle.

 

[Dawninmyheart]

Re: Lion-Hearted

Does a solid colored font do anything for it?

 

[Arausio]

Re: Lion-Hearted [Updated]

this one imo is the best, the solid red color really blends in and opens up the other colors.

 

[Eric]

Re: Lion-Hearted [Updated]

It's kind of boring really. There isn't a lot going on, it must be because of all the negative space. Try cropping the height so that you don't have so much space everywhere.

 

[Amphetamine]

Re: Lion-Hearted [Updated]

don't do the text, and add some lighting effects

 

[Solar]

Re: Lion-Hearted [Updated]

I've been eyeing that first one for too long, may I wear it?

 

[Dawninmyheart]

don't do the text, and add some lighting effects

This what you're looking for?

(^ the light is more on the triangle here)

I've been eyeing that first one for too long, may I wear it?

I'll get back to you on that. I might end up wearing it...